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Posted: 11 years ago
#31
nice story piu...
loved this very Ms.i-am-phobic-to-most-things-Riya 😆
arjun in village???
nice... 😉
continue soon...

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Posted: 11 years ago
#32
awesome update dear.
both are watching romantic movies..
precap loks interesting.
continue soon.
and thanx for the pm.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#33
superb yar...!!
mr perfect ke sath romantic movie...!!!😉 wow...
and then all her thoughts focused on him cool...!!
ohh no kiss hote hote reh gyi...!!
continue soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#34
unresed my comment on pg-4
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Posted: 11 years ago
#35
omg that was hot and romantic
riya's fall,the movie and
the last part wow
update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#36
seriously guys m very very very happy u all luvd my os so much so thnx for dat n all ur sweet cmnts n likes was adorable it really touched my heart thnkew for it guys muahhh luv u all n here goes d last part...


Part 3 (last part)


' Riya...' a voice cums suddenly frm another room.
I push him away and manage to calm myself.
It was shree asking me to cum to d hall. ' Mom is calling u.'
It dat moment, my heartbeat thuds very rapidly. I rush to attend to my mother.
Later in d evening, we all make a plan to go to a famous restaurant in d city. As we get ready for d outing, I consciously try to ignore wht happened wid Mr Perfect dat aftnoon. Bt still I ensure to put on my best dress ---- and I realize how very pleased I m to hv taken d pains of bringing so many dresses wid me on d trip.
Am I trying to impress him? No way! Everybody is trying to look der best, so why shouldn't I?
Bt I find dat I'm more nervous den usual.
Soon, everyone is ready n it's time to leave.
' You two, go in d other car,' says Mom.
' What? I am surprised. Mom is asking me to go alone wid a boy! I insist, ' No, I will also go wid u.'
' Yes, Mom, der is no need of another car,' says Mr Perfect.
Thank God! I cannot bear landing in one more scandalous moment aft dat aftnoon.
' No,' says my mother. ' You will go in separate car. That's it.' No more discussions.
I know what mom is trying to do. Seriously, Indian mothers can b a headache sometimes!
We take another car ---- this one's an Audi!
The streetlamps look beautiful dis foggy evening, between d mist n dark night
Mr Perfect doesn't say a word. So to end dis awkwardness I start a conversation.
' How abt your higher studies? You don't want to study further? '
' Riya, I have already done wid my studies I have done IPS n m an Acp n second hand command of etf dats emergency task force Mumbai actually I stay in Mumbai coz of my work n regularly try n visit my family n stay wid dem in our farmhouse n even help my father in his business sometimes...so wht else u want me to do?'
My jaw almost falls to d ground. ( hez an Acp! )
' Oh!' I said. ' So you would want a wife who can stay wid you? I mean a housewife.'
' Yes, I would definitely want a wife who can stay with me, Riya.'
I knew it! A narrow - minded control freak. Huh!
' Bt, he continues, ' if my wife wants to work, she can work wid me or papa in our business.'
He never ceases to surprise me. I m feeling gud abt it. Bt still I m confused abt y he wants me to marry him? He can get ne girl he wants.
Suddenly, d car stops n I notice v r near a hill.
' Where are we? Don't tell me dat d car has stopped working.'
' No, Riya. Please stop watching those romantic movies in which d hero --- heroine get stuck in a car n den der romance starts,' he says, grinning.
' Whatever! Just a thought; it has nothing to do with romantic movies.' I say, annoyed.
' Let's go.'
' Where?'
' Up there. To d top of d hill.'
' Are u kidding me? I' m not going der.'
' Huh! Stubborn girl.'
He takes my hand n we move towards d hill. As we reach d top, I can see d river on d other side. These scene is breathtaking. Although it is far below us, d sheer height does not seem to scare me. Instead, I feel great ---- so amused n thrilled.
A cold breeze blows my hair over my face.
' It is so beautiful, nothing can b more beautiful,' I say.
' I knew you will like it.'
Suddenly, Mr Perfect gets down on one knee, pulls out a ring n says d world's most magical words: I LOVE YOU, RIYA. WILL YOU MARRY ME?
I m dumbstruck at dat moment. Here is Mr Perfect ---- and dat too on his knees, asking me too marry him!
This cannot actually b happening. All dis only happens in d movies, I wish I could hold on to dat moment forever.
' Riya, plz reply, my knees r hurting n it's very cold out here.'
I smile, my eyes wet wid tears, n say, ' YES!'
Thrilled, he gets up n slips d ring onto my finger. He den hugs me tightly. I can hear his breath in my ears as he says, ' I liked u wen mom showed me your picture...
And I liked u even more wen u fell frm d train.'
' Then I sld fall every time,' I laughed.
' I wanted u ri8 der while watching dat movie,' he whispered in my ears. ' I love you! Be mine. Be my wife.'
I look up at him. His lips come close to mine n den he softly kisses me on my lips.
' I love you too,' I responded gleefully.
And, like every other love story wid a happy ending,' we lived happily ever after'.
{ piu }
Edited by piupan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#37
Enchanting update dr...!!!
Awww Shree broke their cute moment...aarrrgghhh couldn't he called her after sometime... 😉 😉
Wow her mom is smart lady...she purposely send thm together so that thy got some time alone n understand eachother... 😊 😉
Loved Riya's reaction whn he told her that he is an acp...!!!
Awww she was surprised to knw that he is so broad-minded...!!!!
The way Arjun confessed his feelings n proposed to her was mind blowing...!!!!
Loved Ariya moments...n that kiss was adorable...!!
Beautiful ending...!!!
Edited by Aks13 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#38
Loved the part
Ariya coming closer
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Posted: 11 years ago
#39
OMG...
A very beautiful ending.
Loved how Arjun proposed to Riya...
Yay...
Ariya together...
Lovely story...
Do write more like this...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#40
Wowww owsum and sweet part

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