Arjun FF: O Ri Chiraiya - Part 11 Pg 39-40, 12-Nov

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Bhavna Antriwale-Gargate

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Posted: 11 years ago

#91

Originally posted by: lizadavidmm
NIce starting...

Wov! Dadu sabke sath gul mil jate h

Haha chikku...bechara sameer!

Ab dada ji ko toh demmit kahne se raha...lol

Aisha ke surprise pe pani pher diya sam ne ..

Bechari aish ka dil tod diya

Aish aur arjun dono ka ek dusre se najre churana!

Khi pyar na ho jaye!! Lol

Very nice nd inyeresting case!

Vaise m tab samjhi baat jab Dr. Avantika ne batya ki vo phle b teen baar pregnent ho chuki thi

Tbi mera dimag thanak gya tha..lol

Uff...its a social sickness...

Gls ki koi value hi ni h

Ladka chahiye...ladke kya aasmaan se tapakege phir...

Khud hi janam de deta apne peth se ladka ...kameena!

Looking to forwarded!

Etf ke hatthe chadega tab pata chalega...ab kar lega paida ladka...

Thanks dear 😊

Well... kya kiya jaaye.. log samajhtey hi nahi hai ki ladka paida karne k liye bhi ladki hi chahiye 😡

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Bhavna Antriwale-Gargate

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Posted: 11 years ago

#92

Originally posted by: ShanayaShaleen
Awsummm Didu..Loved Daadu's Bday Celebration! Loved Sam-Aisha bonding nd teasing! So Aisha joining ETF as research spl!!! ArIsha...😉 Ahum! Ahum! The case is intreasting along wid heartwrenching nd disgusting! How can ppl do such disgusting things!!!! Intrestingg Precapp..Thanxx fr pm! Continuee Soonz!

Thanks dear 😊

Sad but people do that 😡

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Bhavna Antriwale-Gargate

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Posted: 11 years ago

#93

Part 2A

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Dr. Avantika : shayad unhe Pata chal Gaya tha ki hone wala bachcha ek ladki hai...

Everyone is shocked at this statement

Dr. Avantika : Pooja ne baaton baaton mein ek baar bataya tha ki Uska pati beta chahta hai ... Beti nahi aur is baat ko lekar unke beech behes bhi hoti thi ...Isliye dono baar Aisa hua ...

Anger and disgust is clearly visible on everyone's faces at the thought of this heinous act of Rajiv.

Sameer and Arjun look at Aisha who had turned pale hearing this. Sameer keeps his palm on Aisha's hand and shakes his head.

Liza too notices that Shree has got emotional she too keeps her palm on Shree's shoulder and presses it lightly. Shree looks at her and quickly leaves the room and goes to the balcony. Chhotu is quick to notice all this.

Flashback begins *

Ashima (pet name Tinu): Maa 3 baar maine apni bachchiyon ko maar daala... ab aur nahi bardasht hota mujhse... please meri madad kijiye (crying)

Mrs Sen: Tinu, beti samajhne ki koshish karo... wo tumhara pati hai... tumhe poori zindagi uske saath bitani hai... uski baat nahi maanogi to tumhe hi takleef hogi...

Ashima: Wo insaan nahi jaanwar hai maa... mai nahi reh sakti uske saath...

Mr Sen: Nahi beti aisa nahi kehtey... tum janti ho agar usney tumhe chhod diya to samaj mein humari kitni badnami hogi ... Shree k future par bhi kitna bura asar padega...

Shree (chips in): Par baba Tinu di bol rahi hai na ki wo wahan khush nahi hai... kitni takleef mein hai wo...kitna galat ho raha hai uske saath... aur jo future humne dekha nahi hai... uske liye Tinu Di ka present kyun barbad kar rahey hain aap... (annoyed)

Mr Sen: Shree... chup raho.. jab bade baat kar rahey ho tab bachcho ko beech mein nahi bolna chahiye... jao apni padhai karo...

Shree: Par baba...

Mrs Sen: Suna nahi tumne baba ne kya kaha... jao ... (to Ashima) tum ek baat sun lo... ab wohi tumhara ghar hai... wohi tumhare apne hain... yaha is tarah se aakar tumne sirf humein takleef pahunchayi hai aur humari badnami hi karwayi hai... isliye achchha hoga ki chupchap apne ghar jao aur apne pati se maafi mang lo...

Ashima is hurt. She wipes her tears , turns back and walks towards the door but feels dizzy and faints...

Mr and Mrs Sen(scream): Tinu!!!!!

Shree comes and sees Ashima has fainted. They take her to hospital.

Doctors treat her but she is not responding to any treatment. she gains consciousness but looks aimlessly at a wall in the room. doctors diagnose that she has lost her mental balance and advise to admit her to a mental asylum.

