Arjun FF: O Ri Chiraiya - Part 11 Pg 39-40, 12-Nov

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kunchu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#101

case going real well

achanak Chief sab tho pakad hi gaye

Avantika madam, next time dear

loved his surprised look

Sree Aisha talks were good

loved the way all are supporting each other

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-Carrie-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#102

An emotional update

Ashima's & Pooja's plight is sadly is an all too common story happening in our society. I was actually surprised at the shock & disgust expressed by the clear thinking people of this story at the "Vansh badhana" mindset of most people.Its sadly too too common.

Shree's part was heart wrenching. What he said is so true. Pooja was wrongfully killed and deserves justice but she is beyond pain now. Safely ensconced in the Good Lord's Home. But Ashima is dying a slow painful death every day. And don't even get me started on her indifferent parents. If such a state of her daughter didnt melt their hearts then they don't deserve to be called parents at all. Hope Shree stays away from them.

The same for Mrs Saxena. But Pooja's outrage at her first abortion tells me she was a strong willed girl. Why would she sleep with a man like Rajiv again & again and get pregnant? Three abortions is too much. I wish she had pleaded to her father instead.

Eeewww...Feeling second hand embarrassment for Dr Avantika😆

Looking forward to the dhamaka😉😉 Varun Jaiswal, huh? Kuch Kuch kadi toh surname se hi jood gayi but I'll let u make the grand revelation!😆

Very well written! Emotionally charged!👏

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GOLDIEE ABROL

@Gold.Abrol

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Posted: 11 years ago

#103

Awesome dear amazing

Bhavna u brought tears in my eyes 😭😭

Very well written

Aisha n shree outburst wonderful

n mrs saxena is really rsponsible for her daughters death

It was really disgusting she should be punished

Thanks for the PM

Emotional update

Continue soon 😊

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Shravani / Arohi

@skrafty

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Posted: 11 years ago

#104

Awesome update
loved it
waiting for the next part
continue soon

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Piya

@Piya_Malik

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Posted: 11 years ago

#105

Yaar its too emotional updt

ab kya bole...bahut bura haal hai dunia me!

Kya to bole aur kya nahi...

Ye topic aisa hai...bas kisi ko kitna bhi samjhaye!

Kuch samjhte hi ni log!

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IlaTanwar

@IlaTanwar

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Posted: 11 years ago

#106

i think i have read this before

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Deleted_Account

@Deleted_Account

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Posted: 11 years ago

#107

Wow Tai.
A very touching update..
U have taken on a very sensitive topic and I have become very attached to it in the second chapter only❤️
My heart went out to Shree n Aisha.. They had to suffer so much! 😭
How could Pooja's mother do that!! Her husband was a demon, fine!! But her mother! Wasn't she a woman! A mother!!?
I am shocked...

Sameer-Avantika!!😲
for a moment i thought there was gonna be a track... Lekin.. 😔
Sam to bada hi gentleman hai!
aur Avantika 🤣

waiting for the sting operation..
hope no harm comes on preeti!!
Updat s00n Tai 😃

P.S happy MakarSankranti ❤️

waiting for next Update!!

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Shivani Priyam Kumar

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Posted: 11 years ago

#108

You very well know my plight hence...main chup rahungi!!
I will never be able to understand how can your aan-baan-shaan be more important than the life of your very own daughter?? She is part of your family, part of you...how can you not stand up for her or care for her??

I've been brought up in a family where every whim and fancy of mine has been met, maybe that's the reason why I can't understand the reason of the plight of my counterparts..but then again its unfair!

My heart goes out to Shree, he loved his sister so much, and the very person he was madly in love with today fails to recognize him. What an antagonizing nightmare for him. Aayesha too is made to look back. The harsh reality is slapped across her face. Is being a girl such a big liability and if it is how dare these men ask for girlfriends and wife??

Pooja for no fault of hers lost her life and her daughters, and whats more disgusting is the fact that her own mother was involved in such a heinous crime! Disgusting!!

Hope ETF nabs them soon and put them all behind bars!

I liked Aantika, dido! Hope to see more of her...chance par dance karna koi isse seekhei!!

Edited by Meself - 11 years ago

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Payal Goel

@Payal_156

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Posted: 11 years ago

#109

Di like button not working ..
u made me cry...
i know dis things happen in real...
Its so heart wrenching to imagine girl state..
she is d ultimate sufferer..
why ppl cannot understand dat..
for any Child born girl is needed..
grrrh..
once ppl worship Girls like Goddess n
at d same tym like dis..
beautifully written..
Shree pov..
team support..
ayesha past..
everything ..
Even parents r at blame sometimes..
hats off di..
take a bow!

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Snehajain

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Posted: 11 years ago

#110

Awesome update...

I am speechless...

It was fab di...👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏

Continue soon...Thanks for PM...

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