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Posted: 11 years ago
#11
Loved fresh concept n ur writing is really nice
Thus reel v/a real is damn good
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Itss superb i loved ittt are u gona post daily ?? m waitng for nxt
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Great part
loved it
waiting for the next part
cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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such a beautiful and innovative concept...
continue soon

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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome update
continue soon
pls pm me when you continue
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thanku for the encouraging responses.!!
Part 3:

Ritu: Who are you ??


Shaleen: jo koyi bhi hai.. she is beautiful man.


Girl: Anika Singh Alivaliya (removes her coat and signals to one constable to keep in SUV) ,2nd in command of ETF


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Sid: toh ye hai ETF ki 2nd in command. he looks at Shaleen and chuckles


Behzaad: muh toh band karo uncle.!!! heheheheh


Shaleen:(comes out of trance) Man she is goregous and seee...(sid closes his mouth)


Sid: Dnt take the word out. Look at that sharif. ek punch kaafi hai !!


Anika: Sharif, check the surroundings and send the backupforce back. if req we will call them


Sharif leaves.


Anika : Start the formalities.. here is the mobile. i need all the call records and information about this girl. I want full history of this girl.


Vishal : okay(takes the mobile and starts his work)


Anika calls to inform thier cheif and asks sukruti to come to spot).


Mrunal : ye sab ho kya raha he..mera to abhi tak koi boyfriend bhi nai he..hey bappa raksha karna..


Shital : Ritu ye dekh ise abhi bhi boyfriend ki padi hein...


Ritu : sahi to keh rahi he y meri shadi b nai hue :(


Shital : ( hit's her head) kaha phas gai meinn


(In mean while sukruti comes in chek the body )


Sukriti : Mam ye goli Ruger se chalai gai hein.. ek h bullet he par heart k pass me lagi he...par ye gun bahut rarely sab ke paas hoti he...



Anika: (she thinks to her self its all preplanned. jo koi bhi kar raha hein bahut hi chalaki se apna dav khelra hein ) tum sab chalo gadi me betho..


behzaad : hum sab ?? par kyun ??


Anika: (gives duh look) puch thach keliye..


Behzaad :kuch bhi ho hum kahi nai jare aapke sath..


Anika : mein request nahi kar rahi huu.. order deri hu ab samjhee...


Shaleen : Me...i n s.a...m...jhata hu na unko aap chaliye hum apke piche piche aate hein..


Aniki : aab chale ?? ( and she goes to her SUV and signals everyone to get in the van )


Sid : dekha teri wali to tere se b khadus nikli yaar VAN me bithari hee..or jaa bete or jaa uske pichee..laat marke bhagayegi...


Everybody chuckles!!


Ritu :shukar hein ki police jeep me nai le jaa rahe hein..


Shital : yaar ye Van to itna chota hein.. mere to paseene chut jayenge uff mera chehre ka pata ni kya hoga..


Behzaad : (murmers to shaleen dikha to ese aise behav kar rahi hai as if miss universe!!...)


Mrunal : Mein isme nai bethne wali.. me abhi apne lawyer ko phone lagati hu..tum logo ki naukri ni chudwai na to. tooo...


Anika : dekhiye Miss... jo bhi ho hum jo bhi kare he apke liye kare hee..behtar yahi hoga ki aap chup chap gadi me beth jaiyee...aap iss tarah behave karke aapki h nahi balki apki sathiyo ki jaan bhi khatre me dal rahi he.. aapki ye member, ramesh ka bhi koon huya. So, ur protection is our top priority.


Everyone are shocked: kya ramesh ka bhi koon huya


Vishal: ha, so pls chaliye hamare saath.


everybody thinks about it and nods their heads..


Gorky : guys ye sahi kehri hee..hum... bad me baat karte.. abhi yaha se chalna hogaa..


and evrybody sits in Van...


In etf Office:


Sid: yaar dekho nobody can say that its a ETF office , 5 star hotel jaise dikhraha hai!!


Ritu: shutup siddy


Ketan : yaar yaha pe khana dete he kya ??


Behzaad : haa na detee to hein.. wo bhi mast garam garam..lathi ke sath... (ketan gets scared)


everyone laughs at him..


Here a man enters


Man : Good evening officers


Anika, Vishal , Sharif: good evening sir.


Behzaad to ketan : i think ye hai ETF ki cheif.


Man turns to actors: soo team Arjun huh ????


Gorky : jeee aap ???


Man: I m Jai Singh Alivaliya, National Head of Emergency task Force.


Shaleen: What ???? ( his mind: Alivaliya??? OMG ye Anika ka husband toh nahi????)