Shree stares at the blank face of Ashima and cries

Flashback ends *

While Shree is remembering all this, in the discussion room:

Rathod (furious): dono baar nahi teeno baar ... Shayad uske pati ko Pata chal Gaya tha ki aap is baat par Nazar rakhe Huye hain isliye jab wo teesri baar pregnant Huyi to wo usey aapke paas nahi laaya ... Ek baar uske khilaaf saboot mil jaaye ... To Uska wo haal karunga ki duniya mein koi bhi ek Masoom bachchi Ke saath Aisa karne ka khayaal bhi apne Dimag mein na laa sake (bangs his fist on the table)

Chhotu : Lekin wo Aisa kaise kar sakta hai? Ye Gair kanooni hai ...

Dr. Avantika : aap sahi keh rahi hain ... Hai to ye Gair kanooni ...par paison k laalach mein ...medical profession ko badnaam karne wale aise kayi ghatiya log hain Jo aise illegal pre natal diagnostic centers and illegal abortion centers chalate hain... Aise log badi pahunch bhi rakhtey hain kynki unke patients bhi aisi hi badi families se hotey hain jihne apne business ya family tradition ko chalane k liye waaris chahiye hota hai... Apne So called "vansh" ko agey badhane wala beta ... Ghar ka Chirag chahiye hota hai ... (sarcasm in voice) Aur sabse zyada dukh baat to ye hai ki koi bhi aurat Jo is Jurm ki shikar hoti hai, wo Kabhi jakar inke khilaaf complaint nahi karti... Awaz nahi uthati ...Isliye police k liye inke khilaaf karrwayi karna namumkin ho jata hai ...

Aisha (trying to behave normally) : Lekin ek baat meri samajh mein nahi aa rahi hai ... Ki agar Aisa teen baar hua hai to kya Kabhi Pooja be ye baat apne mata pita ko nahi batayi hogi? Aur agar wo ye jaante they to Unhone Humse ye baat kyun chhupayi?

Arjun : is baat ka Pata to unse dobara poochh teach karne par hi chalega ... Chhotu, kal subah Pooja ke parents to interrogation ke liye bulwao ...

Sameer : Dr. Avantika, humein shayad aapki help ki agey bhi zarurat pad sakti hai ...

Dr. Avantika : Sure officer. Ye mera card hai (gives her card to Rathod) ... Aap Kabhi bhi mujhe contact kar saktey hain ... Agar Mai kisi surgery mein busy rahi to shayad call na receive kar Paun ... Par aap voice message chhod saktey hain ... Message miltey hi Mai aapko contact kar loongi ... (looks at everyone) and Thank you very much...meri baat sun-ne k liye ...

Sameer : Dr Avantika, Thank you to humein kehna chahiye... aapne is case ko naya angle diya... aur humari help ki hai...

Arjun: Ye Shree kahan gaya?

Liza: Shayad usey Tinu di ki yaad aa gayi hogi... (serious and sad)

Chhotu: Tinu di? wo kaun hai?

Liza: uski badi behen... unke saath bhi aisa hi hua tha... 3 baar unka bhi abortion hua... isi wajah se ki unka hone wala bachcha bhi ladki thi... (tears in her eyes too) ...

Chhotu: oh my god... fir kya hua?

Liza narrates them Ashima's incident.

Chhotu: to kya har sunday Shree usi se milne Panvel ke GK mental asylum mein jata hai?

Liza: Haan. aur yehi wajah hai ki Shree apne parents se naraaz hai... unse koi contact nahi rakhna chahta... wo kitni baar usey call kartey hain par wo unse theek se baat nahi karta...

Everyone is emotional. Even Arjun and Rathod feel sad for Shree. But it was Aisha who could actually understand his pain. She is in tears and goes to balcony to talk to Shree.

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Edited by bgargate - 11 years ago

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Part 2B

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Aisha puts her palm on his shoulder.

Aisha: Mai tumhara dard samajh sakti hoon Shree...

Shree(oblivious to her past): Nahi Aisha... tum mera dard labhi nahi samajh sakti... kisi apne ko roz roz thoda thoda karke marte huye dekhne ka dard ... tum nahi samajh sakti...

Aisha is hurt. tears that were stuck in her eyes were flowing now.

Aisha: haan... shayad tum sahi keh rahey ho... mai hi galat hoon... mai kaise samajh sakti hoon tumhara dard... kyunki... mera to koi apna hai hi nahi... na Mata-pita aur na hi bhai behen... mujhe to mere mata pita hospital mein hi chhod ke chale gaye they... kyunki mai ek ladki hoon... unhe bhi to beta hi chahiye tha... tumhari Di k pati ki tarah...

Shree is shocked to know this. He turns to console her... but Aisha runs away from there. Shree feels guilty. He follows her to her cubicle.

Aisha is crying in her cubicle. Shree comes there.

Shree: Aisha I'm really sorry... mujhe nahi pata tha... mai tumhara dil nahi dukhana chahta tha... please mujhe maaf kar do...

