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PROLOGUE

The curtains drew apart, revealing a feminine body covered in a red 3 piece Anarkali suit, her back to the audience.

He couldnt keep his eyes off her form, her hips swaying to the drum beats.

She turned around to uncover her face from long veil...
fair skin & doe eye with dimpling smile that could steal any man's heart.

she opened her mouth to sing...

Lakh is dil ko,
Hum ne samjhaya;
Dil yaha, phir bhhi
Hum ko le aya.
she twirled around the stage, doing a few ''mujra''s
the audience clapped, clearly mesmerized by her beauty
But he knew better than her looks.
Salam..
salam...
salam karne ki aarzu hai,
Salam karne ki aarzu hai,
Idhar jo dekho Salam karle...

this was directed for him,
he turned and gave her a hard stare
and she giggled and rewarded him with a salam

Tumhari mehfil me aagaye hai..
Tumhari mehfil me aagaye hai..
To kyu na hum ye bhi kam kar le??

he raised an eyebrow and she teased him further

Yeh dil hai jo aagaya hai tumper
Woh agar na sach yeh hai bandapervar...

he clenched his fists into tight balls and she again her back to the audiences

Jise bhi hum dekhle palatkar
Jise bhi hum dekhle palatkar
Usi ko appna gulaam kar le

she turned and pointed at him in a slightly accusing way..
or so it seemed to him.

a few men wolf whistled..
it annoyed him further,
but he kept his cool as this was a very important performance for her,
and he didn't want to ruin it by ending up in a brawl

Salam karne ki arzoo hai
Salam karne ki arzoo hai
Idhar jo dekho salaam karle...


she raised her hand in salam gesture...

Idhar jo dekho salaam karle
Bahaut se baatein hai tumko kehni
Bahaut se baatein hai humko kehni
Kabhi jo tanha milo kahin tum
Kabhi jo tanha milo kahin tum
To baatein hum yeh tammam kar le

melancholy filled her voice...
this wasn't any of her jests..
he too had realized the fact that now he came to meet her very seldom..

Woh laila majnu ki ho mohahbaat
Ke sheeri farhad ki ho ulfat
Zara si tumjo dekho jurrat
Zara si tumjo dekho jurrat
To humbhi un jaisa kaam karle...

Salam karne ki ki arzu hai..
salam karne ki9 aarzu hai
idhar jo dekho...
Salaam karle...

with a last Salam.. she bowed,
the audience clapped..
the curtains drew together marking the end of her performance.

but he still kept staring at the stage...
how cleverly she had chosen the song..
everything in her heart was conveyed..
and he still didnt know how to express his feelings..

She had always helped him ...
when he was in dire need of support, she happily gave it.
For others she might just be an entertainer,
but to him,
she meant a lot.
his support system..
someone very very precious,
he wanted to protect her from all the evil beings of the society...

he wanted to show those who would question upon her morality, how beautiful and pure she was...
he wanted to bestow her all the happiness of the world.

but it wasn't love...
not yet..
no one could hold that place in his heart..
not after Roshni...
but then what else?


they understood each other so well..
they trusted each other and their own selves..
each supported the other selflessly..

could this be friendship then?

But was it just friendship or a different truth altogether..??

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nice concept n prologue.. loved it.. continue soon..
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I.N.D.E.X

PROLOGUE - PAGE 1

CHARACTER SKETCH - PAGE 1

CHAPTER 1 - PAGE 1

THANK YOU NOTE FOR CH 1 - PAGE 3

CHAPTER 2A - PAGE 3
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❤️CHARACTER SKETCH❤️
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chapter 1


"This is not a new chapter of the book!
This the beginning of a new book!
The old one's already ended, closed and tossed into the sea.
This new book has just been open,
It is the first page and a fresh one."
- C. Joybell


365 days a year... And the clock goes round and round.
but suddenly everything comes to a standstill... time stops and so does your heartbeat.
A random day and your regular work, but, BOOM!! A bomb blasts somewhere blasting away your already miserable life into smitherees...
your life is upside down... you have no where to go.

Just like everyone else, I too was an ordinary happy man; A police officer and a loving husband.
I have always tried fulfiling both my roles properly... i had just wished for a happy, peaceful life...
As an officer I wanted to eradicate crime so that i could also provide her the promised security..,.
was that asking for too much?
I was just doing my duties as a cop for crying out loud! Acting upon the oath I had taken.

