FF~Relationship Status ~ It's Complicated

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hello everybody!! Here I am, with my new concept. This is going to be quite eventful story😆, craziness at peak, emotional streak, lovey dovey moments, envy and everything will be ajeeb-o-gareeb! I hope you'll enjoy it.

This will include Arjun, Riya, Roshini, Sameer and other characters, here's the first part to the CS+Prologue!

I am going to start with Character Sketch + Prologue, explaining the current status of relationships between the characters. It's a long character sketch cum prologue, so I'll be posting it in parts. Here's the first one!!!

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The sun rays fell on his face and a sparkling light emerged. It looked as if his face was providing glow to the sun rays, lighting the world, providing the sky a tint of pink color, can a morning be more beautiful? If only;

"Hhhaaawwwmmm..." he yawned.

Loking directly in your eyes at the screen, "What? Neend se jaagne ke baad sabhi aise hi lallu dikhte hain..OK? Huh!"

Click his fingers twice in the air, magically he turned from a langoor to angoor!!


"What kya soch rahe ho? Yahi na ki yeh kya bakwaas chal rahi hai, pink sky, magic and what not. Uh-ho!!" he rolled his eyes.

"Hello everybody, I am Nonnu, the God of Love!" Nonnu raised the collars of his shirt.

"Ab kya bataun, aajkal meri halat bohot khraab hai! Yeh..yeh..Mr. Upparwaale, I mean God, inhone logon ko couples bana kar toh bhej diya but unhe milane ki, unmein pyaar ka ehsaas jagaane ki responsibility mujhe de di!" whined Nonnu.

"Ab aap log hi suno, I mean padho ki log mujhse kaisi kaisi requests karte hain!" Nonnu made a childish face and turned on the morning radio (magical one, of-course).

"Bhgwaan, mujhe Mukesh ki girl-friend bohot pasand hai, kuch setting kar do na!"

"Bhgwaan, meri life mein Salmaan Khan jaise handsome, dashing ladke ki entry kara do na!"

"Bhgwaan, meri biwi se mera peecha chudao!"

"Bhgwaan agar aapne mere husband ki baat sunni na, toh main aapka peecha kabhi nahi chodungi"

"Arre baap re!" Nonnu, got scared and switched the radio off.

"Well, ab tak toh aap sab ko andaaza ho hi gaya hoga meri halat ka. Chalo ab main baat par aate hain." Nonnu rubbed his hands and sat on a heart shaped sofa seat.

"Relationship Status!! Facebook craze haan! Aak kal logon ki love life kaafi complicated hai, so is their relationship status. Yeh kahaani 11 logon ki! Unka milta, baatein karna, ladna jhgadana and what not. Chalo let me introduce you to these 11..ek aurr ek gyarah..mere yaara!" sang Nonnu.

"Arre hata, sawan ki ghta.." sang Nonnu, sweeping away the clouds, to get a better view!

Mumbai, Morning ~ 9:00 a.m.

"Sameer, beta..arre humaari baat toh suniye, Sunaina bohot hi..." ran a lady, behind her son, Samer who was busy collecting some files.

"Maa sa, I am late, and I know, Sunaina bohot susheel, sanskaari aurr sundar ladki hai."replied Sameer, putting his laptop in his laptop bag.

"Jab aap jaante hain, toh usse milne mein buraiye hi kya hai? You should meet her once, so that we elders can talk about your marriage!" Sameer's mom, pleaded.

"Sorry, Maa sa, I need to go, I am already late and being the chief of ETF, I am not supposed to reach office late. Juniors par mera impression kharaab ho jayega!" Sameer pecked his Mom's cheek and left.

"Hey bhgwaan, kya karoor main iss ladke ka! App hi iski life mein koi acchi si ladki ki entry karwa dijiye bas, jisse isse pyaar ho jaye aurr yeh shaadi kar le!" Sameer's Mom, folded her hands, up in the air.

Sameer sighed in relief as he bucked his seat belt. "Hey bhgwaan, ab aap hi Maa sa ke zehan se yeh shaadi ki baat nikaliye. I don't want to get married this soon."