Aisha: Its ok Shree... mai samajh sakti hoon... mai bhi tumhari jagah hoti to shayad yehi karti... bas tumhari hi tarah... is case se mere bhi purane zakhm taaza ho gaye...par mujhe koi farak nahi padta (wipes her tears) Par tum fikar mat karo Shree... hum is case mein apni poori taaqat laga denge...

Sameer comes there.

Sameer: Mai jaanta hoon ki tum dono is case ko lekar bahut jazbaati ho gaye ho ... lekin ye waqt kamzor padne ka nahi hai... Shree!!Sab theek ho jayega ... tumhari di bilkul theek ho jayegi... socho kam se kam uski jaan to bach gayi... Pooja ko dekho... bechari ki jaan hi chali gayi...

Shree (sobbing): aap sahi keh rahey hain sir par ... Pooja to mar gayi... par meri di... wo to roz mar rahi hai ... thoda thoda... aur mai unhe sirf is haalat mein dekh sakta hoon...par kuch kar nahi sakta unke liye (breaks into crying again) ... bahut helpless feel karta hoon sir... jab mai unse milne jata hoon... wo bas sirf ek direction mein dekhti rehti hain... aur sabse zyada takleef mujhe tab hoti hai jab wo mujhe pehchanti nahi... meri di jo mujhe itna pyaar karti thi... mujhe sabse achchhe se janti thi... ki mai unke samne rahoon ya nahi... mere dil ka haal unhe pata hota tha... aaj wohi di mujhe dekhkar bhi mujhse anjaan hain

Sameer: Shree tum ek ETF officer ho... ek bahut hi kaabil tech expert...agar tum is tarah kamzor pad jaoge... to Pooja ko insaaf dilwane mein humari help kaise karoge? Tumhari Didi jab poori tarah se theek ho jayegi... aur jab unhe pata chalega ki... unhi ki tarah is ghinaune jurm ki shikar ek ladki ko tumne insaaf dilwaya hai... to unhe tum par kitna garv hoga... Be strong Shree (puts his hand oh Shree's head and ruffles his hair)

Shree (wipes his tears): Right sir... mai is tarah kamzor nahi pad sakta... mai poori koshish karunga...

Aisha puts her hand on Shrees shoulder and hugged him sideways. He looked at her and she nodded to assure him the everything will be fine.

After he got job and became independent, he was living away from his parents. There was no elderly person with him who would comfort him like Sameer did now just like an elder brother, a father figure. And at the same time Aisha's past touched him and he was amazed at her strength.

Sameer : Good (turns back to leave)

Shree: Sir...

Sameer (turns again to look at Shree): hmmm?

Shree: Thank you sir ... aaj aapne jis tarah mere sar par haath rakha... uske liye mai bahut saalon se taras gaya tha... is haadse ki wajah se mai apni family se door ho gaya tha na... aaj laga ki mujhe meri family wapas mil gayi hai...

Sameer(smiling): hum 24 mein se 15-18 ghante saath bitate hain Shree... mere liye to meri poori team hi ek family hai... ab chalein? der ho gayi hai... baki kaam kal kartey hain...

Chhotu, Arjun, Liza and Avantika hear all this conversation standing outside Aisha's cubicle.

Sameer: Chalo team, kal Mr and Mrs Saxena k interrogation ke baad hi agey ka course of action decide karenge, abhi sab ghar chaltey hain... its too late...

Arjun: tum sab jao... mujhe thoda kaam hai

Sameer gives Arjun an annoyed look but Arjun ignores him and goes into his cabin.

Aisha looks at Arjun going.

Aisha: Mujhe bhi thoda kaam hai sir... mai der se aaungi...

Sameer glares at her and shrugs.

Chhotu, Liza and Shree look at Aisha while she is looking at Arjun and then give each other a funny look.

Sameer turns too Dr. Avantika and offers her lift, she hesitates but later agrees.

Chhotu, Liza, Shree and Aisha look at each other.

Chhotu (whispers in Liza's ears): Kya baat hai... pehli hi mulaqat mein sir ne is Doctor ko lift offer ki hai?

Liza (whispers back): nahi... wo to kabhi kabhi mujhe bhi drop kar dete hain..

Chhotu: par aaj baat kuch aur hai...aaj Rathod sir smile bhi kuch zyada hi kar rahey hain... kahin wo is doctor par chance to nahi maar rahey?

Liza nudges him angrily.

Sameer(to Dr. Avantika): Chalein Dr. Avantika?

Avantika (impressed by Sameer's leadership skills and his compassionate nature) : Chaliye...

Chhotu, Liza, Shree and Aisha look at Sameer leaving with Avantika and give each other a funny look.

Chhotu, Liza and Shree too leave.

Sameer drops Avantika home.

Avantika thinks about Sameer.

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Next day: In the interrogation room :

Aisha : humein Pata chala hai ki pichhle 3 saalon mein 3 baar Pooja ka miscarriage hua tha ... Kya ye sahi hai?

Pooja's mother is nervous.

Pooja's mom : Ji haan ...

