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Posted: 11 years ago
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PART: 1

He came back after a long time but everything is seemed to be new. All are staring at him with moist eyes. He just directly went to his cabin there he saw his teams pic on wall with garlands. Sakshi, Liza, chotu and Aisha are no more. He lit the diya to all and tears made their way. He closed his eyes nd vowed.
" Kisi ko nahi chodunga jo bhi responsible hai tumhari maut ke liye chahe wo ARJUN SURYAKANT RAWTE hi kyun na ho. Uske ek impulsive decision ne tum sab ko maar dala. I promise u all ki woh ab chain ki saans nhi le sakega. Yeh VAADA hai mera tum sabse ACP SAMEER DAMSINGH RATHOD KA VAADA."

After sometime...

DIG: Rathod tumhe jo bhi chahiye le lo but i want etf back in action.

SAMEER: Sir i want Shree first and i need RAWTE too.

DIG: He is out of dept now nd more importantly runaway criminal.

SAMEER: Dismissed all charges against him. I want him means i want.

DIG: Rathod i dont knw why u want him when u hate him and also against him in past abt his joining in etf.

SAMEER: U want ETF and i want him. Choice is urs.

DIG: OK. I vl try to bring him. And what abt other members.

SAMEER: RIYA MUKHERJEE.

DIG: But I dont think she vl join as she left her trainning.

SAMEER: But she is the best in researches. And i want her too.
And dont worry she vl join etf.

DIG: Rathod apart from them u also need a forensic expert, ammunition expert and also a commando. What abt them.

(HE REMEMBERS HIS TEAM.)

SAMEER: I WILL LOOK FOR THEM.

DIG: I Suggest Narain Dogra as Commando and Nandini as Forensic cum Ammunition expert.

SAMEER: NANDINI... U mean ur daughter Nandini. But sir she is just 21.

DIG: Dont go on her age Rathod. She is good at her work.

SAMEER: But sir... Ok..

DIG: They vl meet u tomorrow. And i vl ask shree's transfer for etf.

After meeting Rathod left for office. No case was there to disturb him. So he left early from office. In his way to home he get a phone call and parked his SUV at roadside. There was network problem as it was forest area. He came out of suv and answering phone.

SAMEER: HELLO... hello... Listen i call u later. Here i hv network problem.
Hello...
(Thats when he heard someones running souund through jungle. He look at the direction and soon a girl came runningly and occupied the passanger seat.)

SAMEER: HEY KAUN HO TUM. GET OUT OF CAR NOW.

GIRL: Listen he is following me plz lets go. I dont want to die so early. Abhi to meri shadi bhi nhi hui hai.

SAMEER: KAUN PICHA KAR RAHE HAI?

GIRL: OMG. are u coming ya main tumhe yaha chod kar chale jaau.

He looked at jungle from where she came. He found some movement. At first he thought to check on but thought what if she run away leaving him alone. And started the engine.)

SAMEER: Jana kaha hai?

GIRL: ST. XAVIER GIRLS' HOSTEL.

THEY REACHED HOSTEL.

SAMEER: HOSTEL aa gaya par lagta hai gate close hai. Let me talk to guard.

GIRL: Are u mad raat ke 11 baje hai. Kisi ko pata chala to main phas jaaungi.

SAMEER: Toh itni raat ko bahar nikalti kyun ho.

Girl who thows her hills inside boundry turn to him and replied.

GIRL: Wo kya hai na Mr. Main kisi se milne gayi thi. Isliye late ho gayi. But dont worry ab wo mere sath hai to i wont repeat this.

And called someone named "Bozzo"
And he came out of his suv. Sameer didnt understand.

GIRL: Sorry late ho rahi thi nd koi lift nhi mil rahi thi. Isliye ye sab.

SAMEER: Means koi piche nhi tha.

She nodded her head.

GIRL: SOORRY. Bozzo ki yaad aa rahi thi. Isliye use lene gayi thi. Arre ab main chalti hu. Warna koi aa jaaega.

She jumped inside and her Bozzo follwed her through main gate.

Next morning.
At ETF.

He is back at place doing his work when Rathod entered and smiled seeing his tech back in action. But something was missing.
He go to him.

SAMEER: Welcme back shree.

SHREE: U TOO SIR.

SAMEER: Sab aa gaye.

SHREE: No clue abt them.

SAMEER: Hmm...

Far from hustle bustle of ETF
At Karan's garage

KARAN: Or Sir ji kya kaam karna hai. Gadi to bahut changi hai.

COEHLO: Mujhe Arjun se milna hai.

KARAN: Bulata hun.

Arjun came out of garage and see DIG COEHLO waiting for him.

ARJUN: Agar aap yaha mujhe warn karne aaya hai to meri baat sun lijiye main apna rasta nahi badlne wala.

COEHLO: Tum par lage sare aligation ko hata diya gaya hai. Bas yahi kehna chahta tha.

ARJUN: Aur is meherbani ki wajah.

COEHLO: I want ETF back in action.

ARJUN: SORRY sir but system me rehkar main dubara apne hath nahi badhna chahta. Or main apne maksad tak bhi nhi pahunch paya. Main etf join nahi karunga nd thats final. Aap ja sakte hai.

COEHLO: Is bar sab badal chuka hai. Aur is bar tumhare liye best reseach analyst choose kiya hai.

(a girl enter a big office.)

Wo apne batch ki best analyst thi.

( She enters conference room. All stands to greet her and she occipies her seat.)

Uski nazaro se ek bhi info unchuyi nahi hoti.

(She look into the fearful eyes of her board of director through her black coehl eyes.)

Riya Mukherjee!

(She is the woman of today. RIYA MUKHERJEE)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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SORRY DEAR. IS PART ME NO ARIYA. BUT PROMISE YOU U VL GET ARIYA IN COMING UPDT. AND YA TWO MORE CHARACTER. VIDYUT JAMWAL AS NARAIN DOGRA: HOT AND HAPPENING CMMANDO. NANDINI DUSTIN COEHLO: CHALTI PHIRTI ATOM BOMB.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#23
superb beginning
so DIG wants ETF back in action
n this time with some new members in it
Sameer n Shree are back
while Arjun refused to join
the girl n Sameer's meeting was interesting one
she managed to fool the ETF chief
Riya's entry was awesome
thanks for update!!
cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#24
nice concept and nice start update soon
Edited by pink1 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#25
Wow
super awesome fab update
loveeeit
cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#26
nice concept and
awesome cs...!!
continue soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#27
Interesting Maya dear
liking this plot
PM me next time when u update 😊
Edited by GOLD.A - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#28
nice part
so its the strt from wher ethe new etf will begins the journey
kash cv's also thought like this wy
called back behzaad and siddharth
nw its all done so no point wasting time on that
so in this story i hope arjun and riya dont know each other
thy r gonna meet only ryt
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#29
wow yaar...i can sense rathore anger in this part
i hope everything will be fine between arjun and rathore


but i m eagerly waiting for ariya encounter
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Posted: 11 years ago
#30
Fire!!! Cant wait fr nxt update. Dis is gonna be one of the best ff of ariya

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