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Posted: 11 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: aroojarain

awesome prologue and CS..
very well written..
cont soon..


Thanks for the comment, I am glad that you liked the start.
Will update soon.😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: skrafty

Interesting start

Continue soon


Thanks!!😃😃!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#23

Thank You!!😃!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: Live-life

Awwesome Strart!!

😃
loVEd it!!
sorry for the late reply!! I was out!!
Sadu singh rathore!!!lol! Mr hawa ka jhonka!!
i LOVE both these names!!
sooo cute!! 😆
and Abby is really pretty! 😉
great CS+Prlogue!!
continue soon!
and thanks for the pm!!


I am glad that you loved the way I started the story.
Don't be sorry, I understand!😃
You find the names cute..😆😆aawww,,,,..😆
Will update soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#25
Segment 2


"Hello, hi, how are you?" asked Nonnu.

"Welcome back friends! Last time you met, Sameer and Abigail, the childood enemies, who are bearing each other just because of their families. And today, you will meet some of the other characters of the story. First of all, let me introduce Mr. Arjun Suryakant Rawte. Duniya ko bohot kuch samjhate phirte hain, par khud shayad kuch baatein samajh nahi paate. He's a rebellious cop, son of famous business magnet Mr. Suryakant Rawte. Lets see, what's he doing!" Nonnu smiled cryptically.

Mumbai, Morning 10:00 a.m.

Though, the weather outside was quite cold due to rain, but inside the house, the temperature was really high. No heaters, no warmers, just an angry Arjun Suryakant Rawte is enough to raise temperature.


"Haso..khub haso...Yahi toh karte ho aap, sirf haste rehte ho!" snapped Arjun, looking at Lord Ganesha's idol.

"Aap toh bas yun hi haste rehte ho, wahan ETF mein, aaj pehle baar, pehli baar, main late pohonchunga. Sab aapki wajah se! Arre!! Kya zaroorat thhi aaj baarish karwane ki??" he whined like a child.

"Haan Rathore bolo.." he huffed answering his call.

"Pata hai mujhe! Haan lae ho jaunga, baarish bohot hai aurr traffic jam hai, so I guess, I would be coming late."

"Arre le aaunga na file main, tum apna kaam karo aurr report ki chinta mat karo, main time par submit kar doonga..Ab samjhe ya samjhaoon?" smirked Arjun.

"Pata nahi, inhe doosron ko samjaane ka itna shaunk kyon hai." Nonnu shook his head, and continued, "You know, kabhi kabhi..mere dil mein, yeh khayaal aata hai, ki jab upparwaale ne banaya thha isse, toh kya socha aurr samjha jo banaya isse!! Uff!" Nonnu sighed dramitically and continued, " Aap logon ne pagal bohot dekhe honge, but iss tarah ke pagal se kabhi nahi mille honge..dekhiye.." Nonnu pointed downwards.

"Baba sa, hum pohonch rahe hain wahaan, actually yahaan traffic jam hai, humme nahi lagta hum time par airport pohonch jayenge.." replied Riya. She was going Mumbai finally, to meet her Bhai sa, her best friend, her family and start new phase of her life. Her Baba was already at airport and here, she was struck in the middle of huge traffic.

She hung up the call and heaved a sigh, she wanted to reach Mumbai today only, from the past 5 years she was here, in Delhi and now finally going back with her Baba sa but this traffic..Uff! Looking here and there, she saw some children skating around, on skates and skate-boards. When Riya Rathore decides something, to the hell with everything.

Riya hung her bag-pack on her shoulders, stepped on a skate-board and wooohhsshh...passing through streets, nooks and corners, crossing the traffic, jumping above the cars, she skated efficiently and unbelievably amazing. Finally reaching the airport, just in time, Riya saw her Baba sa, waiting for her outside the airport. Circling around him twice, Riya finally stopped in front of her Baba sa.


"yo-uh.." she whistled, "See Baba sa, pohonch gaye na hum, bilkul sahi waqt par!" she smirked raising her brows and picking up the skate-board from the ground.

"Aap..aap bilkul pagal hain Riya, agar traffic mein phas gayi thi toh kya, hum kal chale jaate, iss tarah, skate-board par..agar aap ko kuch ho jaata toh" her Baba sa, sounded worried.

"Aise kaise kuch ho jaata! Aap jaante hain na, hum apna khyaal rakh sakte hain, after-all I am the Encounter Specialist Riya Pratap Singh Rathore.."

"Wait-wait, agar pata na chala ho, toh main bata doon, Riya and Sameer are siblings!!" added Nonnu.

"Aurr rahi baat kal Mumbai jaane ki..noways Baba sa, ab aurr der nahi, humme Maa sa aurr specially Bhai sa se mile hue kitna waqt beet gaya hai. I can't delay even a mere second to meet Bhai sa. Comeon lets go." said Riya and walked inside the airport.