Aisha : kaise Huye ye teeno miscarriages?

Pooja's mom (nervously) : wo... Wo uska accident hua tha

Aisha : kaise?

Pooja's mom (nervously) : wo mandir ki seedhiyon se Fisal gayi thi ...

Aisha : teeno baar?

Pooja's mom is scared. Pooja's dad is confused.

Aisha (sarcastically) : kamaal hai ... Pehli baar wo jis mandir ki seedhiyon se Fisal gayi thi aur Usne apna bachcha khoya, aap log dobara usey usi mandir Lekar Gaye? Aur dobara fir se jab wohi haadsa hua, to uske baad aap teesri baar bhi usey wahin Lekar Gaye ... Taki fir se Aisa ho?

Pooja's dad: ji exactly kya hua ye to humein bhi pata nahi... humein to ye baat Rajiv ne batayi... hum bhi is baat se hairan they... Asha... tum to gayi thi na uske saath ek baar... kya hua tha?

Pooja's mom is silent and scared.

Pooja's mom : haan gayi to thi... par mujhe theek se yaad nahi hai... hum log bas seedhiyan utar rahey they aur achanak uska pair fisal gaya...

Aisha: yaad kaise aayega Mrs Saxena... jo hadsa kabhi hua hi nahi... wo aap ko kaise yaad aa sakta hai?

Pooja's dad is confused.

Pooja's dad: kya matlab?

Aisha: matlab to ab Mrs Saxena hi batayengi... mai aapse dobara poochh rahi hoon Mrs Saxena ki Pooja k teen baar miscarriages kaise huye? aur is baar sirf sach boliye warna nateeja bahut bura hoga...

Mrs Saxena is quiet and nervous.

Aisha: teeno baar beti hone wali thi na? isliye abortion karwa diya tha... hai na?

Mrs Saxena is shocked.

Mrs Saxena: Ji ?

Aisha: Pooja ne aapko sach bataya tha na?

tears well up in Mrs Saxena's eyes and she looks down.

Aisha: Kyun Mrs Saxena? ek maa hokar bhi aap apni beti ka dard kyu nahi samajh payi?

Mrs Saxena starts crying.

Mrs Saxena(crying): haan... mai janti thi sach aur apni beti ka dard bhi samajhti thi... par uska ghar ujadtey huye nahi dekh sakti thi... Rajiv ka ghar parivar bahut achchha hai... wo khud bhi bahut achchha hai... unhone dahej bhi nahi manga tha... padhe likhe aur sanskari log hain... ye sab dekh kar humne Pooja ki shadi Rajiv se karwayi thi...

(a pause in between)

Mrs Saxena: sab kuch theek chal raha tha... dono bahut khush bhi they... fir ek din pata chala ki Pooja maa ban-ne wali hai... hum sab bahut khush huye... par ek din mai jab Pooja se milne gayi to dekha ki Rajiv aur Pooja k beech behes ho rahi thi

Flashback begins *

Rajiv: Pooja tumhe ek baar kahi huyi baat samajh mein nahi aati kya?

Pooja: par Rajiv aap jo keh rahey hain wo galat hai... aur kanooni taur par jurm hai...mai aisa kabhi nahi hone doongi...

Rajiv: tum mujhe kanoon ki dhamki de rahi ho? theek hai... to mai wo karunga jo kanooni hai... mai tumhe divorce de doonga... wo to gair kanooni nahi hai na?

Pooja: Rajiv, aap jantey hai aapne kitni badi baat kahi hai? (tears in her eyes) aap itni si baat k liye mujhe divorce de denge? mai soch bhi nahi sakti thi ki aapki soch itni ghatiya hai...Theek hai... mujhe bhi nahi rehna aap ke saath...

Mrs Saxena: Pooja, beti ye kya keh rahi ho tum? ye koi tareeka hua apne pati se baat karne ka?

Pooja: mummy, achchha hua aap aa gayi... mujhe is aadmi k saath nahi rehna hai jo aurton ki izzat karna nahi janta...

Rajiv: Mai jo keh raha hoon iska matlab ye bilkul nahi hai ki mai aurton ki izzat nahi karta... bas mai sirf itna chahta hoon ki humara pehla bachcha beta ho... aur ismein mujhe kuch galat nahi lagta...(arrogantly and adamantly)

Mrs Saxena: Rajiv beta, ye aap kya keh rahey hain? aaj kal kaun bete aur beti mein fark karta hai... humari do betiyan hain... Pooja aur Neha... aur humein un dono par garv hai...

Rajiv: mujhe is baat par koi behes nahi karni hai... agar aapko apni beti par garv hai to isey apne saath le jaiye...mai divorce papers bhijwa doonga...

Mrs Saxena: nahi nahi beta... aisa mat kaho... dekho mai samajh rahi hoon tumhari baat ko... par...

