ARAKSHI SS DO ANJANE AJNABBI part 12 update on page15

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angle1shanu

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Posted: 11 years ago

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thank you so much guys...for your comments.. here i am updating 2nd part plz read it and comment on it...

Part-2

Next day there was no case so all were doing paper work...rathore was in his cabin searching a file...suddenly a file fall from the shelf and a picture is present there. Rathore pick that photo and turn it ...a sweet smile came on his lips..and he whispered... "my sweet super girl...kaha ho tum.." all of sudden Ayesha knock the door and saw sameer smiling in front of a photo...she tell him that commissioner sir is waiting for him... they left for meating.. throughout the meeting Ayesha was thinking of that photo..."akhir konsi photo thi vo...iss se pehele sir ko khabi itna sweetly smile karte nai dekha.." as the meeting gets over she excuse herself and she ran in sameer's cabin and search that picture..soon she find a picture under a file... she turn it and shocked... a girl of 19-20 age was hugging sameer from back and both were smilling... she became shocked and a long tear fall from her eyes... as she heard some1 voice she immediately put that picture under file and run out from the cabin...she don't know that why she was feeling so heartbroken, so lonely ...she went to conference hall and start doing her work... seeing her sad shree ask him.."kya hua Ayesha ...itna tense kyu ho..""nothing shree... I am just tired and not feeling well "said Ayesha in sad tone..." "ok then we ask sameer sir for half day.." said chotu.. but sameer heard it from outside and told them that they can go to home... all give a smile to each other and went for their home... as Ayesha passed by sameer he ask her " are u ok..can I drop u to ur home" "no sir I am fine and I have some work nearby so I will go with shree.."said Ayesha... " ok but take care.." said sameer in concern tone...

As in arjun's cabin... he was lost somewhere. He was thinking of roshni that how his parent refuse to accept her as their daughter in law.

FLASHBACK

Arjun-"PAPA I want to marry her... she is good-looking, sincere and understanding girl perfect for my life and for this house...then what is your problem.."

Mr Rawte- "why don't u understand Arjun she is orphanage.. we don't know her lifestyle..bina ma papa ki ladki mai pata nai kaise sanskar honge...kaise pali badi hogi..and we even do't kow her past... pata nai kisi acche ghar ki hogi bi ya nai...aur uski caste b hame nai pata... "

Arjun..in a fuming tone-"papa mai apki izzat karta hu par ye matlab nai hai ki ap kuch bi bolte rahe roshni ke bare mai aur mai suntan rahu..."

Mr rawte-"dekha us ladki ki vahjah se tum humse laad rahe ho..maine kahe diya vo ladki is ghar ki bahu nai ban sakti akhir humari bi izzat hai..log kya kahenge ki business tycoon ki ekloti bahu ek orphanage...no way arjun ye mai khabi nai hone dunga and this my last decision.."

Arjun -" ok then if I will marry then only with roshni .. agar apko manjor hai to ap shadi mai aa sakte hai..otherwise...hum apni nai zindagi apke bina b shuru kar sakte hai... par plz papa ap ayeiga hum apka wait karenge.."

Mr rawte- "tum ja sakte ho arjun..."

Arjun left the house wid heavy heart...and never look back after that day...

FLASHBACK END

"Rawte.. rawte..." rathore's angry tone broke his dream and ask "what happen itna chilla kyu ro rahe ho..." arjun ask him "tum kaha khoye huye the...anyways sab ghar ja chuke hai tum bi chale jao..." rathore said him.. "tum jao...mai bas nikalta hu..." said arjun and take his important file..

Scene shift to a dark and old factory...where a gang was discussing their plan for sailing drugs.. "hume kal kaise bi karke ye mal vaha pahuchana hai nai to boss hume upper pahuccha denge.."said one man... "Tumhare boss ko kyu takleef dete ho hum tumhe tumhari asli jagha bhej dete hai..." Said a girl with a hard tone..and shoot thot man..the bullet directly goes in his head as the firing start but soon the girl with her team kill all the goons and the factory was sealed... WAO...SAKSHI MAM you have done it again...you are a superb shooter..you killed maximum of them...the girl said in a straight manner"thanks but abi in batoo ka time nai hai jitna jaldi ho sake is case ki sari details mujhe chaiye..."... and sit in her car and went to her house...leaving all the other team member shocked...

How's it??????????? Would you like it or not.. plz do comment...

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Maham

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Wow lovely nyc update dear n do continue it

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sweetpari4u97

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

wonderful update.

written nicely.

sakshi is a officer amazing.

cont soon.

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jeevkutty

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

wow wonderful updste
sakshi is an officercon soon

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angle1shanu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

hai...guys...i think you do not like my story so after this update i will stop updating further part...so please...read this part and then after that i will not waste your time...