Behzaad: yaar teri wali ki shadi ho gai lagta he (shaleen looks sad )

Jai : (istens to shaadi )and mein Anika ki Brother hu( Shaleen is doing gangam style in his mind) and you guys dont need to worry.. ETF ke hote hue koi apka kuch nai kar sakta.. bas um apse ye umeed karte he ki aap hamari interogation me co-operate kare..


Anika : and haa abhi se sunloo jab tak hum nahi kehte aap log iss ETF ke office k bahar kadam bhi nahi rakhenge


Everyone shouts : kyaaa ?????


Shaleen: no way.. How i m going to stay here. i need to go to my parents home. its my brother marriage.


Anika : agar tumhe samajh me nahi aya to fir se sunlo (she goes close to him and says) mein tumse puch nahi rahi hu Mr.Malhotra aapna decision tumko suna rahi hu.. ise tumhe manna h padega nai to manwane ke or bhi tareeke h mere paas..


Jai : guys guyss relax and Anika thoda time do unhee samjh jayenge..

(he looks at evryone and smiles ) whoo sorry Anika thodi strict officer hee..par uska irada aap sba ko sahi salamar rakhna he )


Shital :patha hai har roz hum dekh the hain 2nd in command ki strictness


Anika gives "What the" look


Ritu: please dnt take wrong. Shaleen too plays 2nd in command in the show and his role is strict.


Anika : role play karna uss role me hona dono alag baat hoti hein..

Vishal & Sharif: ye log anika ke saath kyun panga lerahi hai. abi toh anika ne questionning start he nahi ki ( gives sad look to everyone)


anika : okay enough ap log yahi rehre ho.. basss...

shital : (murmers to ritu - me to yaha rehne ko tayar hu.. ye jai to bada cute he yaar lagta h nahi police wala he)


jai : kuch kaha apne miss ??


Shital : (looks at him with shy smile and says ) jiii nahii bas yeh keh rahi thi kii ap sab hamare liye kuch kar rahe hein..


Vishal : ( run to her and gives her a bright smile and says.) ye...e... to hamari duty he shital jii aap jese khuuu..b i mean aap jese logo k madad karne k liye hi ETF hein..


Anika: take them to ETF guest house.. hum kal suba baat karenge.. and security high honi chaiyee...guest house is back side of ETF)


Team Arjun moves out the room!!

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Anika: Bhai Wo log kha ha hai??


Jai: bacche wo dono toh undercover operation mein he... and time milte he hume information dedenge..


Anika: I hope ki atleast he would come soon.


Vishal: here are the call records.


Anika : okay anything suspicious??


Vishal : No anika. everything is normal . no supicious mesgs or call


Sukriti : and its a point blank shot. meine Sharif ko batadiya , about the gun.


Sharif enters:


Sharif: mumbai mien aise paanch log hai jiske paas ye gun hai.


Anika: Sharif, mujhe ye paanch logon ki info chaiye. And aap log ghar jaaiye. kal bohat saari kaam hai


Everyone leaves to homes

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In morning ETF Guest House :

Shaleen : (he is looking very sad q na ho unke bhai ki shadi he and wo yaha phase hue hein ) yaar me chat pe jara hu


Behzaad : (in sleepy voice ) theek hei. aunty ko inform karo that u cant come


Shaleen in sad voice: OKAYYY


MeanWhile Jai & Team enters. Shital wakes up, after seeing him she rushes to washroom( for makeup yaarr :P :P :P )


jai : (jai keeps hand on shaleen's shoulder and say's ) mein samjh sakta hu tumhe kese lagra hoga shaleen par trust me itz for ur safety (shaleen gives sad smile )


shaleen : itz oka sir..


an idea stuck to jai..


jai : ETF bhi aayenge shaadi pe. ek yahi rasta bacha he ab q shaleen ??


shaleen : (smiles brightly) ofcourse it would be my pleasure to invite u all sir please me ye shadi miss nahi kar sakta..


jai : (taps his back and says ) nahi karoge :)


everyone feels happy for shaleen and gets ready..


Shital : r u not coming sir???


Jai: no ms Shah. i cant come. i have another case to handle. enjoy ur time team.(Jai goes)


sid : kya baa hein shaaa tera sala to mast hein ?? abhi se teri itni chinta...


Mrunal : (she gets jealous ) shutup shreee bakwas band karoo


Ketan : ab ise kya huaaa...


Gorky: ignore kar ignore kar


everyone gets ready and leave for the marriage they reach there at time and was enjoying the partyyy...


Shaleen : yaar ye ani ka koi boyfriend he kya


Behzaad : Aniii ... ek din me itni progresss..kya baat he (shaleen blushess)


Sid: yaar sab ki entry hogayi but ye cheif kaha hai???