Rajiv: agar aap sach mein samajhh rahi hain meri baat ko aur nahi chahti ki ye divorce ho to apni beti ko samjhaiye...ki mai jaisa kehta hoon waisa karey... ek pre natal diagnosis karwa le...agar usmein pata chalta hai ki beta hone wala hai to theek hai... warna...

Pooja(angrily): warna... warna kya?

Rajiv: abortion... yehi ek option hai...

Pooja: nahi... kabhi nahi... mai apne bachche ko nahi maar sakti...

Mrs Saxena: shaant ho jao Pooja... is haalat mein gussa karna tumhare aur hone wale bachche k liye theek nahi hai...

Rajiv leaves the house in anger...

Mrs Saxena: Pooja beti mai samajh rahi hoon tumhare jazbaato ko... mai bhi tumhari maa hoon aur mujhe tum par garv hai... mai tumse bahut pyar karti hoon aur tumhara ghar ujadtey huye nahi dekh sakti... is liye...(embarrased) Rajiv ki baat maan lo beti...

Pooja(shocked): Mummy... aapse mujhe ye ummeed bilkul nahi thi... aap ye keh rahi hain?

Mrs Saxena: beti diagnosis karwane mein kya harz hai? zaruri to nahi ki ladki ho... ladka bhi to ho sakta haina?

Pooja (starts crying by now): aur agar beti huyi to? maar daaloon usey? kaise maummy? aap aisa soch bhi kaise sakti hain?

Mrs Saxena: beti mujhe sirf tumhari hi nahi... tumhare papa ki bhi fikar hai... tum to janti ho wo heart patient hain... agar rajiv ne sachmuch tumhe divorce de diya to wo ye sadma bardasht nahi kar payenge... agar unhe kuch ho gaya to?...Aur Neha... uske future ka kya?.. nahi beti... agar tumhe apne papa aur behen ki fikar hai to please Rajiv ki baat maan lo (starts crying)

Pooja is in dilemma. If she chooses to go against Rajiv, this might shock her father and if she tries to save her father she might have to put her child in danger.

Rajiv comes back and Mrs Saxena leaves.

Rajiv: to kya faisla hai tumhara?

Pooja (wipes her tears): mai aapki baat maan-ne ko tayar hoon... lekin iska matlab ye nahi hai ki mai aapse dar gayi... ye sirf main apne papa ki health ki khatir kar rahi hoon.

Flashback ends *

Mrs Saxena is crying.

Mrs Saxena: aur fir wohi hua jo Pooja nahi chahti thi...

Sameer (angrily): to aapne apne pati k heart patient hone ka bahana bana ke Pooja ko emotionally blackmail kiya ... aur usey majboor kiya us girey huye insaan ki baat maan-kar apni bachchi ki jaan lene k liye... sharm aani chahiye aapko Mrs. Saxena... aap aisa kaise kar sakti hain?

Arjun: Aur aisa do baar aur hua...

Mrs Saxena (sobbing): Ji haan...

Arjun: aur jab wo chauthi baar pregnant huyi to usney is baar kisi ko is baat ka pata nahi chalney diya... wo apne bachche ko bachana chahti thi... par shayad Rajiv ko is baat ka pata chal gaya... aur usney Pooja ko maar daala aur laash us gali mein fenk kar ye kahani banayi...

Aisha: Pooja aur uske ajanme bachchon ki maut ka jitna zimmedar Rajiv hai ... utni hi aap bhi hain Mrs Saxena... disgusting...

Sameer: Us illegal diagnosis and abortion centre ka naam aur pata bataiye...

Mrs Saxena: VJ hospital... wo Lonavla aur Khandala ke beech mein, highway se kareeb 5 Km Andar jakar hai... is hospital ka board laga hai highway par jahan se andar jane k liye turn lena hai...

Sameer: iska matlab aap bhi wahan gayi thi Pooja aur Rajiv ke saath

Mrs Saxena is ashamed and looks down.

Sameer, Aisha and Arjun give her a disgusting look.

Shree who was listening to all this from outside, storms inside the room and confronts Mrs Saxena

Shree (shouting angrily): aap to Pooja ki Maa hai na... aur Aap thi wahan jab aapki beti Pooja aur uski hone wali bachchi ke saath ye anyay hua? Kitna royi hogi Pooja... gidgidayi hogi... ki uski madad kijiye... uski bachchi ko bacha lijiye... bacha sakti thi aap... lekin nahi... itni patthar dil kaise ho sakti hain aap? ... aap Maa kehlane k laayak hi nahi hain... aur Maa to kya aap aurat kehlane k layak bhi nahi hain... sharm aani chahiye aapko Mrs Saxena ... aap khud zimmedar hai Pooja ki maut ki... Pooja aapko kabhi maaf nahi karegi...kabhi nahi...

Mrs Saxena starts crying.

