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Posted: 11 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: eshasrk

Thnx for the PM dear

Very nice start and very different concept...really love it.
Plsss continue

edit : Read the second part as well. What is going on btwn Shree and Saakshi ???? Is he the one who left saakshi or what ???
I am waiting to see how this story unfolds further



Thanks a lot
will know about shree soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: sweetpari4u97

glorious update.

waiting to know about shree and sakshi.
thankx for pm.
continue soon.



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Posted: 11 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: sisodia_shefali

so arjun is thinking abt sakshi although he does not know her as of now

sab ke coffee pe masti was good to see
😕 what is with shree why he behaved like that
waiting for arjun sakshi ke mulakat proper wali
thanks for pm


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Posted: 11 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: PoohLover

Love the update...but why shree didnt even say hi and why was he shocked..continue soon and thank you for the update🤗



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Posted: 11 years ago
#45
Next Update in a few minutes time
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46
Disclaimer: The Characters in my story are inspired from the show but the way the react to different situations are purely my imagination. Any resemblance is purely coincidental.

Note:
Guys I have updated this in a hurry. Wrote it using my phone, so there might me some spelling errors and some ugly alignment. So forgive me for it. Keep reading and commenting.

Part 3:


Saakshi turned to face each other. Both were shocked to see each other and yelled tum. Saakshi moved a little forward towards him

Saakshi: Tum yahan kya kar rahe ho? Mere peecha karthe karthe yahan tak aa gaye. Mein tumse darthi warthi nahi hoon. Samjhe. Agar koi bathameezi kiya tho iss baar aisa sabak sikavoongi. Zindagi bar yaad rakoge hi aur tho aur kisi ko apna mooh dikane layak bhi nahi rahoge. Samjhe ya dubara ache se samjhavun.

Arjun took a few steps towards her. She automatically moved backwards in a reflex.

Arjun: Yeh kya baakwaas kar rahi ho? Hamesha hi aisa karthi ho ya aaj koi special occasion hain. Jaanthi bhi ho kisse baath kar rahi ho?

Saakshi: Haan haan janthi hoon mein kisse baath kar rahi hoon. Ek baathmeez insaan jo kudko bahoot perfect mantha hain aur logon ko maar peeth kar unhe sudarne ki kosish kartha hain. Kal tho mein tumme maaf kardiya tumhari galathi ke liye. Par aaj koyi galathi ki tho police ke hawale zaroor karongi. Aur fir zindagi bar saadthe rahna jail mein.

Arjun (Mocking): Haan karo na mujhe police ke hawale. In fact we are in ETF complain karo na? Kaun arrest karega mujhe? (Pointing to Chotu) yeh.. Who nodded in no.(Then pointing towards Aisha); aur tum Aisha. She also nodded in no then he said Rathod se kahogi mujhe arrest karne ke liye?

All the ETF members were watching this clash with a shocked expression on their faces. Not every day was Arjun in the receiving end of samjhe ya samjhavoon and here was a girl who dared to samjhofy him. He was also arguing with her word to word. She had to be special because not everyone could stand and speak like that to Arjun. But Sameer thought to intervene before matter went out of control.

Saakshi: Mujhe inn logon ki zarorat nahi hain. Tume arrest karvane ke liye. Samjhe Mr Angry young man.

Sameer: Stop it guys. Ye park nahi office hai. Yeh kya laga raka hai. Rawte tho aisa hi hain but I didn't expect such behavior from you Saakshi.Commissioner sir was really praising about commitment and work ethics . Anyways tum dono tho pehle se hi ek dusre ko jaanthe hi ho. Phir bhi officially introduce kar hi deta hoon. Rawte yeh hain Saakshi Anand as a journalist ETF join karegi Aur Saakshi yeh hai ACP Arjun Rawte.

Arjun: Hume journalist ki koyi zaroraat nahi hain Rathod. Yeh tum bhi jaanthe ho. Yahan har pal katra hain koyi untrained person kaise ho saakta hain?

Saakshi:Mujhe bhi lagtha aap ko yahan nahi hona chahiye. Jo insaan apne gusse par kabu nahi rak saktha ho woh apne liye hi nahi usske saath ki logon ke liye bhi katra hain. Par na aap mujhe yahan se nikaal saakthe na mein aapko. Jahan baath katron ki mere liye meri zindagi hi katra hain. And I promise aap logon ko mere wajah se koyi katra nahi hoga. Anyways glad meeting you officially ACP Arjun. Saying this she forwarded her hand and made him to shake his hand with her forcefully.

Saakshi: I think i need a tea to refresh myself. Aisha agar koi case aaye tho baatha dena.(Looking at Arjun): woh kya hain na kuch logon ka barosa nahin. Glad meeting you all.

Saying this she left the place

Sameer: Team jab tak koyi nayi case nahi aatha jaakar purani cases ki paper work katham karo. (To Aisha and Liza): Saakshi is new here make her comfortable here. Now get back to work.

Saying that he goes to his cabin. Arjun goes to his cabin. Aisha, Liza and Chotu went to conference hall.

Shree was already in there bounded by his own thoughts. He had never expected to meet her that too at ETF after all these long years. He now had to face her every day. Will he be able to face her. She had trusted him a lot and he had failed her by not being with her when she needed him the most. He was not being there for her during the miserable phases of her life. What made him feel all the more bad was the fact that she would never even have a grudge against him for not being there and welcome him into her life as nothing of the past had happened. That would make him all the guiltier. Hence he decided that he would stay away from her and never allow anything more than a professional relationship between them. His thoughts were broken when he felt Chotu's hands on his shoulders.

Chotu: Kya yaar Shree. Yahan kya kar rahe ho? Patha hain kitana mast scene tumne miss kardiya?

Aisha: Maana padega use. Arjun Sir ko hi samjha diya

Liza: Mein thou ski bahoot badi fan bhi ho gayi.

Shree (Irritated): Yaar kiski baath kar rahe ho? Koyi bathaayega bhi ya nahin.

Chotu: Aur kiski Ms. Saakshi Anand Ki. Kamal ki ladki hai yaar.

Saying he narrated the entire scene to Shree.

Shree: Maana padga uske himmat ko. Waaki mein bahot himmat hain uss mein. (To himself) Hamesha se hi aisi hi thi. Har waqt sahi ka hi saath deti hai.

Sameer was in deep thoughts in his cabin. After a very long time or to be precise for the first time after Roshini's death, I saw glimpses of old Arjun back who used to get irritated by small things. He was arguing word to word to Saakshi and seems to be affected by her opinion for him in some way or the other. It would be really nice to know what had transpired between them before? He had inner feeling that their lives would be entwined to each other in more than one ways.

Precap: More of Arjun and Saakshi. Shree and Saakshi meet after 6 long years.


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Posted: 11 years ago
#47
Thanks for the PM
I loved the update and this story is getting interested day after day
So can we assume that it's Shree who has left Saakshi behind ??? The one she loved, but failed her ????

If that is the case I don't want him anywhere near Saakshi anymore...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#48
update was amazing.
arakshi bickering and sameer thoughts were very nice.
written very well.
continue soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#49
res / unres
what is between shree and saakshi???
loved arakshi
awesome update
continue soon
thanks for the pm
Edited by magati - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#50
Awesome blossom update yams...looved it..continue soonish and thank you heaps for the update :-D

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