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unisha

@unishaz

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

nice part.. loved it.. thanks for pm..

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904129

Hibernated

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Awssuuummm Sumuu...The way u Potrayed Arjun's feelings wer beautiful!!! Heartouching!!! I had tears in my eyes!!! 😭😭 lovely!! The way he cared fr all of dem including Raju was beautiful!!! 👏👏 Take a bow!! 😆😆 Im starting to lyk dis Karan!! He is a goof!! 😆 Ab yeh isko kya hua?? P.S-Who is the gurl btw?? Nd Why Arjun is so jealous??? Correct me if im wrong...Isnt she Kusum frm Saraswatichandra?? Thanxx fr pm...Continuee Soon!!

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fly.high

@fly.high

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

it ws so emotional sumu...
i am again missing the ETF really badly..

i feel sooo bad for Arjun...somewhere someone had posted some lines for him..

"Koi aag se bhi to pooche uske dil ki...
Jisse bhi pyaar se chua...uski bas...rakh hi mili...!!!"

as if these lines are made for Arjun himself...

continue soon sumu
nd dnt forget to PM me

love
Aisha

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Nazneen

@naz_2012

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

nice start sumu..i feel really bad for our Hotwa.. 😭 n the way u hav written his pain..it made me cry !!! Karan is a nice guy! cont soon..dis is amazing! 😊

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Tabassum Nitol

@_Tabassum_

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Awwssmmm start
Supperbbb.. concept..
Amazingly written...
Arjun's feelings was awwssmmly described... Beautiful...
cont sooon
thanks for the PM

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rimi

@rimi_invisible

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

amazing story...plz plz continue soon...i am already intrigued...

plz pm me when ever you update...

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ALEKHYA VENDRA

@alee001

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Nyc Dear.!!

the way arjun wrote in his diary are well depicted.!!

do continue soon!!

Who is the girl??

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sashashyam

@sashashyam

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Dear Sumu,

It is nice and concise as it is - you have covered every single point of note - and I look forward to reading more of it . I have no comments for you right now, as you have basically limited yourself to the factual part on which there is nothing to say. Comments will be due when you start developing the new story;I am sure you will do that very well.

Shyamala Aunty

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ishita

@IshitaRocks015

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#19

sssuuuppeeerrraaa!!!!
beautifully written sumu...
Arjun's state of mind... well described...
he is guilty...bt it was nt his fault too...
karan...by god koi aur planet ka prani hai..
hehe...

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Deleted_Account

@Deleted_Account

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#20

THANK YOU FOR LIKING AND COMENTING EVERY ONE

For Prologue

VirMan505, shailyshukla9, Devangana, rimi_invisible, rinku95, visu12, Rehana25, ShanayaShaleen, hunny1993, princess_pari, magati, _Nikita_, unishaz, srividhya68, sashashyam.

Thanks for the Likes😃

@ unishaz, hunny1993, magati,

thanx dears, u will recieve pms., if u keep comenting[;-)]

for Ch-1

VirMan505, Rehana25, _Nikita_, Aisha.Vashishth, rimi_invisible, unishaz, ShanayaShaleen, srividhya68, sashashyam, miss_precious

Thanx for the Likes[:-)]

@ miss_precious, Thanks dear, I'm glad u could relate so soon, yes she is Kusum from SC, and a very graceful dancer in my story, Arjun will get out of the mess, dont worry.[:-)]

@unishaz, thanks dear

@ShanayaShaleen, aw! Thank u Shanu Di! Dont bow so soon, let the story progress, i'll earn it😃, Yes i'm also liking this Karan...
Yes girl is kusum from SC and the main lead of my story... Wait and watch!
Arjun is not jealous, he's worried, remember they are on the run.

@Aisha.Vashishth I too miss the ETF😭
Thanks, the lines are beautiful... I think i've heard them somewhere?

@naz_2012, _Nikita_, rimi_invisible
Thanks dearies. Hotwa k liye our hearts beat little faster.
Thankz...

@alee001
thanx sweet, she's Shiny Doshi, Kusum from Saraswatichandra.

@sashashyam,
Thank you so much Aunty yes i had purposefully kept that part restricted to being short and factual.
It was a baby step in the journey! I have a long long way to go befor the main story starts to develop.😔
And i will try my best to do justice to the characters.
Will be waiting to hear your opinion Aunty.
Its just the beginning.😊

@IshitaRocks015,
Thank U Ji! Hehe! Ishu, not only Karan, tum bhi kisi aur planet ki prani ho.
😛 .

Hold your reins tight ladies...
Chapter 2 on the way!

Enjoy! And excuse the grammar mistakes plz!

Love,
Sumaya!😎

Edited by Sumu4JayD - 11 years ago