Mr Saxena(shocked and hurt): Asha... mujhe tumse ye ummeed nahi thi... arre tumne meri beemari ka bahana banaya... kyun? tumne ye socha bhi kaise? ... tum usi din Pooja ko lekar ghar kyun nahi aa gayi... meri beti ki sachchi khushiyo se badhkar mere liye kuch nahi hai... tumne mujhe bataya kyun nahi ki wo Rajiv ke saath khush nahi hai... mai usey us nark mein nahi rehne deta... dekho tumhari us galti ki wajah se kya anarth ho gaya... (starts crying)

Sameer and Arjun put their hands on Shree's shoulders to calm him down

Sameer: Mrs Saxena, is case ki investigation hone tak aap humari hirasat mein rahengi (to Aisha) Aisha, inhe le jao

Aisha : Right sir

Sameer: Mr Saxena... humein aapse hamdardi hai... aap ja saktey hain... zarurat padey to hum aapko fir bulayenge

Mr Saxena leaves crying.

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Part 2C

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Arjun and Sameer in Sameer's cabin

Sameer: naam aur pata to mil gaya hai us hospital ka par bina kisi saboot aur motive k hum waha raid nahi daal saktey...

Arjun: sahi kaha tumne... humein kuch to karna hoga...

Both thinking.

Sameer: Dr. Avantika... unse poochh ke dekhtey hain... kya wo humein koi help kar sakti hain

Arjun: hmmm... koshish kartey hain

Sameer takes out Dr. Avantika's card from his wallet and dials Dr Avantika's number.

Dr Avantika picks up the call

Dr Avantika: Hello

Sameer: Dr. Avantika, ACP Rathod here... is it a good time to talk?

Dr Avantika: Ji kahiye ACP Rathod... kya help kar sakti hoon mai aapki?

Sameer: Humne Pooja ki maa ko interrogate kiya hai... aur humein us illegal diagnosis and abortion centre ka naam aur pata bhi mil gaya hai... par bina kisi saboot ke hum unpar koi action nahi le saktey ... kya aap humari kuch help kar sakti hain?

Dr Avantika: Is it fine agar mai ek ghante mein aapke office aa jaun? fir discuss kartey hain...

Sameer: OK... fine... bye

Dr Avantika: bye

Call disconnected.

Sameer: wo ek ghante mein yaha aa rahi hai... fir dekhtey hain...

Arjun: Theek hai...

Both of them get up to go out and they just happen to look at Shree who is lost in his thoughts. They sympathize with him.

Shree remembers good times spent with his sister.

Flashback begins *

Shot 1: Shree sitting angrily and Ashima tries to feed him his favorite fish...

Shot 2: Shree running with Ashima's book in hand and Ashima running behind him to get her book back

Shot 3: Ashima putting oil in Shree's hair

Shot 4: Shree sleeping with his head in Ashima's lap and Ashima patting his head (thapki dena - in hindi)

Flashback ends *

Sameer and Arjun decide to go and talk to Shree but they see Aisha and Chhotu come to his desk. They are assured that they will cheer up Shree and look at them bonding like friends.

Aisha, Liza and Chhotu come to Shree's desk and chit chat to divert him. He again apologizes to Aisha and Liza and Chhotu too get to know about Aisha's past. They get into a group hug and promise each other that they will always be together.

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After sometime Dr Avantika comes.

In the discussion room.

Dr Avantika: maine socha is baare mein aur mujhe ek idea aaya... kyun na ek sting operation kiya jaaye... matlab ek pregnant aurat us hospital mein ek hidden camera lekar jaaye aur wahan k doctors jab is illegal process ke baare mein boley tab wo record kar liya jaaye... to ye unke khilaaf bahut bada saboot hoga... aur fir uske adhar par aap us hospital mein raid kar saktey hain aur unke khilaaf action bhi le saktey hain...

Sameer: Great idea Dr Avantika, par kya aap apni kisi aisi patient ko janti hain jo pregnant ho aur humari help kar sakey is sting operation mein...

Dr Avantika: mai koshish karti hoon...

Chhotu: kitne mahine ki pregnancy honi chahiye is diagnosis ke liye doctor?

Dr Avantika: kam se kanm 12 - 14 weeks... yani 3 months se upar...

Chhotu: sir, mere pados mein ek family rehti hai... unki bahu bhi abhi pregnant hai... mai unse poochh k dekhun?

Rathod: hmmm... koshish karke dekhtey hain...

Chhotu calls his neighbor Rohit.

Rohit: hello Chhotu... bol kaisa hai?

Chhotu: Mai theek hoon Rohit ... tu kaisa hai? aur bhabhi kaisi hai?

Rohit: sab majein mein... tu bata ... is waqt kaise phone kiya? ghar par to tu milta hi nahi hai?

Chhotu: haan re... wo der se ghar aata hoon isliye ghar par nahi mil pata... par sun... ek kaam tha tujhse... teri help chahiye thi...I hope tu manaa nahi karega...

Rohit: Chhotu... aisa kyun bol raha hai dost? bol kya baat hai?

