New Arakshi FF: Blast Form Past. Part 1..pg 6

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Hello Arakshian's... i come up with new story.. i wrote it long back but didnt update it... I know i'm having on going SS... will update it soon kindly bare with me 😳

Prologue:

" Dada aai-baba kitne khush honge jab unhe pata chalega ki aap ne phirse school mein top kiya hai" Said girl excitedly.

"Ha kyu na honge jab unhe pata chalega ki unki yeh drama queen class mein 1st aaye hai jo humesha last aati thi" Boy started to tease his sister. Hearing this her lip's turned into perfect O shape.

"Hawww aapne mujhe drama queen kaha? aur mein humesha class mein 1st aati hun. jaiye aap mein aap se baat nahi karungi ab" Said girl annoyingly.

"Aww mere chutki mujhse gussa ho gayi" said boy pulling her cheeks. She turn her face side way showing that she is still annoyed and replayed him without turning her face.

"Ha aur mein aai-baba se kahungi ki aap humesha mujhe tease karte ho" saying that she pouted sadly.

He is going to say something to her when he heard some noise coming out of their house. He signal is sis to keep quite and they moved towards the window which is slitly open. What they saw left them shocked and horrified. Then they heard one loud noise and someone's scream. Then they people's left form there. They shood there for sometime.When come back to their sense they run towards hall.

"Aai-baba aap dono ko kuch nahi hoga" said the boy. Tears are flowing out of their eye.

"Tum apna aur apne behen ka khyal rakhana" said that lady. She closed her eyes.

"Aai aap yese kar sakti.. aai utheye na" the girl screamed loudly.

"Baba aap hume chod kar nahi ja sakte aapne hum he promise kiya tha ki aap humesha humare saath rahenge" said boy.

"sorry bachho apne aai-baba ko maaf karto woh apna promise pura nahi kar sakte...aahhh... tum.. dono... apna.. kayal rakhna...aur ek dusare ka saath kabhi maat chodana... tum.. puch.. rahe.. the.. na ki...mein..tumse kya.. baat karna..chahata..tha" that boy nodded.

"Mein...tumhe..kuch..nahi..keh..sakta.. waha..dekho..wah..kuch..hai..uss..mein..tuhare..sare sawalone..ke javab...hai...aur..." he didnt complete his sentence n took his last breath.

"Babaaa"

"Sakshi utho..Saskhi" Shree started to pat here cheeks.

Sensing someone is patting here cheeks she opened her eyes n saw that her whole team is surrounding her.. including HIM.

"Sakshi tum thik to ho na? aise cheekhi kyu?" asked liza worriedly.

"Mein thik hu mujhe kya hua hai" Said Sakshi.

"Toh yeh kya tha?" Ayesha question her.

"Kuch nahi ek bura sapna dekaha" said Sakshi not meeting her eyes.

"Ab tum kaisi ho Sakshi" asked Sameer.

"Mein thik tu bas pair mein dard ho raha hai" Said Sakshi.

"Acha thik hai tum phir rest karo hum baad mein aate hai aur kuch chhahiye hoga toh call kar do" said Sameer and walk out of the room n other's also follow him.

Then her eyes meet him she hurriedly started to look here n there and waited for him to say something to her. He just observing her seens she come back to conscious. He knew she is hiding something form them that was not only bad dream. He wanted to know but his big fat ego didn't allow him to asked her. He stood their sometime n look at her and then left form their.


Do tell me how it is good/ bad... should i continue or not.
Ignore spelling/grammar mistake 😳
For PM's do buddy me 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 1: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/98075594
Edited by priyu03 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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very nice start
loved it
continue soon 👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice dear look interesting
do continue
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Posted: 11 years ago
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great start :-)
continue soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hi
awesome start 👍🏼
plz cont soon & pm me if u can 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome start! do continue soon dear
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Posted: 11 years ago
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very interesting start😊
but where's Sakshi's bro then??
Please continue soon😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Congosss priyu dear ...
awesomee start ..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice start who is sakshis brother
pls continue and pm me for next part

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