"Nahi, mere paas koi factory hai kya, ki idhar ladki manufacture ki aurr udhar, usse ladke ki life mein patak diya! Had hoti hai..toh mille aap ETF ke Chief se, Mr. Sameer Singh Rathore, Prince of Udaygarh and son of Mr. & Mrs. Pratap Singh Rathore. Inki Maa sa chahti hain, ki yeh shaadi kar len, and yeh janaab toh shaadi ke naam se hi door bhagte hain! Uff! Maa-Bete ke beech main phas gaya." sighed Nonnu.

"Next is, Miss Abigail Rai Singhania, waise toh yeh Princess of Devgarh hain, but she is not that head strong, arrogant and snobbish. She's the owner of, "House of Hope" an orphange, old age home, women shelter, all in one, together. Waiting for her Mr. Right, she's like the brightest star in night! Arre wah, yeh toh rhyme kar gaya, chaliye milte hain Miss Abigail urff Abby se.." smiled Nonnu.


"Abigail beta, jaldi kijiye, nashta tayaar hai." yelled Abigail's Mom.

There she stood, hands folded, head covered with her dupatta and muttering something, "Kannu Bhaiya (Lord Krishna), hum aapse aakhiri baar keh rahe hain, ab toh humme humaare Mr. Right se milwa dijiye. Aurr kitna wait karenge hum unki?"

"Abigail beta, jaldi kijiye, Sameer must be coming in a minute or two. Come fast." yelled Abigail's Mom, making Abigail start cursing.

"Sameer..hawa ka jhonka, stupid gadhaa kahin ka! Why..why..why Kannu Bhaiya, why?? Yeh Mr. Hawa ka jhonka, abhi tak zinda kyon hai? Roz mujhe life dene aa jaata hai, aap isse kab lift karoge?? Meri life ka villain, Sadu Singh Rathore.." cursed Abigail, as she made her way towards Sameer's SUV.

"Uff! Ab yeh mujhe murderer bhi banayengi.." added Nonnu.

"Good Morning Abbu Dabbu!" Sameer gritted his teeth.

"Tumse milkar meri Morning good kaise ho sakti hai Sadu?" smirked Abigail.

"Agar itni hi pareshaani hai mujhse, toh roz House of Hope jaane ke liye, mujhse hi lift kyon maangti ho?" smirked Sameer, raising his brows.

"Whatever! Yeh toh Badi Maa (Sameer's Mom) ki wajah se, roz tumhaari shakal dekhkar apna din kharaab karti hoon, warna, Main aurr TUMSE..lift..in your dreams dude!'" Abigail poked Sameer's chest, with her finger.

"Oh really!!" said Sameer.

"Yeah really!!" replied Abigail, hitting Sameer's head with her palm, and this started the famous Dog-Cat fight, both of them started hitting and cursing each other. Bhala ho Sameer ke phone ka, jo sahi waqt par baj gaya, thus stopping Sameer-Abigail's fight!

Up above the skies, Nonnu cried, "Hayee..kya karun main in dono ka?"

"Today you met, Sameer and Abigail, Prince of Udaygarh and Princess of Devgarh. Their families are friends with each other except these two. Sameer and Abigail hate each other, reason nothing in particular. Aakhir kya hoga inka?" questioned Nonnu.

So;

Names - Sameer and Abigail

Occupation - ETF Chief-in-command and Owner of House of Hope

Relationship Status - Childhood Enemies

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Liked it or not, I am really nervous!😳 This is the first part of the CS+Prologue, I hope you enjoyed it. The other parts will be posted soon. Till then, keep smiling and enjoy your life.😃

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Posted: 11 years ago
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its awesome..
just lovely.
ireally enjoyed it.
but jaldi update karna
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Posted: 11 years ago
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liked it
Relationship Status - Childhood Enemies
its super status
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice start.. interesting.. loved it.. thanks for pm..
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Excellent and awesome start.
Loved it a lot.
Continue sooonish... :)
thanks for the pm.
Loved the title.
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Mind blowing start dr...!!!
The title is catchy...!!!!
Abi n Sam's relationship looks quite interesting...!!!!
I think there will be more fun ahead...😉
Thanks for pm dr...!!!! Continue soon...!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Superb prologue and CS. Superb starting. Pls continue soon. Thanks for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ll_megha_ll

its awesome..

just lovely.
ireally enjoyed it.
but jaldi update karna


Thank for commenting!
Will surely update soon!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: atharin

liked it
Relationship Status - Childhood Enemies
its super status


Indeed it is!😆
Thanks, will continue soon..

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