Part 3

Sakshi went to her house at late 2:30 night...where commissioner sir was waiting for her...and as she arrive he ask her angrily... "WHAT IS THIS SAKSHI...tum bina batay aise khatarnak mission par kaise ja sakti ho...???? Tume zara sa bi andaja hai kitna khatra ho sakta tha...??? Par nai tumhe to meri sunna hi kaha hai..???? tume to bas apne man ki karna hai...??? "sorry baba...par mujhe jaisi hi info mili..mujhe vaha jana pada... I don't want to hurt u..but baba mere pas bilkul bi time nai tha...so I have to go there..."said sakshi in a simple tone... "but tumhari jan bi ja sakti thi...aur agar tumhe kuch ho jata to...???? Kya hota humara..." he said her in very concern tone... "ab kuch hone ko bacha hi kya hai baba...meri jan to 3 saal pehele hi ja chuki hai...bas ab upper jana baki hai...but mai akeli nai jaungi...un sab logo ko sath leke jaungi jinhone mujhe is haal mai pahuchaya hai... I promise u baba I will neve leave them.." she said angrily and went to her room and shut the door... her baba_the commissioner of Mumbai.. was standing helplessly and said in a teary tone "kya thi tum and kya ho gaya hai tumhe...bhagvan ne akhir kyu kiya aisa tumhare sath..."

FLASHBACK

3 years ago...commissioner sir along with his team were in the shimla... a heavenly place.. they were doing their training session..

One day he went for a walk...he was just came outside his hotel a small petal fall on his head and he saw a girl is walking on cliff of the hotel..he shout.. "hai... what are you doing.." but she do not listen...he run inside the hotel..and reached on the terse and saw that she was trying to save a pigeon...who was caught in the wires.. the girl saves the pigeon and come back to roof. Commissioner sir ask her.. "mana tum accha kam kar rai thi par aisa risk lene ki kya zarurat thi hummm...?????" she said in a confident tone.. " are sir life mai bahut kam aise mauke milte hai jab hum kisi aur ki jaan bacha sake..to jab bi ye mauke aye to ise nai jane dena chaiye..." He smile and ask "accha ...vaise tum koun ho aur tumhara naam kya hai..." "mai ek crime reporter hu...and is afat ki pudiya ko SAKSHI SINGH ke naam se jante hai..."she said in full filmy tone...

{sakshi ka surname singh tha but sahil se shadi ke bad anand ho gaya }

He smile on her antics and said to miss sakshi agali bar kisi ki jaan bachate samaye ye soch lena ki tum bi apne parents ki jaan ho..." "ok uncle...apka ukum sir akho par..." she said and laugh..

Then in whole campaign she was shooting them and within a few days her nonsense talk and her million dollar smile..her friendly behavior... her caring nature make a strong relation with the commissioner sir... he treated her as his daughter... and she also treated him as her own baba... she took care of his medicine..his dieting..his health...all his problems were sorted out with just her trade mark smile... on the last day of campaign he place his hand on her head and said... "bhagwan kare tumhe duniya ki har kushi mile...tumhare cahere se million dollar smile khabi gayab na ho...aur agar khabi mujhe beti milne ka chance mile to humesha tum hi meri beti ban kar aoo"...and hug her..

FLASHBACK ENDS

"Tumhari kushi mangi thi maine but tumhe sirf dard hi mila...aur itna dard ki jis face par se khabi bi smile gayab nai hoti thi...aj usi face pe ek choti si muskan dekhne to taras gaya hu..." " par ab mujhe hi kuch karna hoga...tumhe tumhare gum se nikalne ka ek rasta hai..."he said and went to his room..

Next morning..in ETF

Commissioner sir was talking with sameer.. "maine tumhari team mai ek crime reporter cum officer ko appoint kiya hai jo tumhare kam ko aam logo tak pauchayegi.." "but sir hamare kam me bahut risky hota hai..and vo reporter kaise rahe payegi.."Sameer ask him.. "don't worry rathore..vo koi aisi vaisi reporter nai hai..she know how to protect herself in typical condition..,trust me she is best for this job.."said sir in very serious tone... "ok sir...but uska naam kya hai...???" "sakshi...sakshi anand..."sir said him "sakshi...sir sakshi kahi ye vai sakshi to nai jise hum shimla mai mile the..."sameer ask him in very exiting tone.. "ha bi...aur nai bi..."said sir... "matlab mai kuch samjha nai.." "matlab face se aur naam se ye vahi sakshi hai...par bilkul change kyuki jis sakshi ko hum jante the..vo to kabki mar chuki hai..aur abi jo hai vo sirf ek zinda lash..."said sir in very sad tone... "sir ye ap kya kahe rahe hai...aisa kya hua hai...plz bataiye"sameer ask him in very shocking voise... "no rathore not now...mai cahata hu ki vo tumhe kud ye bat batay aur apna dil halka kare..,,,kyuki tum hi ab uske sabse close ho.. plz mujhe kuch mat puchna...the meetig is over..." sir said and left from there...sameer stood there in shock...all the other team members became worried after seeing their both seniors in this manner including..Arjun...

Sameer said in very shivering voice... "sakshi...Meri super girl..i am waiting for u.."

