Reel & Real (part4 in page 4)

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hello everybody as we know there will be no Team ETF from upcoming episodes... me and my friend thought of writing a fanfiction on reel and real ETF .


Concept... you'll get to know once the story is started.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Index :

Part-1 : http://www.india-forums.com
/forum_posts.asp?TID=3834584#p97089587
Part-2 : http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3834584&TPN=2
Part-3 http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3834584&TPN=3
Part-4 http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3834584&TPN=4
Edited by ayesha.candy - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Charecter sketch

Shaleen: acts as arjun suryakanth rawte in popular series " Arjun ". but entirely contrast in real life


Behzaad : Acts as Sammer DhamSingh Rathod..!! Biggest prankster on sets


Shital: As Ayesha Kapoor, Bussinesswoman too, wating for a chance in bollywood!!


Sidharth Sen: As Shree, bestiee of ritu chauhan , A friend whom everyone can hangout.

Ketan Karende: As Chandrakanth patel aka Chotu. loves food (same as onscreen). afraid of his wife.(Y?? u ll come to know soon)


Mrunal: As Sakshi Anand.!! actress in marathi industry

Ritu Chauhan: As Liza D' Cruz. Bestiee of Sidharth Sen . latest addition into team
REAL ETF:
Vishal Gandhi: tech whizz..crazz geek and handsome techie..overall the backbone of the team
Sharif: Commando of ETF. Ex-ARMY
Remaining will be updated soon!!!
Edited by ayesha.candy - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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prolouge:

Man : ufff ye gadi ko bhi abhi kharab honi thi..yaha par to taxi bhi nai milegii...

he tries to stop the car's and van's going by that way..

Man : shittt.. kya zamana agaya he koi madad karne k liye tayar h nahi hee...

suddenly a car stops and a lady comes out..

lady : aap wahi he naa ?? director ??

Man : haa i am director ramesh (fan hogi chalo accha he lekin ye meri madad karegi ?? ) looks confusing at her..

Lady : chinta mat kariye director saheb..aapko apki manzil tak pahunchane hi aai hu

Man : kya matlab.. (she suddenly remove pistol from her pocket and shoots him)

Lady : matlab..ye..ye matlab he mera (laughs evily)

Man : (clutching his heart ) k...aa.. u...n h..oo t...u uum

Before she gives ans he dies..

Lady : kash ye sawal tumne pehle bataya hota...

she turns and leaveas...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part-1

Conference Room: Team we have a case. When the cheif informs, the team gets ready to solve an other crime.!!! ###########################################################################

Samjhe ya samjhaun !!!!!!!!

" annnddd cut " says gorky

Shaleen & Behzaad : murmers(bhagwan aaj ki packup karwado plsss)

Gorky: pack up for today.!! (Shaleen and behzaad jumps from their seats) and ketan ready ho jao bill pay karne keliye. aaj toh mei badla lunga.

( its ketan birthday , so gorky wants to take back his payed amount :P)

Shaleen: ha sir, chotu aaj toh mei tumhe nahi chodunga.!! And the whole ppl on set laughes!!

########################################################################### Murder Spot:

Cheif: Vishal, wats the status.!!

Vishal : i got this ( he shows a identity card to the chief)

Cheif: So, this Ramesh is one of the assitant director of the show" Arjun". hmmm... Team lets go!!


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so.. how was it ?? do let us know..
thank you :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#6
hey sounds intrestinggg wil miss ETF :( aweee do update sooon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Sounds very interesting! do continue soon!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#8
Nice ... Plz continue it :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#9
This is fun
It will be very interesting to read it
Continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thnku guys for such a lovely response.
Here s the next part (a bit long one)
Part2:

Murder Spot:


Cheif: Vishal, wats the status.!!


Vishal : i got this ( he shows a identity card to the chief)


Cheif: So, this Ramesh is one of the assitant director of the show" Arjun". hmmm...; Team lets go!!


#############################################################################


Arjun Set:


The team orders a big cake for ketan And ketan gives biryani treat to all the members on the set!!


Sid: yaar ketan ek aur piece dhoo naa.. tu ne toh bohat kaaliya


Ketan glares!!!!


Sid: oye aaj mei nahi darne waala.. so arjun ke tarah ghurna band karoo. Samjhe ya...


Mrunal & Shital : Samjhaun?