Chhotu explains him the situation that they are investigating a murder case where they have found a lead to a female feticide racket... and he asks his help to get a sting operation

Rohit: Tu fikar mat kar Chhotu... mai zarur teri help karunga... par yakeen nahi hota yaar... ki aise girey huye log bhi hotey hain duniya mein...aur haan, teri bhabhi ki pregnancy ke 13 weeks ho gaye hain... aur jaisa teri doctor ne bataya... ye bilkul sahi time hai... bol kab jana hai?

Chhotu: Thanks dost...

Rohit: arre... ye bhi koi thanks bolne wali baat hai? tu aur teri team humare samaj ki liye din raat ek karke, apni jaan khatre mein daal k lad rahe hain... to kya humara itna bhi farz nahi banta? tu bas bata kab jana hai

Chhotu: theek hai ... mai tujhe batata hoon... chal... abhi phone rakhta hoon...bye

Rohit: bye

call is disconnected

Chhotu : sir good news... mera dost humari help karne ko tayar hai...

Sameer: That's great Chhotu... Dr Avantika, kya ab hum aagey badh saktey hain?

Dr Avantika: ji Mr Rathod... mera kal off day hai... agar kal Chhotu ji ka dost aur unki wife se agar mai mil saku to mai unhe samjha doongi ki waha kya sawaal karne

hain... aur aap bhi unhe bata dijiyega ki aapki kya requirements hain... uskey baad aap aagey ki planning kar saktey hain...

Sameer: Theek hai... hum kal miltey hai... subah 10 baje theek rahega Dr Avantika?

Dr Avantika: ji... theek rahega...

Sameer: Chhotu, tum apne dost aur uski patni ko kal subah 10 baje yaha bula lena...Shree, tum sting operation ki tayari karo... camera, microphones kin accessories mein lagana sahi hoga, wo sab plan karo... Aisha, tum mark kiye huye notes tayar rakho... ab is racket ka bhanda fod ke hi dam lenge...

Chhotu, Aisha and Shree: right sir

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Next day at 10 AM in ETF discussion room.

Chhotu: Aao Rohit, Preeti Bhabhi

"Rohit Chaudhri - Chhotu's neighbor and friend"

"Preeti Chaudhri - Rohit's wife"

Chhotu: Ye Rathod sir hain, Ye Arjun sir, Ye Aisha, Shree aur Liza... aur ye Dr Avantika hain... aur ye mera dost hai Rohit Chaudhri aur uski wife, Preeti bhabhi..

Rohit and Preeti: Hello

Sameer: Thank you Rohit aur Preeti... tum dono ek bahut achchha kaam kar rahe ho...

Rohit: please Thank you mat kahiye sir... aise ghinaune jurm ke khilaaf kadam uthane mein agar hum aapke kuch kaam aa sakey to ye humare liye garv ki baat hogi...

Everyone smiles.

Dr. Avantika explains everything to Rohit and Preeti. They plan to call up the VJ hospital and ask for appointment.

Rohit calls up VJ hospital

Receptionist in hospital: Hello VJ hospital, how may I help you?

Rohit: Ji mera naam Rahul hai... mai apni wife ko apke hospital mein check up k liye laana chahta hoon... uski pregnancy ka 13th week chal raha hai... Dr Varun Jaiswal ka bahut naam suna hai... wo bahut achchhe doctor hain...

Receptionist in hospital: Dr Varun se aap appointment lekar hi mil saktey hain... aap next monday subah 11 baje aa saktey hain?

Rohit: ji mai aajaunga... aap appointment fix kar dijiye

Receptionist in hospital: theek hai Mr Rahul?

Rohit: Ji Rahul Singh

Receptionist in hospital: theek hai.. aapki appointment fix hai... monday subah 11 baje...

Rohit: Ji thank you...

Call disconnected.

Arjun: Aaj wednesday hai... humare paas 5 din hain...

Sameer: good going... Rohit, Preeti, Monday subah 8 baje hum Chhotu ke ghar aa jayenge aur Shree tum dono ko camera aur microphone ki accessories de dega aur Dr Avantika ne aapko bata hi diya hai ki waha jakar kya sawaal poochhne hain... Monday ko miltey hain... aap dono apna khayal rakhiye ... aur fikar mat kijiye... koi problem nahi hogi... hum hain aapke saath

Rohit and Preeti thank them and leave.

Sameer: Its almost lunch time team. aaj thoda relax time mila hai... aaram se lunch kar lijiye... pata nahi kal koi naya case na aa jaye...

Everyone smiles.

Shree, Chhotu and Aisha go to their desks. Arjun goes to his cabin and Liza goes to her lab.

Its just Rathod and Dr Avantika in the discussion room.

Sameer was just waiting for Dr Avantika to leave but she was not leaving and just smiling at Sameer.

Sameer was uncomfortable but smiled at Dr Avantika. He was not able to tell her to leave. He thought it to be rude.

Sameer: aapko hospital nahi jaana?

Dr Avantika: maine bataya tha na... aaj mera off day hai...