"Pagal hai aap Riya! Kitna pyaar hai aap mein aurr Sameer mein. Yeh toh acha hai, Suhasini ji (Sameer's and Riya's Maa sa) ne, Sameer ko aapke Mumbai aane ke baare mein kuch nahi bataya, nahi toh woh airport par hi tent laga kar rehne lag jaate!" chuckled Mr. Rathore and walked inside the airport, after-all, they have a flight to catch.

"Kya soch rahe ho?? Teri meri love story ka angle, yaad karegi duniya pal pal...right??" sand Nonnu.

"But but but..sambhal jao, arre ruk jao, oh sambhal jao, aji ruk jao, kyon ki iss angle mein hai triangle!!" Nonnu danced again, specially pointing downwards.

"Surprise.." chirped Arjun, handing Roshini, her favorite baby pink roses.


"Arjun.." said Roshini.

"Aaj kaise waqt mil gaya ACP Saheb ko humse milne ka?" asked Roshini, caressing the roses.

"Bohot mushkil se, main apne busy schedule se time nikaal kar tumse milne aaya hoon aurr tum ho ki..Huh..kaisi girlfriend milli hai mujhe!" Arjun made a face.

"Ab agar boyfriend tumhaare jaisa ho, toh uski khuskismat hai ki meri jaisi girlfriend mile.." replied Roshini.

"Achha Ji.." smirked Arjun, moving forward.

"Haan Ji.." replied Roshini, smiling.

"Ahem ahem.." someone cleared her throat, disturbing Arjun and Roshini's moment.

"Abby tum.." "Abigail aap.." said Arjun and Roshini respectively.

"Ji haan hum!" Abigail shook her head, and continued, "Roshini, agar aap free ho toh andar chale, aapki class shuru hone waali hai, hai na!" smiled Abigail and both Abigail and Roshini started moving inside House of hope, but in between Abigail stopped, turned around and said, "Arjun, aaj lagta hai aap ko traffic rules todne hi padenge, kyon ki Sameer toh office pohonch hi gaye honge but aap, you are late by 2 hours, Mr. Rawte." Arjun's eyes widened and he literally ran towards his SUV, leaving behindgiggling Abigail and Roshini.

"Toh mil liye aap, Arjun, Riya aurr Roshini se! To make things clear let me tell you, Arjun and Riya are ETF Officers of same rank, and Roshini works for House of Hope, under Abigail. Arjun, Roshini ke saath kaafi khush hai, par tab kya hoga, jab Riya uski life mein tornado ki tarah aayegi aurr sab kuch ulat-plat kar degi? What changes will Riya bring in Arjun-Roshini's relationship?" exclaimed Nonnu.

Names-Arjun and Riya and Roshini
Occupation-ETF Officers (Arjun&Riya) and Teacher (Roshini)
Relationship Status-No relation (Arjun&Riya) and romantically involved (Arjun&Roshini)
Edited by vishav - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#26
nice one.. loved it.. thanks for pm..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#27
oye hoyeee!!
kya update thi!! Loved it! 😃
U know me and Nonnu have a lot of things in common😛
Great minds think alike! 😉
Aur hamare ACP sahab ka ghussa! Odi baba!
Ab tak to thermometer phoot chuka hoga! Rofl! 🤣
Kuch cheesein khabhi nahi badalti! 😆
And Riya...well wo bhi apne Bhai ki hi behen hai! 😆
Skate-board huh???Now why am I not surprised! 😳
Awww...Apne bhai se itna pyaar! mein to senti hogayi!
And Ilove the part where Babasa say's the Sameer tent lava ke airport par bait jata! 🤣
wow! Kya pyaar hai bhai behen main! iss pyaar ki keemat tum kya jano duniyawaalon!
😆
And Roshni! Omg! I loved the little moment between her and Arjun! 😳
so cuvetee!!! Awww!
Hawww! ACP sahab pure 2 hours late hog aye! Suraj aaj saroor pashchime se nikla yoga! 😆
but then Love does that to you! You do things you never thought you would in your life!
hehe! 😃

Great update! loved it!🤗
👏
Fantabulous!
Continue soon!
😉
and thanks for the pm!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#28
Awesome
love it
cont soon
thanks for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#29
wow..
awesome update..
loved it..
em loving da way u r introducing each nd eevry character..
so arni in relationship..
wow.. riya so fun loving chirpy girl..
nd rathore nd riya IME siblings..
eagerly waiting for next update..
cont soon :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#30
It's just mind blowing yaar...!!!!
The way u describe each n every character is quite intriguing...!!!!!!
Hmm... so mr.sys is in relationship with Rosh...!!!!
Loved Riya's character a lot...!!!! Bold yet chirpy n childish...!!!! Wow she is an encounter specialist...that's great...!!!!! Eager to knw how she made her place in Arjun's life...!!!!! Also looking frwrd to her n Sam's bonding...!!!!!
Thanks for pm dr...!!!! Continue soon...!!!!!!

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