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Posted: 11 years ago
my darling sanju is sik aha waiting to see his evil avataar
omg nice cs and explainations

the life of a undercover cop must be tough

such a beautiful salute with this story


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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesomw.
Loved aisha and Rishi's cs.
Cont soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Tai!!
😭
I feel s0 sorry for Aisha!!
A perfect daddy's girl... But y s0much pain in her life.. !! Ek akeli ladki aur itna bada operation! 😲
Poor girl!! But shez very strong! Hamari lady dabangg!!

Unn chips me kya hai...??
I just hope her cover doesnt blow!!

Hey I am loving this Rishi already!!
bandey me baat hai...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Good choice of Sik
The past of of aisha n rishi is interesting
but still why did Arjun deny to help aisha
considering his chara he might have jumped to help him
waiting for nxt part
update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
its getting intense day by day luking forward plzzz arjun aur riya ki luv story b toh dikhaao and involve arjun too pta chale saari khundak sameer pe nikaale baat pta chale uski vjh se
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Posted: 11 years ago
wonderful character sketch...

so Aisha did go to Arjun and he sent her to sameer...😊😊

She is a dancer and pathan saves her from his men for his bussiness...i loved this part...😳

rishi aka ronnie...hacks colleague's email addresses and blackmails them??😆😆

undercover operations are attaching both of them...they know both like each other but each have their own limitations...😊

as a whole nice update...

i loved sikander...plz do give a charater sketch of him too whenever its possible..😳😳

continue soon..thanks for pm bhavna di
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow diii...
i just loved the update...
its amazing..
i also liked sikender..
just enjoy the update..
but feeling bad for ayesha...
continue soon.
and thanx for the pm.
P.S.- I like sanjay dutt in sikki role vo aisa hi lagta hain.
sorry if you liked sanjay dutt but i dont like him
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Posted: 11 years ago
@Unishaz, @Zubiya92, @Aabish02, @Sarita, @Harsha, @Laila, @SameerkiMaya, @DesiiiDivaaa and all the silent readers who hit the Like button... Thank you so much for liking this part and encouraging me 😊
@Sneha ... Thanks dear 😊 ... awww... my new stalker ... love u 😊
@Birdie ... Thanks dear 😊 ... stay tuned for more fun ... miss u a lot baby
@Manali ... Thanks dear 😊 ... maine ekdum dhoondh k kamina nikala hai 😉
@Goldie ... Thanks dear 😊 ... stay tuned for more fun 😊
@Zuby ... Thanks dear 😊 ... yes... that was the deal 😉 ... hacking into ur colleague's emails ... 🤣 ... keep trying 😉😉 ... hmmm ... I was looking for one face which has a very very very dark image and this char of Kancha Cheena and his village Mandwa was the perfect bolloywood type things that fitted here well... after all my RNP's kahani poori filmy hai 😉
Abhi thoda time hai... coz i'm actually trying to build up the base of the final show 😳
@Sumu ... Thanks dear 😊 ... yes... humari lady dabangg... aur uske saath Rishi 😉 ... abhi to Rishi ki entry huyi hai... dekho wo agey agey kya karta hai 😉 ... Chips mein kya hai ye next part mein aa raha hai 😊
@Payal... Thanks dear 😊 ... yes... a small Arni in next part ... 😆😆😆 abhi to Sik ki entry bhi nahi huyi hai ... and u r saying kill him 😉😉 ... thoda intezar karo baby 😉
@AnjuRish ... Thanks dear 😊 ... yes... Kancha cheena as Sikky ... ekdum dark character 😉
@Kunchu ... Thanks dear 😊 ... Well... quite obvious that Arjun didn't agree to help her because he too wasn't sure that the path he might take will take him to Sikky or not and adding to it, after Roshni and Aisha's parents murders, he didn't want to put Aisha in danger and that is the reason he sent her to Sameer.
@Ila ... Thanks dear 😊 ... Well... ye Ariya love story nahi hai ... but yes ... Ariya is a small part of it and it comes when it should 😉 ... I don't like forcing the tracks in between 😳 ... Arjun-Sameer k dhamake bhi honge ... par usmein bhi abhi time hai 😉
@Rimi ... Thanks dear 😊 ... yes, Arjun sent Aisha to Sameer fir her safety but she was determined for revenge and was in a different state of mind and even Sameer couldn't help her... Aisha is a smart girl ... She knows how to get things done 😉 ... Rishi is a fun guy when off duty ... a normal young man 😊 ... For Sikandar ... yes... i'm planning a whole part on him very soon 😉
@Megha ... Thanks dear 😊 ...LOL 😆😆😆 ... yes... Sanju ki image hi aisi ban gayi hai 😉
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Edited by bgargate - 11 years ago
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Friends,