Sameer(embarrased): ohh i'm sorry... mai bhool gaya... (gives a funny look to Dr Avantika)

Dr Avantika understands that he wants her to leave but she wanted to go for lunch with him

Dr Avantika: Aap lunch kaha kartey hain? i mean aap tiffin laatey hain ghar se ya yaha canteen mein?

Sameer: aaj subah jaldi nikla tha ghar se to tiffin nahi laaya... ab canteen mein hi kuch khaa loonga... waise roz tiffin laata hoon

Dr Avantika: agar aisa hai to... if u dont mind... kya hum saath mein lunch kar saktey hain?

Sameer(shocked): Ji?

Dr Avantika: ji yahi paas mein ek bahut achchha restaurant khula hai... hum wahan khana khane ja saktey hain? aur aaj apke paas thoda time bhi hai... to... wo aapne mujhe usdin raat ko ghar drop kiya tha na... aur mai aapko ghar par invite karke ek coffee bhi offer nahi kar payi...der ho gayi thi na...

Sameer is still in a shock.

Sameer(thinking): kaha fas gaya yaar... is ladki ko ek baar lift di thi gentleman ban kar... kahi ye us baat ka kuch galat matlab to nahi samajh rahi hai? ab kya karoon? kaise peechha chhudaun issey?

Sameer: ohhh... aap to formal ho rahi hain Dr Avantika... ek zimmedar police officer hone k naate ye to mera farz hai... mai to apni team ki lady officers ko bhi ghar drop karta hoon agar kabhi der ho jati hai to... unki safety bhi to meri zimmedari hai chief hone ki naate... par actually ek baat sahi kahi aapne... aaj bahut free time mila hai humein lunch ke waqt... mai to infact apni team ke saath lunch karneki soch raha tha... waise to hum yaha canteen mein hi saath khana kha lete... par aap agar keh rahi hain ki wo restaurant achchha hai to... mai sabko bula leta hoon... hum sab chaltey hain waha...

Dr Avantika (surprised and visibly disappointed): Ji ?

Sameer: Ji haan... aapko koi problem hai kya?

Dr Avantika (smiles): ACP Rathod, its ok, agar aap mere saath lunch nahi karna chahtey to aap "naa" keh saktey hain... aapko bahana banane ki zarurat nahi hai... i'm sorry... maine shayad aapko lunch ke liye poochh kar uncomfortable kar diya... but yakeen maniye... mera irada aisa karne ka nahi tha... aap jaiye apni team ke saath lunch kijiye... bye... mai Monday subah Chhotu ji ke ghar par milti hoon aap sabko... unka address aap mujhe sms kardenge

Sameer is embarrassed

Sameer: Dr. Avantika, mai aapko hurt nahi karna chahta tha.. but sahi kaha apne... i was really not comfortable with this idea...I'm really sorry... wo mai address sms kar dunga

Dr Avantika: bye ... have a nice day...

Sameer: bye... take care...

Sameer(Thinking): thank god... bach gaya

Dr Avantika (thinking): Wrong number lag gaya Avantika... ye ACP to bahut hi seedha saada hai...us din bhi akele mein chance maarne ki koi koshish nahi ki... ekdum gentleman... isey tang nahi karna chahiye... bechara kitna caring hai aur apni duty ko lekar kitna zimmedar hai... isey distract karna theek nahi... par banda achchha hai...

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Team gets busy in preparation of the investigation.

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So how was it? Sorry for the errors 😊

Pre-cap : A big dhamaka... blast from the past and raid on that illegal abortion centre

Those who want PM on update, please add me to the buddy list and dont thank me for PMs 😊

Love

Bhavna

Edited by bgargate - 11 years ago

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fly.high

@fly.high

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#96

*unres*
Beautiful update rukku! high on emotional quotient...Shree's Tinu dii's story really compelled me to think dat do girls really become this much 'parayi' to their parents after marriage dat they b'com a subject of humiliation if return home!

Mrs.Saxena's acts were disgusting...hw cn she do this to her child!

nd dat creep doctor who does such illegal things should b punished well...

Dr.Avantika...lolz...uska galat no. lag gaya...leave our Sam alon Dr. u better!

continue soon rukku

love
Aisha

Edited by Aisha.Vashishth - 11 years ago

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pinky gupta

@pinkerbell

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#97

speechless ..

awesome update and the best concept..

loved it so much

thanks bhavna for pm me

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Anika_VR

@Anika_PreRish

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#98

Wow...
Dhamakedaar update...
It was suppper se bhi bohut zyada upeeerrr...
Loved it a lot...
The way you portrayed the emotions of everyone,is worth praising...
Flashbacks were very emotional and touchy...
Brought tears in my eyes...
So,sting operation going to take place...
Waiting for some action...
Continue sooonish... :)
precap looks amazing and jhakkas... :)
thanks for the pm... :)

p.s: sorry for my short comment,coz,i am having my exams,thats why.