Bezhaad: ha. Mujhe bhi dekhna hai ETF ki Cheif ko


(someone was pointing there gun at shaleen from long building oposite to mandap.security was alert Anika was sitting in car )


D..i..sh k a w..



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Posted: 11 years ago
#17
Dear read all the parts in one go
Amazing shaleen full latto hai anika pe too good
n seetal on jai 😆😆
SO all r in the marriage of shaleens brother
Too good dear
continue soon 😊
N PM me when u update 😊
Edited by GOLD.A - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#18
Wat awesome story...
luved it keep cont.. it...
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Super awesome n funny update
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thank You Soo much everybody we are glad u liked our story :) and we are really very sorry that we aren't able to reply u guys hope u'll enjoy further :)


Part 4


(someone was pointing there gun at shaleen from long building oposite to mandap.security was alert Anika was sitting in car )


D..i..sh k a w..


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suddenly they heard gun sound and turned there head to see one man fallen from top of building and he was dead.


everyone was shocked..there heart's were ceasing with panic.. one tall muscular man walks In and says


Man : ab sab theek hee aap log shadhi enjoy kariye


Shaleen : yee yeee abhi ek insaan ki maut ho gai or aap shadi enjoy karne ko bol rahe hoo... ye sab chal kya raha he koi kuch batayega...(tears were streaming down his eyes..actually in evryone's eyes)


Anika: meet rana daggubati, encounter splst of ETF.and thanks him.


Rana : Guys enjoy the party..hum wapis jake baat karengee.. trust mee kisi ko kuch nahi hoga


Mrunal : (she smiles at him and says ) aapke rehte hue to mujh... i mean hume koi kuch nai kar

sakta..


Behzaad: encounter splst???? i thought aap ETF ki cheif.


Rana : ETF k cheif se milna itna asaan nai he..


Ketan murmers to Sid, Shital, ritu: dekho yaar. ye team toh ek dum solid hai. !!


(Anika receives a call from jai... she talks to him and returns back )


Anika : hume abhi nikalna hoga Arjun team k ek admi ne atma hatya karne ki koshish ki he... ye to accha hue Bhai ne dekhliya..


Gorky : k...ii..s..nee ??


Anika : Ritesh.. Ritesh shah nee wo aapke script writer.


everyone starts for hospital to meet Ritesh..


In hospital :


Rana: How is he doctor.


Doc: khatre se bhaahar hai. thodi dher mei hosh aajaye. tab tak pls wait.


Behzaad: Ritesh suicide kyun karega??


Rana: Sukruti pata karo iss poision ke bareme. Vishal and Sharif check his home, his mobile, his laptop.


Anika: fast guys. i want everything...


They leave. Rana asks team arjun to go to canteen and have something as they didnt ate anything for long time


After sometime


Sukriti : ye poison bahut h khatarnak he and aam tor pe yee medical shops pe nai milte hein.. to ise ye yaha se to khareed ni sakhta.. ye sirf forest area's me milta he


Vishal : and mene check kiya he ye kuch dino se ghar se kahi gaya h nai hein..


Sharif: and mujhe ye patha chala ki ise koyi kaaran nahi . jiss se ye suicide karsaktha hai, no girlfriend, no enemies.


Anika : hell... hume gumrah karne ki koshish kare hee.. yee sucide ho hi nahi sakta.. kuch to chut raha hein..


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Meanwhile Team arjun arrivies after a short break to canteen( as they didnt ate anything). while walking . Behzaad gets a call and ask rest of the ppl to wait. he attends the call and turns to go back. but suddenly he stops... no he was stopped)


He sees a beautiful girl walking towards him and our behzaad khan is literally drooling over her.


Behzaad (murmers) : Goregous

BGM Song : dekh jo tujhe yar dil mein baji guitar


But the girl listens to that. she turns and smile to him (as saying thanku) and changes her direction and moves


Behzaad comes back from trance and moves to the group.!!


Ritu: oye tumhe kya hua. has kyun rahe ho??


B ehzaad : kuch nahi, chalo


they moves towards ritesh room and walks near to etf..


Mrunal : How is he now??


Sharif : He is fine, out of danger.


Behzaad: Shital paani ka bottle dena. that dosa is so oily . yuck ( Shital passes him the bottle)


Sid: aapko patha chala hai kya?? ritesh ne kyu suicide attempt kiya.


Anika: ye suicide nahi ye its a planned murder


team Arjun shocked..: kyaaa???


person : yes


A voice comes from behind. Everbody turns to direction of voice


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Hope u guys will enjoy!! do reply
Thank You :)
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Edited by ayesha.candy - 11 years ago

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