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angle1shanu

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Posted: 11 years ago

Hello guys...till I am silent reader of this forum but all the stories i have read inspire me and my heart forced me to write a story based on ARAKSHI as I am a big arakshi fan...so plz help me and excuses the errors...here it is prologue and character sketch...

PROLOGUE:-

Two people of different behavior...with different thinking...with different attitude...fully different lifestyle...BUT Suddenly one drastic tragedy change their life in all manner...they do not know each other but their sufferings were same and same person was responsible for their tragedy...

Will this similarity bring them together... will destiny give them both a second chance to start their life...OR they would go back to their respective path...

CHARACTER SKETCH:

ACP ARJUN SURYAKANT RAWTE:-

A very good looking, handsome super cop jiska naam hi khafi hai uske introduction mai... A very talented and genius officer who fight only for truth and have no fear of any kind. He was very fun loving guy but brutal death of his beloved wife change his life fully and make him harsh, rude , short tempered and lonely human with lot 0f darkness in his life..

SAKSHI ANAND:-

A very charming, bubbly, cute, beautiful, fun loving and sweet girl...who always want everybody near to her be happy and was an apple of the eye of her family...but one tragedy change her life and take away her all happiness with it by leaving a girl with no heart she was died inside but was alive only to take revenge of her husband's death..

ACP SAMEER RATHORE:-

A very handsome, smart and talented super cope. Chief of Emergency Task Force(ETF). Was a good friend of Arjun once but death of ROSHNI(wife of Arjun and besty of Sameer) change their relation... also having a close relation with Sakshi... He is an ideal chief..respect his duty and always follow the rules.

AYESHA KAPOOR:-

She is an ETF officer..smart, hot, and gorgeous. Expert in shooting, and fighting.Best friend of shree and chotu...and have some feelings for Sameer.

SHREEKANT SEN(SHREE):-

Technical expert of ETF..best friend of Ayesha and chotu.

CHANDRAKANT PATIL(CHOTU):

He is an commando of ETF..don't go to his name and size...jitna ye bahar se strong hai utna hi andar se soft heart hai.. he can't see tears in his loved one eyes..best friend of Ayesha and shree..

SAHIL ANAND :-

Childhood friend and then become...Husband of sakshi...very handsome, cute and love sakshi more than his life...but he was murdered brutally in front of sakshi..

ROSHNI RAWTE:-

Beautiful wife of arjun..best friend of sameer. She was a music and painting tutor...she was murdered by one of terrorist in front of Arjun..

Plz tell me that i should continue or not...

Waiting for your reply...

Index...

Cs and prologue on page1

Part1:-page2

Part 2, 3:-page 3

Part 4:-page4

Part 5a, 5b:-page 5

Part 6:-page 6

Part 7:-page 7

Part 8a:-page 9

Part 8b:-page 10

part 9:-page 11

part 10-page 13

part 11a-page 14

part 11b-page 14

part 12-page 15

Edited by angle1shanu - 11 years ago

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Maham

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Posted: 11 years ago

Interesting start Plz continue

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Sakshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

Oh love the idea, do continue soon!

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Posted: 11 years ago

Please continue :D
Arjun and Sakshi in the same situation...its unbearable to see ur loved one die brutally!!
But i hope you bring justice to the story :) Please pm me :)

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sanjali

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Posted: 11 years ago

Nice

Please do continue?

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Posted: 11 years ago

nice concept plz continue it soon and plz pm me😊

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sisodia_shefali

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Posted: 11 years ago

nice here sakshi's past is also same as arjun

continue and pls pm me for next updates

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angle1shanu

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Posted: 11 years ago

A big thank you to all you guys for your complement.

I am updating the 1st part of the story i hope you like it...

PART 1

scene of ETF...all were sitting in the confrence room. Doing their paper work. Shree,Ayesha and CHOTU were getting bored and try to find an excuse for escape from this boring paper work. Sameer and Arjun were sitting in their respective cabin..and busy in their file.Ayesha tell shree to ask permisession for half day but shree says.." oye marvaogi kya...itna jaldi mera marne ka koi irada nai hai..tumhe itna risk lene ka shock hai to khud kyu nai pooch leti apne rathore sir se..."in a teasing tone.."aisa kuch nai hai shree.."Ayesha hit him with file... "tum dono chup ho jao nai to sher ake kha jayenge humko vo bi tadka mar ke"chotu tell shree and Ayesha..and triyo had a laugh..

Suddenly rathore enter in hall and tell that they have a new case of a college girl death...soon they all left for the crime place..

They found a girl named somya's dead body under a high 7 storey building ...all think that it is a suicide but arjun found that dress which somya wore with that she cannot climb the wall of roof and hence she cannot jump herself...someone had murder her...for this case they went to Jaipur and meet with somya's family where he found that somya was going to marry someone rakesh who went to her college and have a fight with her..they ask rakesh who admit his meating with somya but deny of killing her..he told them that she has a boyfriend...then at girl's home they found the scarf of somya which she wore on the day she died... soon they found the murderer..who was none another than the somya's mom because somya want to marry someone else who was of another cast she has hire someone for the murder so on the function of their college somya was on terrace and then that man came and push somya from cliff and hence she died

...this case affect Ayesha a lot..she remind some1 from her past...she cannot control her anger and yelled on somya's mother that how she can kill her own daughter...how she can be so heartless.. ayesha has tears in her eyes...this make Sameer a little bit uncomfortable...he went to Ayesha and saw that she was shivering with anger..so he give a side hug to Ayesha and she start crying..all were watching the scene and getting emotional..soon rathore and Ayesha realize what they were doing..they parted. Sameer wipe her tears and console her and said"aisa kai jagah aj bi hota hai..log apni samaj mai izzat ke liye apno ki jaan lete hai sirf isliye ki unhone kuch rules tode...par hame hi to isko rokna hai na...agar hum hi toot gaye to ye sab kaise rokenge...you have to be strong.." "sorry sir bas toda sa emotional ho gai...but I am fine now.."said Ayesha with a small smile...

After completing formalities they all left ...shree saw that all were sitting very quite in suv which was not in their rule so he said Ayesha in her ear with a very low voice..."I know tu sad hai but is bahane tere rathore sir ki feelings to bahar ay gai..kaise gale lagaya tha jaise koi apni lover ko gale lagata hai...set hai boss...lag gai lottery..." "shree...u are too much.."said Ayesha and start hitting him...with a slight blush on her face.. Sameer was watching Ayesha in side glass and slightly smilling...this all was notice by arjun and he was thinking about Sameer and Ayesha...

Thats all for part 1...how was it...should I continue or not..

Plz comment..