I'm back with next part ... replied to comments above 😳.
So here is the part 33 A
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Next day Shree starts working on the chips that Sameer gave him. It took him 1 week to go through all the chips and gather the scattered pieces of information together. He was shocked to see all that.
There were video clips and still photos evidences of some high profile people and some policemen meeting Pathan and others in the gang, Policemen taking the "Hafta" from gangsters, Evidences of many drug and arms smuggling deals and many maps showing the routes and the layouts of some places where a lot of arms and drugs were hidden.
Along with it there was a message from Aisha, that there is something bigger planned after monsoon is over. It is a big consignment of some lethal drugs and explosives and that Pathan himself is going to take personal interest in it. And all this was going to be planned in a small village in Konkan... Mandwa. There was a hint that the lead to Sikandar must be in Mandwa.
It was July and the gang was waiting for Monsoon to get over so that it was easier to get the smuggled goods through sea route. All this was being planned around September and October.
He went to Sameer with all this information and Sameer too was shocked. Sameer told Shree to be quiet and not tell this to anybody because this case was not officially with ETF. Shree had realised when he heard Sikandar's name in Aisha's message that it is related to Arjun. He promised Sameer that this information will not be leaked.
After a while, Sameer gets a call from Coelho who gives him Ronnie's message which matches with the information that he got from Aisha about that bigger deal. He sends back a message for Ronnie to stay calm and expresses his desire to meet him if possible. Next day he gets a message from Ronnie to pick him up pretending to investigate Billa's murder case and contact Insp. Mane.
As per the plan, Sameer connects one murder case with Billa and contacts Insp. Mane and tells him to get this suspect Ronnie. Things fall perfectly as expected. Insp. Mane was a corrupt man and he informed someone in Johnny's gang. Jojo, who was Billa's very good friend and hated Ronnie for killing Billa, took it as on opportunity and told Insp. Mane about Ronnie's whereabouts. Next morning, Insp. Mane arrests Ronnie and takes him to police station wher Sameer was already waiting for him. Ronnie
shows Sameer a code tattoo on his arm secretly and Sameer recognizes that he is Rishi. Sameer's orders Mane to handover Ronnie to him. Sameer sends Rishi to ETF detention room.
Everybody is surprised about this case, but Sameer makes an excuse that this is related to an old case and refuses to divulge anymore details goes to meet Rishi in the detention room. Arjun is confused but decides to take this up later.
Sameer takes the evidences that he got from Aisha to check with Rishi.
In the detention room:
Rishi gets up as Sameer locks the door behind him and extends his hand for handshake introducing himself.
Rishi: Rishi Malhotra!!
Sameer(holding his hand): ACP Sameer Rathod!!
Rishi: aap mujhse milna kyun chahtey they?
Sameer: abhi batata hoon...
Sameer shows him everything that he got from Aisha and Rishi is surprised to hear a message in Aisha's voice.
Rishi: ye sab aapko kahan se mila?
Sameer(takes a deep breath): wo mai baad mein batata hoon
Rishi: aur ye awaz to Nadiya ki thi... kya wo bhi koi undercover agent hai?
Sameer: officially nahi... par unofficially ... kisi ko bina bataye wo ye kaam kar rahi thi...
Rishi is confused.
Sameer: uska asli naam Aisha hai... Aisha Kapoor ... Mr Ajay Kapoor ki beti ...
Rishi froze at this revelation. He remember reading the name Ajay Kapoor in the case file and it was shocking to know that Aisha is his daughter. Sameer quickly told about his meeting with Aisha a year back and her determination the avenge her parents' murder and his recent meet with her few days back when she gave him these chips.
Rishi was totally lost. He didnt know how to react.
Sameer: ye deal monsoon k baad hogi... aur agar hum tab tak shaant rahe to hi behtar hoga ...ab humare paas lagbhag sare saboot hain... aur... (takes a pause)
Rishi: Aur?
Sameer: Mr Rishi ... ek personal request hai aapse... i hope aap meri help karenge...
Rishi: dont be formal ACP Rathore ...
Sameer: i need a favour from you... jab tak ye case khatam nahi ho jaata ... tab tak kya aap ... Aisha ko protect kar sakte hain? just make sure it doesnt blow your and her cover.
Rishi looks intently at Sameer.
Sameer: i really feel guilty Mr Rishi... agar mai usey insaaf dila paata to shayad wo is musibat mein nahi fasti... kahi na kahi mai bhi zimmedar hoon uski is haalat ka ... pata nahi itne din usne kya kya sahaa hoga... aur ab usey wahan se bahar nikaalna itna asaan nahi hoga... uski jaan ko khatra ho sakt ahai agar wo gang se baahar niklati hai to ... aur waha bhi wo kab tak safe rahegi pata nahi... isliye...
Rishi(intently): dont worry ACP Rathore ... i promise mai usey kuch nahi hone dunga (Aisha's face flashes in front of his eyes while he assured Sameer.)
They discussed a few more things and their course of action that they will be taking after monsoon and further communication to happen via their old channel.
It was almost 3 hours since Sameer took Rishi in his custody and next thing too happened as per their plan. As expected Pathan got into action as he got to know that Ronnie has been picked up by police. He got into touch with his contacts in the department and home ministry.
Sameer's phone rang. It was a call from SP.
Sameer: Jai hind sir...
SP: Rathod... us ladke ko humein chhodna padega
Sameer(smirked and gave a thumbs up singal to Rishi): Ji sir... waise bhi humein ussey kuch nahi mila ... dont worry ... wo jaldi hi baahar hoga ... Jai hind!
Sameer disconnected the call and smiled at Rishi. Rishi too passed a weak smile as he was still in Aisha's thoughts.
Sameer and Rishi shook hands once again and parted.
Sameer was relieved as things seemed to be settled down and they got time till the end of monsoon to prepare for the case.
Rishi was occupied with Aisha's thoughts and was making up his mind to talk to her. He sympathized with her and respected her for her courage. And very soon he snapped out of his thoughts as he reached near their hideout and a big smile appeared on his face as he had killed two birds in one stone. With this drama, he met ACP Rathod and discussed the further strategy and trapped Jojo. He knew Pathan will reprimand Jojo for getting Ronnie caught.
Sameer too left for his place.
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Edited by bgargate - 11 years ago
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Part 33 B

