DARE TO DREAM-CHAPTER 32 ON PG 70 - Page 4

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Posted: 12 years ago
#31
nice part...
ETF IN NAINITALL and riya too...

waiting for their face off..

update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32
lovely update!
so all in naintal...!!!
Is that Rj Riya our Riya...???
loved Arjun and riya small flashback...!!!
loved all siblings love and concern along with DJ...
Highlight was that they all landed up at Riya place...
Naina case looks intrsting...
will wait for ur next update and Precap looks intrsting!!
8-10 days long time hehe!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
hey so sorry for the late comment...
superb updates yar...
love the bonding between dg riya jai rosh...the way they were teaaing each other awesome...
aww dj worried fr riya haan... and then jai ki tang khinchai 😆
so finally etf in nainital... and at riya's chachi's house...
jai knows sakshi from before???
woahh rii pe attack???
can't wait for their confrontation...
continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34
Nice part
Continue soon 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35

Chapter 4

Shree drank and the coffee and checked the details on his computer. Sakshi came and lounged on the sofa next to him. Shree said " well according to jai's bank details he hired a private investigation agency 5 months ago. And his call details indicate that his calls to riya consistently increased from 1 hour to half an hour."

Chotu: wait, who is riya?

Liza came in and said " riya kashyap is jai's cousin sister. It seems that she moved back to nainital about 2 years ago. And she was diagnosed with an incurable condition called retinitis pigmentosa. The diagnosis was too late. By the time this was diagnosed she was already going to become blind."

Sakshi said " poor her. think about how must she have felt when she came to know that she was going to become blind permeanently."

Arjun: she is stronger than she looks sakshi. Maybe more stronger than anyone thought.

Everyone turned to see arjun and sameer standing with grim expressions while aisha had a distressed expression. Aisha glanced at shree and chotu which made both of them confused.

Shree: sir, did you meet the servant? Did he say anything useful?

Sameer took the photo out and stared at it for a long time. He went and pasted it on the evidence board. Everyone is shocked seeing the photo of that person. shree and chotu did'nt know how to react.

Sam: everyone this photo is of riya kashyap aka riya mukherjee.

Precap: an attack on riya and a confrontation with the etf and a flashback on how the etf came to know about riya.

Edited by abjeya - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
Awesome update dr...!!!!
Wow Riya real name is Riya's kashyap...!!! Why she hide that frm everybody...????
OMG Samjun n Aisha knw about her...!!!!
Precap looks damn scary...!!!
Continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
awesome...
read it in a go...
continue soon :-)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
superb but short update yar...
woah sam arjun already know about her but how????
ohh no poor girl.girl suffering from that disease...
shreetu were shocked to see her in the.list of accused...
precap is very interesting...
continue soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
it was awesome update dear.
so samjun knows about riya.
continue soon.
and thanx for the pm.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#40
hey guys,
thanks for the responses for this update. this shows your appreciation which gives me confidence to continue writing. i know i have'nt been pming for the past couple of times but that was because i am a little busy in asli duniya. i will post the next update within 2-3 days. but guys, i have a question. i have noticed that for the past couple of times my other ff raaz has been getting less number of responses. is it because you are not aware of it? is it because something is wrong in that story, guys, it would really help to know if i am going wrong in my stories. so if u feel it is going to long or getting too complicated then please do tell me because then only i will be able to rectify it? although i have decided on the basic outline of both of the stories but i will discontinue raaz later on if i don't get responses.

so please do tell me if you feel something is wrong in this or that story. i will pm when i post the next update of both the stories together.

abjeya

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