Originally posted by: Live-life
Wow now that was an awesome chapter!
NO kidding...I mean I saw u r pm in humanities class and I was like yay...!!!! your update...and I get to escape the boring "russian revolution written assignment" although I do have to confess I did end up writing some entries while reading this..but my whole attention was on this one 😆 pakka promise
OMG!😲 Naby not cool hun. You must concentrate on your assignment rather than this. And the lengthy comment you wrote, was not required at all. Gosh! I feel so guilty. I hope you've done well in your assignment? This fiction is a fiction, you know what I mean, but the world outside India forums is more real. So please next time, don't do this okay.
The recap was nice as it showed the basic overview of the story till chapter three...preety cool! Helped me be more connected to it. And then to the real update...man I gotta say this it was totally fantabulous (surprise! surprise! don't I always say that word..I think I am overusing it a lot these days 🤔) but Yolo! 😛
So...the update started out really cool...with the farewell party and all...People were sure having lots of booze...I wonder if there were party crashers too 😉😆 but then again who doesn't want to have fun right? But seems like Riya was very emotional in this one...but hey we are all human at the end of the day aren't we? so it's okay to be all senti and emo! blame it all on the gurl hormones and mood swings...
I loved Sid for being such a nice friend and supporting Riya and giving her advice it was nice to see!
and then when he trails off in mid sentence! God! that was a kodak moment...typical desi style...as the heroine walks towards him (Monica😉) with her hair flying and the dress twirling, a shy smile on her face. Hayeee! Lucky man Sid!
And then the convesation with Mrs.Roy! Well...it was a mutual one...*sigh* Riya has seen so much beep...but then again working at cosmos gave her some of the best memories and friends that she could have ever wished for! anD the speech she gave well it was indeed an emotional one 😭 I was in tears by the end of it *sob*...uhhh...memories! They never leave you! Especially the good ones! 😳
Hmm...then her breakdown on Monica's shoulder was heartbreaking...well at some point you gotta let it go na...warna it eat you from the inside!
And Cornwell sounds like a beautiful place! Huh! I wish I could go there to escape those stupid hw! Well I am glad Riya took decided to escape the city for a while kya para wahan ja ke she might find a new inspiration to start a new life!
Well she deserves it so you go gurl! And Jo you are a fantabulous writer! 👏
and awww thank you for dedicating the next update to me I feel so special now hehe! 😆
Jk!...Update soon!
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I can't wait for Arjun's entry omg!!!!! buhahahah! 😆
Thanks for the pm
and and and please please please continue soon!
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Love you!
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