ArNaya SS:Second chance in first love(update pg3--28 dec) - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: zebbie0504

Awesome and beautiful start...
Loved it.
It was really very emotional...
Shanaya really hurt by Arjun's actions...
Arjun had reasons to hurt her...
Continue sooonish... :)
thanks for the pm.


Originally posted by: zebbie0504

The letter was really very emotional.


thanks dear!!
yes she's really hurt
will cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ll_megha_ll

awesome start dear.

do continue soon.
and thanx for the pm.


thanks a lot dear!!😃😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Aww..it ws emotional !!! Arjun's feelings n emotions were beautifully protrayed..loved it! song is 1 of my fav! n shanu's reaction ws 😭 plzz cont soon Rizz
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: aroojarain

nice start..
beautifully written..


thank you!!😊😊
Edited by rizwanaa - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: naz_2012

Aww..it ws emotional !!! Arjun's feelings n emotions were beautifully protrayed..loved it! song is 1 of my fav! n shanu's reaction ws 😭 plzz cont soon Rizz


thanks a lot dear!!
glad you like it 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ShanayaShaleen

res/unress.. Awsummm Nd Beautiful Update Rizy! Perfect Start..👏👏 Take a bow frm my side!!! I loved it...❤️ Arjun's Views wer sooo beautiful nd emotional!!! Awww...He lovez me sooo mucchh ki he left me..so dat i cudnt be hurt!! The fb's wer sooo beautiful!!!! lovd the way...he talked to my anklet!! It was beautifull!!! ❤️ nd den Me! My emotions wer beautifully potrayed by u! I am amazed that u dun know me personally,but still u potray my feelings exacttllyy as I wud react!! Big hug to u for that! ❤️ The letter was emotional..It really brought tears in my eyes! 😭😭 I was teary eyed!! Beautiful...👏👏 I agn read it 3-4 tyms!! 😃 Thankk u soo mucch!! ❤️❤️ The bg song is one of my favorites!! Lets c what fate has in store fr ArNaya! Thanxx fr pm...Continuee Soonz!


thanks a lot Shanu dear!!
i'm really glad that you are liking it
and also a big thanks n🤗 for your your appreciating n motivating words
thanks again!!!😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#17


Hello again...back with another part but a short one.

Thanks a lot for the likes and comments

This ones for Shanaya for being so patient and tolerating my delays.

Plz excuse errors.

Hope you'll like this part


Part 2

2 months pass by, Arjun started working as a martial arts teacher in a school and got few friends like Karan,Simran and Anjali, the little Einstein. He teamed up with them and worked for the people who couldn't get justice.

Meanwhile there was not a single day or moment when he didn't miss her...his Shanaya. It had taken a lot of determination with which he stopped his urge to see and meet her. He knew he was doing wrong with him and her...but he couldn't help.

Although he himself could never forget but somewhere he wished that she forgets him and moves on. He himself was living with her memories but wished that she gets rid of his memories. He knew he was being selfish but still...he was ready for every accusation and punishment from her but he couldn't afford to loose her...she was the only left for whom he was living.

His mind always went back to the moments which they spent together. He remembered the day when he introduced Sameer to her. Both Sameer n Shanaya began to shared the beautiful bond of a brother-sister. He smiled recalling the moments where they both didn't left a single moment to tease him. It seemed as if it became their favorite pass time to pull his leg. They both bro-sis teamed up against him and teased him a lot.

He remembered that how on his b'day she lovingly made the cake for him , while Sameer planned a surprise party for him. She didn't left any moment to make him feel special. She had always made sure that he never becomes sad , remembering his family but whenever he did she used to sit beside him for hrs , holding his hands and listening to his talks silently.

He remembered their silent walks on the beach where they moved held each others hand...her talks, smiles, laughter,...her love for chocolates and how she used to drag him with her to watch her the movies of her favorite actor. Although he never liked films, but only for her he went with her.

Whenever she designed any new software she used to tell him every details about it...while he witnessed her talks silently. She loved shopping and he had to accompany her.

But the reality was a bitter one. She wasn't there with him...he had left her behind breaking his own promises and her trust.

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During one case, Anjali was unable to get through some info and they needed a expert for it.

Anjali, came up with thought and told everyone that she knew one person who could her them...it was her"di..."

Anjali called her and told her di to come to the garage. About half an hr later she came to the garage. Anjali who was standing at the door step, waiting for her saw her coming. She took her inside while the girl looked around taking the view of the place.

Just then Karan and Simran came and Anjali introduced her Shanaya di' to both

Karan n Simran instantly became friends with Shanaya. Just then Karan called out for Arjun informing that Anjali's there was there at the place.

Karan's calling out Arjun's name, surprised Shanaya. But then she kept aside her thoughts as there were no hopes that she could find her Arjun here.

While Arjun came down the stairs while the four of them looked back at him. Arjun was literally surprised to see her in the garage. His steps slowed down, he hadnever thought that he would get to meet her like this. On the other hand, Shanaya was no better. She hadn't expected to meet him like this.

While Karan, introduced both Shanaya's mind only recalled the contents of his letter where he told her forget him...forget everything. Still wanted to rush to his arms and cry her pains out but then she stopped herself...the words of his letter stooped her from doing so.

Arjun didn't know what to say. He was feeling guilty for whatever he did to her. He could see that her beautiful eyes lacked their happiness, although she smiles outwardly but he knew that deep down she was hurt.

Shanaya chose to ignore any talks with him and asked Anjali about the matter where she needed help.

Her ignorance,indifference and her pretending as a stranger to him surely hurt him. Although he himself wished that she forgets and now when she was posing as he was no one to her...was hurting him to core. He too wanted to be with her but then recalling the scene where he lost his team,stopped him.

Shanaya settled down working on the laptop and 15 minutes later she demanded a cheese pizza while our little Einstein demanded her chocolate milkshake. Karan went to fulfill the orders of both the girls while Arjun who stood aside thinking "ab pata chala...Anjali ne sirf isse computers ke saath-saath aisi demands karna kaha se seekha..."

Shanaya who was working but she could feel Arjun's gaze on her.

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To be continued

Thank you!!plz share your views!!

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Posted: 11 years ago
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super awesome update.
loved the write up
thanks for the pm di
loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: pinkerbell

super awesome update.

loved the write up
thanks for the pm di
loved it


thanks Pinku!!
glad you're liking it
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Posted: 11 years ago
#20
Beautiful Rizz...Loved It! Awww...He misses me soo badly! Their fb's wer beautiful! Sply his bday one's! I nd Sam wer lyk bro-Sis who loved to pull his leg! 😆 Her understanding nd love fr him is truly amazinggg! 👏 So Finally,Arjun-Shanaya's confontration! Their emotions wer beautiful...Arjun tries to distance himself frm her,While she just wants to run into his arms and cry her heart out! Arjun's cmnt made me laugh! 😆 Thanxx fr pm..Continuee Real Soon!
Edited by ShanayaShaleen - 11 years ago

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