That's all for today's update..how's it...???

I know this was a long one..but maine likne mai itna time lagaya to plzz..comment bi uske hissab se hi milne chaiye na...;) after all this would be my last update😭

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sweetpari4u97

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Posted: 11 years ago

#16

no this is going very well.

all the updates were amazing.

please dont stop it in the middle.

plz cont it.

please accept my request.

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sisodia_shefali

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Posted: 11 years ago

#17

It is nice story so dont stop
Abhi toh arjun And has to meet
pls pm me for all other parts

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Maham

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Posted: 11 years ago

#18

What last update but y?
Plz cotinue yar etna acha likh rahi ho plz dnt stop

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angle1shanu

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Posted: 11 years ago

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thank u guys for your comments and support here is part 4..i hope u like it..

Part:-4

The talking with commissioner sir left sameer in a confusing state...he does not know how to react on this...he should happy bcz his long lost best friend is coming back to him...or he should sad for her condition...the ringtone of his mobile broke his chain of thoughts... They got a case of owner killing...he went to conference room to inform them ...soon they left for crime place...the case was of murder of bridegroom on the mandap... the ETF team was on the spot...the beautiful decoration remind Arjun of his marriage...the red & white roses remind his "roshni..." he was a little disturb which was unnoticeable by Sameer as he was also in thought of Sakshi..but they were on duty...and by keeping their emotion side..completely focus on their work was their old style...

They came to know that the person who died was an doctor along with a nurse of their own private hospital were behind the organ smuggling...moreover they came to know that the girl Shilpa who was going to marry that doctor was actually her jiju..(her sister's husband)..she only marry him bcz of her sister's daughter...the team wid skill of Arjun came to know that Shilpa had killed him bcz she came to know that mukesh had killed her sister and was also behind organ smuggling..she admit her crime but also told them that mukesh team member were going to sell their parcels via ships from a private beach..ETF immediately left for that place..As they reached their they heard some men were talking that... "boss ko jisne mara use police ne arrest kar liya hai..or police key yaha ane se pehele hume ye mal un jahajo me bhijvana hai..aur jo paise use bant ke hum phir khabi nai millenge..." "kyu na hum tumko tumhare boss ke pas hi bhej dete hai.." Arjun said him with angry tone..and then firing start..arjun ran behind a goon but the goon hide behind the bush and hit arjun with a rode on his head..bcz of that Arjun's gun fall and just the goon was going to shoot Arjun a bullet came to his head from behind and the goon die in a sec..he saw a girl whose face was cover with cap of he jacket...with gun in her hand pointing towards him..

Arj-"koun ho tum...???"

Girl-"ye ap apne chief se pooch lijiyega...?"

and she was about to leave Arjun hold her hand and pull her towards him but in defends she kick but arjun defends that trick ad turn her with other hand he try to remove her cap but she pushed him and bcz of that they both fall on each other..arjun remover cape and lost in the big and beautiful eyes of that girl. The girl also lost in Arjun eyes...

"arjun tum thik to ho aur..." sameer came hurriedly...they broke their eyelock and stand properly..suddenly sameer saw that girl "sakshi tum..."sameer ask her... sakshi was equally in shock but hide her expressions and said... "yes sir...I am your new team member..SAKSHI,,SAKSHI ANAND..commissioner sir ne apko mere bare mai bataya hoga..." sameer know the situation and ask "tumhe kisne bataya ki hum yaha hai...??" "ab team mai hu to team ki khabar to hogi hi..but abi jaldi se ap sab office chaliye vaha commissioner sir apka wait kar rahe hai..." she went to her car and leave that palce...Arjun notice the expression of Sakshi and Sameer and ask him.. "kya tum isse jante ho..." "haan...mera matlab sir ne kal bataya tha...ab chalo.." As they reached office they saw Sakhi and Sir were already present there...Sir introduce Sakshi as a crime reporter..but Arjun ask him... "sir hum koi flim star to hai nai..jo hamare kam ko koi cover kare and vaise bi humare work mai bahut khatra hai..jaha koi reporter nai tik payenge."

"shayad koi bhul raha hai..ki abi kuch der pehele kisi police...vale koi kisi reporter nai hi KHATRE se bachaya hai..." she said in an agry tone.. Arjun was about to say something but Sir cut him and said "Arjun tumhe iski koi chinta karne ki zarurat nai hai ye apna khayl rakh sakti hai...aur aj se ye tumhari team ka ek hissa hai...so now you can leave now..." Ayesha & chosree were looking like they have seen a fish flying in sky...first ever in history there was some1 who dare to argue in front of Arjun.. "yar mujhe aise filling ky a rai hai ki ab roj koi na koi daily entertainment milega..kyu Ayesha" shree ask her but she was lost her... "she recognize sakshi as the same girl she saw in picture of Sameer.. She was unhappy with the entry of Sakshi..bcz somewhere she was felling jeleousy...

Precape: Sam- Sakshi conversion.

plz...plz...plz...i am waiting for ur comments they are mean lot to me...