ariya os(three short):A train to my marriage

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ok guys plz joote chappal mat maarna i knw bahut din se updts nhi diye so its a compensation frm my side i knw now u'll thnk Ki yeh toh humesha hi aise compensations deti h naya kya h par plz bear me for dis n yaa dis is a totally diffrnt story n i hv read dis story frm 1of my fav writers book so m copy pastng it here bas characters alag h chalega naa... ;) no etf only ariya shree n der family wrk prffstn to is diffrnt n yaa most impt thng dis story is frm riya's point of view means shez telling dis story third persn k
so here it strts


Part 1
I m affraid of heights of all kinds --- valleys, mountains, rivers, railwy stn bridges n even relationships make me sick
And 2dy m going to experience all of dem.
' Riya, cum fast, v'll miss d trn ! ' Mom shts, breakng my trn of thghts.
' I wld b glad if I cld, ' I mutter, puttng on my dark brwn blazer.
One more addition to my hate list is dis goddamned winter season. I am very sensitive to getng a bad cough in dis season n I cannot bear d chill. So I hv put as many woollens in my bag as on my body.
Here cums d auto ricksaw.
' Cum, cum, every1 get inside, ' Dad says.
' Wht d hell, riya! Hw many clothes hv u stuffed in ur bag? It is way too heavy! ' screams shree, my brother.
' Don't wry, I'll tk my luggage myself. You don't hv to bother abt it '.
I immediately regret d sentnc aft syng it. It is heavy! Uff!
Soon v r in frnt of a big --- no, actually a monstrously huge --- railway bridge.
' Okay, I can do dis. '
I try to b a brave girl. I m not going to luk dwn. Bt d combination of loudly hooting trns n my immense fear of heights make d situation more horrific. Wen it cms to heights, I can b a total freak
' Here r our seat numbers, ' says mom wen v board d trn.
I tk my laptop n climb on to d upper berth. As it is an all night journey, every1 will b asleep soon n m going to watch d Korean movie My Little Bride. I luv romantic Korean movies.
By d time its 3 a.m I feel sleepy. Bt first I hv to go to d loo, so I jst wait for d trn to stop at any stn. That's 1 more additn to my list of phobias--- I cannot go to d loo wen d trn is movng. Nw u must b getting a clearer idea of my freakishness.
I doze off later. Then suddenly its raining n I'm all drenched; a wave of water comes to drown me n I'm awake!
' Holy shit, shree! Are you f**kng out of ur mind! ' Its turn out to b part of a dream, n shree was tryng to wake me up by pourng water on my face.
He laughed stupidly n said, ' We are almost abt to reach Ambala.'
Yes, we r going to our village which is located in Ambala. Its always been very exciting for me to go der Bt dis time its a little diffrnt. I m going to face my fear of relationships.
We r going to meet Suryakant Rawte uncle n his family. And m sure of d real reasn we r meeting d family --- dey want me to marry Rawte uncles one n only son who lives wid dem in der farmhouse. Der family is very affluent Bt i never wanted a man who lives in a remote area n is a farmer. I think he must b barely a graduate --- a norrow minded control freak. Men in villages want housewives, not working girls.
The trn arrives at d stn. Coolies r competing to get into d trn. Everybody rushes out of d trn except me. I m struggling wid my bag n suddenly i tumble on to d platform, head over heels. Shit! I jst fell frm d trn. God! Can I do dis any better? f**k, f**k, f**k...
Before I can manage to get up myself, a hand comes through d crush of bodies to my rescue. Widout lukng at who it was, who offered to help me get up, I grab that hand n pull myself up. Having stood up, I immediately start brushing my clothes. Den I luk up to thnk d man who helped me ...I'm struck dumb. Hez dangerously handsome.
' Thank you. ' this is all i manage to say.
Hez wearng a white shirt wid a blue jeans. The top buttons of his shirt are unbottoned. His perfectly trimmed muscles can b seen; his biceps give d perfect shape to his arms. Is he no feeling cold? May b hez already too hot.
Suddenly his voice breaks d spell, ' Are u ok? '
' Yes, thnk u agn, ' I say, hesitant n embarrassed.
' Hw many times i hv to tell u to b careful! ' chides mom.
Shree is laughing as usual. Now he has got my ' new trn scandal ' to tlk abt for at least dis mnth.
I den realize dat Rawte uncles family has been der all dis time. And d handsome man is non other den his one n only son. I still don't knw his name. Now dis is more embarrassing.
' Please gv me ur bag, ' he says softly.
' No, I can manage, ' I muttered.
' Yes, I hv seen that already, ' he grins as he almost snatches my bag frm me.
Soon we r in der car --- an Endeavour. It is cozy inside. Hez driving d car n I feel butterflies in my stomach. I still don't knw his name.
Finally v hv arrived at d farmhouse. It is beautiful, completely surrounded by nature. The entrance gate is covered wid some kind of flowering creeper. There's a name plate: RAWTE RESIDENCE. The building itself is breathtakingly gorgeous. Could der b anything else dat one can want in life?
We r in our separate rooms now. I am feeling very sleepy so I jst snuggle under my quilt n sleep.
Wen I wake up, its dark outside. Lookng out d window, I' m tryng to recollect my thoughts n den I realize dat dis is not my room. I get up n go downstairs to d main hall.
Everbody is der havng dinner. Crap...I realize I slept all day.
' Come, dear, have dinner, ' said aunty.
Mrs Rawte is a beautiful lady n anybody can see wer her son gets his good luks from.
Mr Perfect is also der, sittng bsides my mom n tlkng abt his wrk. Huh, wht attitude...he didn't even notice me? As if I care...
Aft dinner, v return to our rooms. Now everybody is going to sleep wen I' m wide awake...
Thnk god I hv my laptop wid me.
Somebody knocks at d door. ' May I come in? '
' Yes, ' I answer,
And here he is ---- Mr Perfect.
Precap:
He walks a little closer. Crap! I cannot move...I want to step bck Bt I find myself simply unable to move. I need water; it is getting too hot here.
Suddenly he pulls me into his arms. My mouth is so close to his. Hez lukng into my eyes. I am tryng to look down, afraid dat he can read my eyes n can see into my soul. He lifts up my chin n gently runs his thumb over my lips.
ok guys now my fingers r really paining its not easy to type in cell phn dat to an entire part bt compensation h toh karna toh padhega khair dis is d 1st prt of dis story par agr aapko yeh part pasand aaya toh hi nxt part dungi orelse nhi k n sry as i said Ki cell phn se updt kiya so isliye pm Mein link nhi de skti khud hi search karna padhega ok n yaa pata nhi kyun Bt mere cell se kisi k bhi updts Mein like post nhi ho rhe so plz sry 4 dat plz don't tk it wrngly.
{ piu }



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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow I really liked this... Lol mr perfect..
Please update soon and whenever possible please add me to ur pm list...

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nice starting !!!!
I like it !!!
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That's awesome
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Wow
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Superb start... i loved it
Different concept...
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superb superrbbb...👏
loved every detail of it...
Sorry to say but i was imagining myself in place of you... It was a pure fantasy I wish one day could come true...😆

Do continue soon and pm me too.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Mr. Hotte is perfect
Can't wait to read more
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Superb part
So me hygiene Arjun is perfect for riya
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Awesome start...
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