Why was I then snatched away of all the happiness in the world?
My wife, my only family left, my guide, my love snatched away mercilessly,
Killed in front of my very eyes, but i could do nothing!!
the beasts got me invalidated with those shackles, drugged so as to keep me so helpless, that i remained incabale of fulfiling our marriage vow of keeping her away of all kinds of harm and danger..

they inflicted wounds upon my body, but i stayed mum, but they pierced her not once, but six times...
six deaths wouldn't have been enough for me to bear the pain.
On that cursed date, died Arjun with Roshnii, the Arjun who was world famous for his pranks and jolliness, died!
their deaths caused ACP Arjun Suryakant Rawte, the out of the book cop and no-nonsense, harsh and hard man to take birth..

he broke all ties with the world.. even himself.

with great difficulty I had managed to move on, Joined the ETF and reunited with my long ago best buddy, ACP Sameer Rathode, and now my boss
our relationship had soured, After the cold gtlares and certain outburst of our complaints ansd hurt, things had slightly gone tolerable when death struck again.
This time taking away Riya..
A bubbly girl but still full of professionalism,
A dear colleague and we had stated to become friends too.
She was indeed a brave girl to sacrifice for the nation, though it rendered me shocked, i must salute her bravery and patriotism.

when the sense of loss had slowly rubbed off we recruited three intelligent female with variable personalities...
but one thing was a must... all knew their work well, they were extremely efficent...
Aisha, Lisa and Sakshi.

when we had just started re-establishing ourselves.. Rathore and Shree had been transferred.
Naturally I was now the new appointed chief..
but from that moment started my ill-luck..

first I lost Raju, a poor4, sweet boy and in no time we bonded very well!
but a mindless zodiac psycopath decided snatching awy my last support.
i mwas again a failure.

But this...
MY WHOLE TEAM!! My comrades!
because of my rash foolishness they lost their lives! oh! what a wonderful leader i am..
I led them straight i8nto the mouth of death...

Chotu, Aisha, Lisa, Sakshi!
they all matter to me! I am the reason for their deaths...
Had I not brought them here nothing would've happened...

The commisionr was right! I am the reason for all their ashes...
and for this Arjun Suryakant Rawte will never forgive himself!
i could've avoided all this...
but then again, i can't be the only one at fault.

But! the system for which I toiled so hard, lived only for tje nation..
this system rewareded me in such a manner tha i am left tongue-tied, speechless.

the blame's on me, i take it.
the handcuffs, i take them,
but they questioned my loyalty, towards my team, the police force, and this!
I DONT TAKE IT!
who cares about being an ACP anymore...

Arjun Rawte was, is, and shall always be the archenemy of crime and criminals...

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He wrote these in his diary and stuffed it in his duffel bag. He glanced to his right and found his companion in a deep sleep,
all the action from the escapade had stiffened his muscles, and also all this sitting around the whole night didn't really help..
it was almost dawn, the sky had started fairing up, he got down from his stolen red porshce, he couldn't help thinking about the state of the owner and the frustrations of all those 'able' men working so hard to capture him, that brought a rueful smirk to his face...

the cold morning air hit him hard, clearing his blocked sense...
he started walking, when he'd gone a bit far he saw a small boy of Raju's age collecting dead leaves from under a tree, he went near him and said,
"beta, Suno, yaha chai kaha milegi?"
it seemed he resembled Raju, but Arjun quickly shook away that thought.
the boy gave him the location of a local vendor... he gave a few money to the kid, ruffled his hair and
he left for the stall...
once he reached ther he switched on his phone and texted Karan
chai pee raha hu, man kare to aa jana

the vendor greeted him..
"good morning sir, kya lenge?"

his greeting reminded Arjun of Chotu, who would say that the huge rough man had such a soft heart...
Arjun respected him as an officer and at the same time regarded him as a younger brother.

the vendor repeated the question bringing him out of his thoughts
he placed an order for his cutting chai

the vendor handed him over the chai...
it smelled very nice, almost like the one Sakshi used to make..
he sipped the tea.. the sweet hot liquid soothed his nerves but at the same time brought back a plethora of memories..

first Roshnii, then Riya, then Sakshi, all three used to make tea for him!
though Roshnii's one was his eternal favorite, he was grateful to mthe other two for quietly parcelling his favorite beaverage when he needed it the most.

he had failed them all. everyone!

He finished the cup, paid for it and started walking again...
though he was hurt and felt guilty, he needed to devise a strategy to get out of all this...

Not only he himself was on the run but he had also freed a prisoner...
if he got caught, the penalties wouldn't be very nice...

Not that he really cared about punishment,
but it would lose him many options of facilities in his goal of life... His Revenge and Their Justice.

he dialled Karan's number, no answer!
still sleeping.

Arjun felt irritated how could someone sleep in times as such!

but then again, Karan was indeed a peculiar man!

a kleptomaniac thief who mingled with Russian trapeze Artists.

"Chorh to chorh! Upar se flirt." he muttered, irked.

he called several times still no answer.

Still sleeping maybe!

But then again...
did something happen to him?


To be continued

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phew! Finally could Update this!
So? How's it?
Please excuse typing errors and i would be thankful if you guys would correct my mistakes and advise me on the plot.


It takes a lot of effort to write so i would appreciate if you would coment a bit longer.


Love,
Sumaya...
Edited by Sumu4JayD - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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That was amazing... So the girl is a dancer... Is she kusum from sataswatichandra?? She is gorgeous... Please update soon and add me to ur pm list xx
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Aww that's was so good... A failed acp... A broken man... But nw he has to get out of all this... That was all written so well... Thanks for the pm too x

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