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Away from all this 2 souls were enjoying the momentary bliss. Monsoon was in full swing in Mumbai.
Riya didnt bring her car to ETF office that day, so Arjun offered to drop her home.
They sat quietly watching the rain drops falling on the windscreen of the car and being wiped away by the wiper making the view clearer. Somewhere these drops were washing the dust from old memories & bringing forth the beautiful moments spent with HER in the same Rains...somewhere love was blooming...Somewhere love was being cherished
(Thanks to Aisha Vashishth for these beautiful lines)
Both were lost in their thoughts.
Riya always loved the rains. She loved dancing in the rain, to feel the water droplets on her face, the slight shiver... all this thrilled her... Of course all this came with a bonus of sneezes and glares from her elder sister. But this time her Annu di was not with her. She felt a bit sad missing her but very soon the thought of Annu being happy and safe with Sameer made her happy and she smiled to herself.
Lagi aaj sawan ki phir woh jhadi hai
wohi aag seene mein phir jal padi hai
lagi aaj sawan ki phir woh jhadi hai
Arjun had the best time of his courtship period with Roshni during the monsoon. He remembered how they used to have cutting chai in a road side tea stall and shared roasted corn simmered with lemon, salt and pepper. Roshni's smiling face flashed in front of his eyes. And suddenly he noticed Riya smiling and he too felts his lips curling into smile.
Kuch aise hi din teh woh jab hum miley teh
chaman mein nahin phool dil mein khiley teh
wohi toh hai mausam magar rut nahin woh
mere sath barsat bhi roh padi hai
lagi aaj sawan ki phir woh jhadi hai
He was still scared to aknowledge his feelings for Riya and what added to it was Sameer's concern for Riya. Sameer and Annu were planning to look for a suitable match for Riya and he knew Sameer would never trust him after what happened to Roshni. Somewhere deep down his heart he too believed that Roshni was killed because of him.
Koi kash dil pe jara hath rakh le
mere dil ke tukdoh ko ik sath kar le
magar yeh hai khwabon khayalon ki baatein
kabhi toot kar cheez koi judi hai
lagi aaj sawan ki phir woh jhadi hai
Riya while thinking about Sameer and Annu wished to have someone besides her too. Someone with whom she can share little joys of her life just like Sameer and Annu did. She longed for that feeling of love. She stole a glance at Arjun but was disappointed realising that it was impossible to imagine all this with him. After he lost Roshni, things were changed for him and they will never be same. Looking at his gloomy face she felt an urge to hold him in arms hiding him from the world and assure him that everything will be fine. But she knew that was not possible, at least for now.
They stopped at a road side tea stall for tea and Arjun orders for tea for himself. Riya makes a funny face when that tea stall guy brings tea for Arjun in glass.
Riya: Sir aapko chai hi peeni thi to... wo to mere ghar pe bhi pee saktey they ... ek to ye baarish aur ye yaha ki chai... is glass mein... i mean... it's so
unhygienic .. aap beemar pad gaye to ?
By now Arjun was used to Riya's hygiene obsession. As usual, he glared back at her sipping tea and she understood it was a signal for her to keep quiet and lowered her gaze. Arjun was actually amused by her hygiene obsession and was really touched by her concern for her, but he could not express it.
They started off again after Arjun finished tea. There was a huge traffic jam because of rains. They had to take an alternative route which passed from Sameer's place.

