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Posted: 11 years ago
Part 32 B
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Rishi Malhotra.
A typical punjabi boy born and brought up in Chandigarh. Son of a high profile intelligence officer, always wanted to be like his father. In spire f opposition from his mother, he opted for this profession.
A trained undercover agent, successfully handled many missions as well as the desk job as a hacker when required. His life has always been a roller coaster ride.
When he was assigned in a field job as an undercover agent, his life was full of adventures, a game of hide and seek... he had to hide himself and seek the enemy and finish him. He good looks often helped him and he used to get popular among the women almost everywhere he went. His charm ususally worked even on the enemy's women agents. Because of the stressful job he used to drink and smoke but he knew his limits as not only his life but the nation's security was also at stake.
When he was assigned to the desk job, his life was more eventful as most of his time in office was spent in hacking various websites and cracking security systems. And his favourite pass time was to hack his colleagues' email ids and read their emails. Most of his targets were his colleagues who had extra marital affairs and used some secret ids to communicate with their girlfriends.
Just like other moms his mom too worried for him. After she lost her husband, she never wanted her son to join this profession, but she was helpless. She wanted him to get married and settle down in life, but because of his job, he was scared to commit to a relationship. Passing affairs had become a part of his life, but he never fell in love before he met her.
He remembered the day when he was assigned this case while sitting in a shanty.
His boss called him and told him that he needs to go to Mumbai for his new mission. He was given a few details about the case and he researched about it on his own to prepare himself for his part. He found this case weird. An ACP and Joint Commissioner of Police working on a case and they were attacked. Joint commissioner of police and his wife were killed. ACP survived, but was shattered and became reckless after his wife was killed. The ACP in his statement mentioned a Sikandar but there was no proof of his existence and Rishi's mission was to find this Sikandar or at least a proof of his existence remaining undercover.
Chief of ETF Mumbai had requested to keep this mission a secret as there were some people from police department whose name had come up in the initial investigation. ETF Chief had secretly given him the findings of the previous investigation.
This helped Rishi in prepare his mission so that he knows from whom he has to be careful and whom he can trust. He was also given a sketch of the Sikandar which was drawn based on the description given by the ACP. He finalised his look and role of a drug peddler Ronnie. He created a fake identity and fake police records with his fingerprints recorded under the name Ronnie.
He entered the gang as Ronnie by killing an important and powerful member of the gang Billa. He posed it to be an accident. Billa's boss, Johnny (owner of Johnny's club where Nadiya was a dancer) was shocked and was enraged at first but his boss Pathan Lala was impressed by him. Billa was one of the bravest member of the gang and someone who overpowered and killed him has to be more sharper and he was recruited by Pathan.
Though some of the old members were unhappy, they accepted Ronnie due to Pathan's fear. Some of them were friendly with him, some were cold but she... she was indifferent to him. She always ignored him which didn't go down well with him as he was used to make women fall for him. It hurt his ego after a few days but he realised that she was indifferent to everyone. There were men in the gang who tried to make a pass on her, but she always shooed them away.
She was a dancer in Johnny's club and attracted many customers and was an important player in the gang. Being a girl, it was easier for her to transfer drugs and she did her job perfectly. And this was the reason, Pathan gave her protection from the men in the gang who lusted on her. Pathan didn't want to lose such a reliable girl from the gang. He trusted her.
She became a mystery for Ronnie. He had realised that she was hiding something behind this indifference. She had built a wall around herself to keep herself safe.

And this mystery attracted Rishi towards her. He never lusted on her but he couldnt help look into those deep brown eyes. He sympathised with her and slowly this sympathy turned into love. He knew he was falling for her. He always had an urge to protect her, but she always kept herself away from him.
At the same time, he succeeded in getting some big gang members eliminated by giving the tips about the rave parties, smuggling deals and getting them raided. He overlooked enture gang and kept a hawk eye on all the operations and always tipped about the parties where he was not involved directly and was not supposed to know anything about that event. But he made sure Nadiya was safe.
He hoped that if there is someone called Sikandar, he will someday come out in open at least to reprimand the gang members for the losses.
He knew about that big deal and decided to inform his point of contact about the same and ask him to contact Sameer Rathod.
But still he was not able to get a clue about Sikandar. He switched on his tablet and opened the sketch of Sikandar that he had got from ETF Chief's file and planned his next moves.
Sketch of Sikandar:
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So... how was it?
I hope there were no loopholes or bloopers. Please let me know you don't find it convincing 😳😳
And do let me know... kaisa laga Sikandar? 😉
Precap - Shree decodes the information in the chips and is shocked. He tells this to Sameer. 😊
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Bhavna
Edited by bgargate - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

me first...🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳

Loved it...👏👏👏
Also liked Sikander...
but yeh thoda chotta update tha...
Continue soon...Thanks for PM...
Edited by Snehajain - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
lovely update rukku baby!
loved it...specially the way u described evertything abt th two new characters!

aisha is really a mystery to Ronnie...so she is well successful to proove herself as a mystery!

loved th way u described everuything abt Rishi...cool...i liked this character!

and also loved the transition of Rishi's emotions nd feelings towards aisha. frm curiosity to sympathy...nd thn to love!

Sikki's entry! well tumhari casting to hamesha perfect hi hoti hai ! ;)

continue soon rukku!

love
Aisha
Edited by Aisha.Vashishth - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
👏👏👏👏


ye to super se bhi uper nikala...


"Aha i like Sikky... " sach mai kamina lagta hai...😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
Beautiful bhavna amazing
Loved it
very interesting update
loved sikander perfect 😆😆😆
would love to read more
Continue soon 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
superb dear.. Love it.. Rishi n aisha's background story is great.. Good.. Thanks for pm..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update di...
Loved it
cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Read last three updates in a go
Awesome twist
Loved it
Poor arjun, Ayesha n sam
They all have suffered so much
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Posted: 11 years ago


Absolutely fantastic episode!

Loved Aisha's & Rishi's background build up towards their chosen line of work!A lot of detailing there👏

I had always wondered how Aisha managed to keep her honour intact in such a hell hole filled with brutes for so long. Of course! She offered the strongest among them a better deal than her body and got full protection in return!👍🏼


Rishi's life story was funny😆 How I'd love to hack in my colleagues's email id,s😈 My life's problems would evaporate in no time😆

Ahaan! Who better than Kancha Cheena to play the most elusive, dreaded entity Sikander!👏
Lets see how this awesome foursome go after Sikander!

Very well written.! Waiting for the next installment!😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
update soon di lolz..
gripping updates..
like button not working ..
wat a lovely cs of Ayesha n Rishi...
Undercover whoa..
fb was beautiful ...yet painful...
povs superbly written

hmm waiting for Arni
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Cool Sikandar Entry yay!!
kill..him...
love u di..
waiting !!

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