ArNaya SS:Second chance in first love(update pg3--28 dec)

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hi...starting one more ss which tends to have 5-6 parts.

The story begins form the point where Arjun had lost his team and the system wrongly framed him for their deaths.

Its dedicated to Shanaya.

I hope you all will like it
plz excuse errors

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Part1

It was a new beginning for Arjun Suyakant Rawte. He was walking on an empty lane which would take him to a place where no one knew him nor he knew anyone.

It was heavily raining while he was walking. It seemed as if under the rain drained off his identity and he was just a common man now.

Destiny took a very cruel turn and it took away his identity as ACP Arjun Rawte, his entire team,his best friend Sameer. Now the only one left was her...who was his life,his reason to smile and his strongest support system.

He purposely had broke her trust in him,so that she doesn't comes in the list of the dear ones whom he had already lost. He knew his decision would her hurt her immensely but he couldn't do anything to reduce her pain nor could change his decision.

He just hoped that with time she forgets him and their love and moves on in her life. He knew he was being selfish but he was helpless. He couldn't take her with him, as he wanted to protect her from all the pains and sufferings which she would get to face if she still accompanies him. And just to protect her from that situation,he himself gave her a lot of pain. He broke her trust and all the dreams and in return he wanted that she hates him more than anything and forgets him.

He took out her anklet from his pocket and his mind drifted back to the time where he had first met her in his college. Her beautiful and innocent face, her angelic face and her cute talks became were all an essential part of his life. The sound of her anklets were more than enough to make him realize her presence around him. And her smile was more than enough to erase all of his worries.

Aasmaan tera mera hua
Khwaab ki tarah dhuaan dhuaan
Aasmaan tera mera hua
Saans ki tarah ruaan ruaan

Ho jaaye jahaan tu jaaye
Paaye mujhe hi paaye
Saaye ye mere hain tujh mein samaaye

Saiyaara main saiyaara, Saiyaara tu saiyaara
Sitaaron ke jahaan mein milenge abb yaara


All the memories of their friendship which slowly grew up to love were still fresh in his mind.

Her silly yet cute antics, her smiles,her love for chocolates were something he could never forget. She was the one who told him the meaning of true love and trust.

He couldn't forget all the instances when she stood as his support when he told her about his dreams to become a cop. And when his father stood against him and his dreams but still she stood beside him holding his hand. She always ensured that she would stand as support at every single step and would never leave his side,whatever the circumstances it would be.

He had also promised to be with her and give all the happiness which she deserved. But today, he himself broke all the promises and in the return of her support and love he was giving her tears and sorrows.

He again looked at her anklet and voiced out "I'm really sorry Shanaya...i really am...but didn't have any other choice..."

He then continued his journey for a new life and new beginning.

***********

A few days letter, a girl unlocked the doors of her house and moved inside. She was really happy to come back to her Mumbai, her house and especially back to her love...her Arjun.

She knew unlike her, he must have also missed her a lot and would be eager to meet her.

As she stepped inside the house she found a letter. She kept the luggage down and opened the letter but as soon as she read out its contents her smile faded away and she went on her knees.

A few moments back happiness and smiles was replaced by tears and pain. The letter had already fallen from her hands.

For a moment she thought it was some stupid joke or prank which Arjun was playing and she immediately called him but his phone was switched off. She continued to dial his number 10-15 times but everytime she got the same response while tears continuously rolled down her eyes and till then she had realized that it wasn't any joke.

She again picked up the letter and went through it.

The letter read out:

"jan takk tumhe yeh letter milega...main tumse bahut jaa chukka honga. I know mera yeh decision tumhe bahut takleef dega par I didn't have any other way out. Main pehle hi bahut kuch kho chukka hoon...aur ab tumhe khone ki himmat nhi hain...tumhe khokar main jee nhi paunga Shanaya...isilye aaj se aur abhi se hamare pyar or saare promises khatam...its over Shanaya...its all over...bhul jao mujhe, yeh bhi ki hum kabhi mile the...

Good bye Shanaya...hum ab dobara kabhimhi milenge...I really sorry...

Arjun..."

She looked at her engagement ring and then the letter, and voiced out "kyun kiya aisa Arjun...kyun??ek baar mujhe kuch kehne ka chance takk nhi diya??bas yeh letter chod kar chel gaye...aur sab khatam kar diya??kya itna kamzor tha hamara pyar...ki tumhe iss letter ka sahara lena pada???na toh main tumhe bhul paungi or na main tumhe kabhi maaf nhi karungi Arjun...kabhi bhi nhi...aak takk itna hurt mujhe kisi ne nhi kiya jitna tumne kiya hain..."

Tu jo mila toh yun hua
Ho gayi poori adhoori si duaa
Tu jo gaya, toh le gaya sang tere
Mere jeene ki har wajah

Saiyaara main saiyaara, Saiyaara tu saiyaara
Sitaaron ke jahaan mein milenge abb yaara

******

to be continued

plz do share your views

thank you!!!

part2 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/arjun/3855208/arnaya-ss-second-chance-in-first-love-update-pg3-28-dec?pn=3


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Posted: 12 years ago
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very nice start
beautiful writing
looking forward for more 👍🏼

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice start... Continue soon...Thanks for PM...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: shreya09

very nice start

beautiful writing
looking forward for more 👍🏼


thanks dear😃😃

Originally posted by: Snehajain

Nice start... Continue soon...Thanks for PM...


thank you dear!!😃😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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res/unress.. Awsummm Nd Beautiful Update Rizy! Perfect Start..👏👏 Take a bow frm my side!!! I loved it...❤️ Arjun's Views wer sooo beautiful nd emotional!!! Awww...He lovez me sooo mucchh ki he left me..so dat i cudnt be hurt!! The fb's wer sooo beautiful!!!! lovd the way...he talked to my anklet!! It was beautifull!!! ❤️ nd den Me! My emotions wer beautifully potrayed by u! I am amazed that u dun know me personally,but still u potray my feelings exacttllyy as I wud react!! Big hug to u for that! ❤️ The letter was emotional..It really brought tears in my eyes! 😭😭 I was teary eyed!! Beautiful...👏👏 I agn read it 3-4 tyms!! 😃 Thankk u soo mucch!! ❤️❤️ The bg song is one of my favorites!! Lets c what fate has in store fr ArNaya! Thanxx fr pm...Continuee Soonz!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome start dear.
do continue soon.
and thanx for the pm.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome and beautiful start...
Loved it.
It was really very emotional...
Shanaya really hurt by Arjun's actions...
Arjun had reasons to hurt her...
Continue sooonish... :)
thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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The letter was really very emotional.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow new story.. Nice concept... Arjun leave shanaya.. &now missing her Plz continue soon Thanks 4 pm
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Originally posted by: ariyabestfan

Wow new story.. Nice concept... Arjun leave shanaya.. &now missing her Plz continue soon Thanks 4 pm


thanks a lot!!
glad you liked it 😊

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