It was almost 8:00 PM. Riya couldnt control her urge to meet Annu. She pleaded Arjun to drop her at Sameer's place and he agreed.
When they entered the society gate, Arjun too felt like going inside. Both of them reached upstairs. Everyone is happy to see them. And Suman starts complaining to Riya and Arjun about Sameer's cancelled plan and Annu's timid behaviour. Sameer and Annu were helplessly looking at Arjun and Riya and they were amused at this scene.
Suman asks them to stay back for dinner and goes to prepare for it. Riya and Annu follow her, but Suman is still taunting Annu and these girls were amused at Suman's "love wala gussa" and "gusse wala love".
Sameer was scared that now Arjun might ask him about the important case for which he cancelled his honeymoon and he knew he wont be able to lie to Arjun. But before Arjun could ask anything, his eyes fall on a bunch of keys hanging on a keyring holder. He realised that his mom left the keys of his flat at Sameer's place.
With last few days spent happily at Sameer's wedding and today's weather reminding him of Roshni, he felt like going back to the flat. He wished to feel the place again where he had spent the most beautiful moments of his life. He wanted to feel the presence of Roshni around himself. He got up and walked towards the key holder.
He extended his hand to pick up the key with hesitation but quickly withdrew it back. Sameer and his father noticed all this.
DSR: kab tak bhaagoge beta ... (Arjun turns to look at him) ... wo tumhare andar hai ... us ghar se door reh ke kya tum purani yaado ko bhula paaye ho ab tak? Nahi na ...
Arjun knew what Mr Rathore said was true. He stayed away from that house because Roshni's memories haunted him, but even after living in the lodge, he couldnt shrug off her thoughts. So what was there to be scared of?
Nothing ... and in fact by staying away from the home that Roshni herself he was hurting her more. He decides to go back to that flat once again to feel his love back.
Arjun: aap sahi bol rahey hain Papa... wo meri zindagi ka atoot hissa hai ... nahi alag kar sakta ussey... aur karna bhi nahi chahta ... to fir kyun door bhaagu ussey...
Mr Rathore smiles and Sameer puts his palm on Arjun's shoulder and lightly presses it.
Arjun picks up the keys and goes to his flat. He glides his fingers on the nameplate and looks at it for a few seconds. He opens the lock and switches on the light. He realised that everything was clean and guessed that Suman was regularly taking care of his house after Savita and Suryakant left.
He saw that a small Diya was still lit up in front of Roshni's photo. He was touched to see that Suman still did this. Roshni's face in the photo was glowing with the aura of light of Diya.
He glided his fungers on her photo. It hurt him and a lone tear escaped his eye. He turned and went to their bedroom. Everything was still same. He lied on the bed lost in the memories of Roshni.
He got up after a while and went outside and saw Riya looking at Roshni's photo. He walked towards her.
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A little while back
Riya came out of the kitchen and saw Arjun was not with Sameer and Mr Rathore. She enquired about him and Sameer told her that he had gone to the neighbouring flat which was owned by him. Riya was surprised to know this. She excuses herself and out of curiosity goes to Arjun's flat. The door was ajar.
She entered the flat and stood there observing the place. It was beautifully decorated. The furniture, curtains, colour of the walls was tastefully chosen. Her eyes fall on Roshni's photo and she is mesmerised looking at her beauty. She walked towards it as if in a trance and stood in front of it. She was watching Roshni's photo for the first time. She felt sad that such an angel lost her life for no mistake of hers. She stood there for a while when she sense Arjun's presence behind her.
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Arjun came close to Riya but before he could say anything a breeze of air entered the room from the window and the flame of the diya flutters a little. Riya is faster and Cups her hand covering the flame of diya, protecting it and Arjun cups his hands cupping Riya's cupped hands and their eyes lock and they seemed to be lost in each other's eyes. All this in fromt of Roshni's smiling photo.
As if Roshni is happy to see Arjun with Riya, the girl who is slowly changing her Arjun and bringing him back to the normal and happy world and being with him in all circumstances.
Arjun snaps out after a few seconds and moves to the window to close it and Riya removes her hand after the window is closed. Riya quickly leaves and Arjun stood there for a while looking at her retreating back.
Riya(thinking while rushing out): hey bhagwan ye kya ho gaya?... Akdu Rawte ko pasand nahi hai ki uski personal life ke barey mein koi kuch bhi kahey...humesha kehtey hain ki "mujhe kisi ki help ya sahare ki zarurat nahi hai"... aur aaj to mai uske ghar ke andar... usi ki wife ke photo ke saamne... diye ke paas jakar ... usey sambhalne ki koshish kar rahi thi... in short... wo bhi to ek tarah ki "help" huyi na... Riya Mukherjee!!!! be prepared for a dhamaka... tune to diye ko bujhne se bacha liya...par tuje ko nahi bacha sakta is toofan se...