Ritu: Guys , Ramesh kaha hai?? aaj toh mei ne nahi dekhi


Mrunal: ha yaar aaj ke din wo kese miss karsakthe hai??


Shaleen: wo mei bhi soch raha huin. aaj hamara set ki kapil sharma kaha gaya??


Behzaad: Gorky sir, kya aapko patha hai?? kaha hai wo??


Gorky: me too dnt know, subah toh set pe hai. afternoon se gayab. karan bol raha ki 2 pehar ko usne ramesh ko set se jaaythe huiye dekha. Maine call karneko try ki .. but SO, might be some emergency!!


suddenly they hear a screaching sound of vehicle's and turn their heads to see group of men walking toward's them.


Shalen:yeh mushtande kon he or iss time pe yaha kya kare he?? (posing in front of girls) leeme see B) !!


Behzaad: i ll also come.


Shaleen & Behzaad goes to meet them. they sees pistols.. One of them tries to go inside. but Shaleen resists


Shaleen: Oye kaun ho bae tum log. aur ye toy pistol se kya kare ho ??? (looks at Gorky and says) aapne naye gunde dundliye show ke liye bataya bhi nai ??


Gorky : mene kisi ko nahi bualaya.. oye kon ho bhai tum log ??


Behzaad : murmers "kya kehre phir kon he fans to nai..???" .autograph ki time hogaya toh waapas ki raasta pakdo bahut ho gaya arjun arjun khelna... Security Security!!!!


Man : jara thehariye to khan saheb we are from "EMERGENCY TASK FORCE" .


Shaleen : Gorky sir dekhiye inko arjun ka bhukar upar tak chada hua hee...


(Mean while Ketan too comes)



Ketan : chalo chalo ab niklo bhi yaar birthday bhi nai celebrate karne dete..

Man: enoughhh is enoughhh bahut ho gai aaplogon ki nautanki lets put "the end" , Mr. karende(showing is id) I'm sharif; commando of ETF and this is Vishal; tech expert.


Flash back:


Conference room:


Chief: Vishal and Sharif!!! ; go and talk to the members on the arjun set. We might get some link.


Vishal & Sharif: okay Chief ( and leaves to the set)


Cheif: what do think ??


2nd in command: cant say anything!! lets wait for autospy report


Meanwhile their forensic expert (sukriti) enters into room ...


Sukruti: Cheif i found rat poison in his stomach.. i think its a suicide becoz there are no fingerprints on body.


Cheif : hmmm... i think you should go and interogate them!!


2nd in command: okay (and leaves)



Gorky runs to them...behind the remaining cast too " Sorry officers we didnt know that you are coming. Sorry for everything" and murmers to Shaleen, Behzaad & ketan "Ye log real officers hai". Everyone stunned..


(During this conv, Gorky gets a call from commisioner


Comm: Mr Gorky , this is Jai Singh Alivaliya, National head of ETF (informs him abt ramesh's death) my officers will be coming to interogate you ppl regarding a case . So pls cooperate with them


Gorky: okaay sir . sure)


Shaleen : ye ho kya raha he mujhe to pata hi nahi tha ki India mein Emergency Task force he...


ketan : hailaa sachi me yaar ye to sachi he officers hein..


Sid : tum log bhi chup karo yaar.. dekha he ek ek ko hatte khatte hee gussa agaya to chehre ka naksha badal denge phir acting ki band baj jayegi...


Gorky is in teary eyes..(Mrunal notices this)

Mrunal : kya hua sir aap roo q rahe he ??


Gorky : Ramesh kii...


(all of sudden they heard bullet sound and turns around..makeup artist was lying dead)


Behzaad & shital : Ye...yeee ky..aa..aa h...oo.oo...


(a girly voice comes from behind) baad me baat karenge guys, lets check inside .


Ritu: Who are you ??


Shaleen: jo koyi bhi hai.. she is beautiful man.


Girl: Anika Singh Alivaliya (removes her coat and signals to one constable to keep in SUV) ,2nd in command of ETF

Here She is

(Finally Shaleen meets his on screen char in offscreen(the real 2nd in command of ETF))



Teaser :


Anika: its not a sucide.


"Yes, the murderer tried to fool everyone by showng murder as suicide but he failed", a voice comes..


Edited by ayesha.candy - 11 years ago

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