ShaaNaz OS: Love at first sight.(ch4-pg4)updated. 26/12 completed - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
#11
vidyut??????????????????????? 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 (jumping frm terrace)
P.S : u look beautiful and ah usko kush rakho. or else ready for sautangiri .

and iss story keliye de rahi huin mere jaan ko.. only for this story 😉 😉!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#12
So Sweet zaibee too cute dear
Love for sucha sweet update
PLZ PM Muzhe bhi kar dena 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#13
Ch2.

As the mehndi rasam was taking place,girls' were having,as well as the boys'.It was Vidyut and Anika's sangeet,as well... Vidyut's celll buzzed.He answered the call and smiled.Anika saw him smiling.

''Kya hua,Vidyut? Aap smile kyun kar rahe hai?''

''Mere dost ke baare mein bola thha na tumhe,woh achuka hai...'' Vidyut said.

Suddenly,the lights were dimmed and a spotlight fell on a person,whose back was at the audience.

BG Music:
''Paan mein pudina dekha,
Naag ka nagina dekha,
Chikni chameli dekhi,
Chikna kamina dekha,
Chand ne cheater hoke cheat kiya toh,
Saare taare bole gili gili akkha...
Iss mein bhoot koi charha hai,
Taerna jaane na,
Ab toh kya bhula bara hai,
Farq pehchane na,
Zidd pakarke khara hai kambakht,
Chorna jaane na,
Battameez Dil, Battameez Dil,
Battameez Dil maane na..''

As he turned around to face everyone,Naaz was shocked and amazed to see him there.He was none other than Shaleen,her Shaa,her college love... She was really happy to see him... Shaleen also saw her and was happy to see her.She ran towards him and hugged him tightly.Shaleen also hugged her.As they seperate the hug,he pecked her forehead and asked, '' Kaisi hai meri Naaz?''

''Meri Naaz...'' Naaz thought and a blush appeared on her cheeks.

''Main acchi hu aur tum?'' Naaz asked.

''Main bhi accha hu..'' Shaleen said,while he gave her a side hug.
Naaz returned the hug and looked at the stage. She went their and asked the DJ to play a song.

BG Music:

''Gali mein maare phere,
Paas aaneko mere,
Gali mein maare phere,
Paas aaneko mere,
Kabhi parakhta nain mere,
toh,kabhi parakhta torh,
Kabhi parakhta nain mere,
toh,kabhi parakhta torh,
Ambarsariya,
Mundeyave kachiya kaliya na torh,
Ambarsariya,
Mundeyave kachiya kaliya na torh,
Teri Maa ne bole hai mujhe,
Teekhe se bol,
Teri Maa ne bole hai mujhe,
Teekhe se bol,
Ambarsariya...''

Naaz danced on this song,pointing her finger towards Shaleen,who was seen congratulating the soon-to-be married couple.Everybody clapped for Shaleen and Naaz.Shaleen wore a blue silk kurta with pathani salwar,while,Naaz wore a light baby pink coloured lehnga.

It was now Shlok and Shanaya's turn to dance. Shlok took Shanaya's hand in his and went to the dance floor.

BG Music:

''Dhaage torh lau,
Chnadni se noor ke,
Ghunghat bhi banalu,
Roshni se noor ke,
Sharma gayi toh,
Aagosh mein lo,
Saanso mein uljhi,
Rahe meri saansein,
Bol na halke halke,
Bol na halke halke,
Hoth se halke halke,
Bol na halke...''

Shlok and Shanaya were lost in eachother.Shlok pecked Shanaya's forehead and took her in a warm embrace.He thought about those days,when,Shanaya had to face the harshness of Shlok and his Aai.A tear fell from his eye.Shanaya wiped it and pecked his cheek.She assured him with her warm smile that everything is ok and they are really very happy now.Shlok loves her a lot now and he is a changed person.

Now,it was Vidyut and Anika's time to perform.Vidyut took Anika towards the revolving stage,which was put especially by Naaz and Shaleen.

As they stood on the revolving stage,Vidyut pulled Anika towards him and carefully held her from the waist.As they stage was revolving,rose petals fell from above,making it more special.Anika placed her head on Vidyut's chest and and hugged him tightly.

BG music:

''Chahu bhi toh main kaise kahu,
Saari jo baatein dil kehta hai,
Lehre sapno ki kaise ginu,
Dariya hi behta hi rehta hai,
Kehrahi hai kya yeh suno,
Meri khamoshiyaan,
Raat si lambi kahin,
Dil ki yeh dastaan,
Kaise kahu...''

Vidyut and Anika danced on their favorite song.Shlok-Shanaya and Naaz-Shaleen also danced in this song,along with VidNika...