Arjun was earlier lost in Roshni's thoughts but when he tried to save the flame of Diya, his hands instead of covering the flame, touched Riya's hands.
He looked up into his eyes and was completely lost into them. He couldn't think of anything else. He looked at Roshni's photo after Riya left.
Roshni: kya soch rahe ho ACP Rawte? fir se us bechari ladki ko daantoge? kyunki wo ye diya bachane ki koshish kar rahi thi?
Arjun is quiet.
Roshni: kyun Arjun? agar wo diya bachane nahi aati to tum usey insensitive samajhtey... ki wo help karne nahi aayi... ab aayi hai to bhi tum usey galat samajh rahey ho... kyun kartey ho tum us bechari ke saath aisa? dekho... ab wo sirf tumhari team member nahi hai ... kuch aur bhi hai ...
Arjun: Kuch aur?
Roshni: haan... wo tumhari Annu bhabhi ki behen hai ... aur tum uski "Didi ke dewar"
Arjun's lips curve into a smile at this "Didi ke dewar" thought.
Roshni: chalo jao ab... Sam intezar kar raha hoga... aur haan... please ye smile banaye rakho... meri baat yaad rakhna?
He looks at the photo one last time and leaves the flat. He locks it and comes back to Sameer's place.
They have dinner and Arjun casually steals glances at Riya and finds her looking at him with puppy eyes. Obviously she was scared after what happened in his flat.
Later he drops her home and goes to his lodge. Drive to her place was quiet which surprised Riya.
Once in lodge, Arjun decides that very soon he will be shifting back to his flat.
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So... how was it? Sorry for any spelling/grammatical mistakes 😳
No pre-cap as even I haven't yet decided at what am I going to write next 😉
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Bhavna
Edited by bgargate - 11 years ago

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