TBC...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#14
Noozie Poozie,where is ur commentwa?
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Posted: 11 years ago
#15
Awww..zoobi...I loved dis update..!!!!!!! 😳
Soo shaa is vids jiju's frnd... Good..
Ohhh he dancing on badtameez dil.. Woww 😃
My college love.. 😳 😳 me blushing.. We hugged n he kissed my forehead.. Aww 😳
N me dancing on ambarsariya.. One of my favorite songs...!!!!!! 😊
Loved shlok-shaanu performance.. Romantic haa 😉 .. Sachi Sachi batao.. Yeh shlok ne shaanu ke saathme kya Kiya tha.. Main nahi chodne wali Yeh shlok ko 😡 😡 hw dare he..?????????????
Vidnika's performance ws soo sweet.. Both love each other sooo much..!! 😳
Eagerly waiting for the next part..!!!!!!!
Plzzz update soon... 😊
Edited by naz_2012 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: zebbie0504

Noozie Poozie,where is ur commentwa?

kardiya.. 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#17
It was so sweet dear
Zaibee good choice of songs amazing dear
Continue soon 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#18
Awssuuumm Re Zee...Yeh Shaa aa gya!! He dancing on Badtameez Dil..woww!! Ohooo...So Yeh Naazu ka College love hai!!! 😉 😉 Awww...ShlNaya performance was luvly!! Nd so was Naazu's!!! Awww...VidNika!!!! Cutie couple!!! Loved ur song selection! P.S-yeh Shlok ka kya chakkar hai?? Continuee Soonz!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#19
awesome update
Sha's entry was superb
so he's Naaz's college love
the performances of all the couples were awesome
the songs selection was nice
thanks for update
cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#20
Ch3.

As Shaleen congratulated his best friend,Vidyut and his wife-to-be Anika,his gaze fell on Shlok and Shanaya.He knew about Shlok and his family and the harshness and atrocities his friend Shanaya had to face due to Shlok.His eyes became red in anger,but,controlled it for the sake of Vidyut.

He went towards Shanaya.Shanaya was really happy to see Shaleen after many years.He gave her a side hug.Seeing Shlok made his blood boil.Shanaya sensing Shaleen's anger stood infront of Shlok and stopped Shaleen.Shaleen looked at Shanaya with broad eyes and asked, ''Kyun rokh rahi ho mujhe,Shaanu? Isne aur iski Maa ne tumhare saath kitne batsaluki se pesh aye,phir bhi,tum isski side lerahi ho?''...

''Dekho,Shaa... Shlok ab badal chuke hai,sach mein... Shlok ab mujhse bohut pyaar karte hai... Tab ki baat aur thi aur aaj ki baat aur hai... Main beeti baaton ko yaad karke meri aur Shlok ki present aur future ko kharab nahi karna chahti... Shaleen,apni iss friend keliye Shlok ko maaf kardo...''

Seeing Shanaya's pleas,Shaleen melted and gave a hug to Shanaya... Shaleen then turned to Shlok and gave him a hug and warned him not to hurt Shanaya anymore.

As the Sangeet ceremony came to an end,Vidyut arranged a small bonfire on the garden.Shaleen,Naaz,Shanaya and Shlok also joined Vidyut and Anika.They were having a great time,enjoying the company of their friends'. They played several games also.

''Shaleen,bata... Mumbai mein tujhe koi mili kya?'' Vidyut asked.

''Haan,Shaleen... Aap bataiye na... Aapki koi girlfriend hai ya nahi?'' Anika asked.

''Girlfriend... Mere Shaa ki girlfriend???... Nahi... Aisa nahi hosakta...'' Naaz was in thoughts...

Shaleen looked at Naaz for a while and then answered...

''Haan,hai na... Meri girlfriend bohut hi sweet and caring hai... Bohut pyaar karti hai mujhse... I love her so much...'' Shaleen said with a smile on his face.

Naaz felt bad when Shaleen mentioned about his girlfriend.Tears formed in her eyes.:. But she controlled them.

''Wow... Yeh toh bohut acchi baat hui... Aap unhe bhi yahaan le aate... Hum sab bhi unse mil lete... Waise,aapki girlfriend rehti kahaan hai?'' Anika asked.

''Anika,kya yaar... Shaleen ki gf toh uski dil mein rehti hai... Haan,yeh baat alag hai ki asal mein woh kahaan rehti hai?'' Shanaya chirped in.

Saying this,Shanaya gave a hi5 to Anika. Naaz was becoming more and more sad,as her friends' were continuously talking about Shaleen's girlfriend.

''Haan,Shaleen... Batao na... Tumhari girlfriend kahaan rehti hai? Tumhare chehre ko dekhke lagraha hai ki tum usse bohut miss kar rahe ho...'' Shlok said.

''Haan yaar,Shaleen... Teri gf ki ghar ka address de... Usse kal ke kal hi meri aur Anika ki shaadi ki invitation card bhijwa dete hai...'' Vidyut said.

''Arey mere pyaare yaaron,woh rehti hai issi shehar mein.Tum log usse shayad jaante bhi ho... Kal millena usse...Usse invite karne ki zarurat nahi hai... Woh janti hai... Maine hi bataya hai usse...''

Naaz,not being able to control her tears anymore,runs inside the house.Vidyut,Anika,Shanaya,Shlok looked at Naaz's retreating form.They were highly confused.Shaleen smiled at their confused expressions.

Shaleen signalled the others through his eyes' to look at front.All four looked at Naaz and that's when reality dawned upon them that,Shaleen's girlfriend was Naaz and all the while,he was talking about her,while,Naaz thought that Shaleen was talking about somebody else.

Vidyut,Anika,Shanaya and Shlok were really very happy for Shaleen and Naaz,because,till now,everybody knew half truth,but,now,the final part of the truth came out.

Precap: Last part.
Edited by zebbie0504 - 11 years ago

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