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Anjali.Mital

@Anjali.Mital

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

A remake...!!!! not a bad idea dear...I loved it..
Eventhough I m not familiar with the first part/version ,I can guess 'some changes'...

Coming to the point,
It was very interesting...really an impressive start..
So they already knows each other...
Obviously that made an eagerness to know about what happened in their past...
So I m waiting for that...and also for the moment when they will come face to face..

Please continue soon...

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Mimi2609

@Mimi2609

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Very interesting start, and i'm eagerly waiting for it, to know why they separated after 4 years😭

Please update soon, or better i should say, you better update soon😃

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Aadhya

@AadhyaAashutosh

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

nice start

they had known each other before??? 😕

par abhi bhi dono mein pyaar hai...how sweet

plz cont soon 😊

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Anu

@anu91

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

res/unres

Interesting start dr...each other known before itself...Arjun loves sakshi bangles wow so cute...so Wt will happen if they met plz Cont soon dr and do PM me while updating...

Edited by anu91 - 11 years ago

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Tabassum Nitol

@_Tabassum_

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Awwsssmmm start
lovely
cont sooon
plsss PM ME

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Avantika

@AeDilHaiMushkil

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

okay! Here we go!

If I'm not mistaken, wasn't this your first FF on the forum?! 😲
Anyhow.. let bygones be gone and lets move ahead.. Waise bhi, zindagi ki yahi reet hai.. Oh well.. chaddo! 😕

As always, the start has me intrigued.. You better update this one jaldi jaldi..

Waiting for yet another take to unfold..

Love & Good luck,
🤗

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PoohLover

@PoohLover

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Hello techie ji..soory im late again..i guess its my aadat now to comment late 😒

Oye kya baat hain ..new story and woh bhi totally interesting...sooo Mrakdu and miss publicist are bichde huwe dost and pyaar..cool cool 😳 😳

Would love to read about their pyaar dosti and mohabbat 😉

ETF's second in command was someone who would impeccably make anyone insane. He was grim, brooding and sharp and sexy.. a deadly combo all together.

@bold-you forgot to mention that☺️😆😆

Continue soon ji..hume tarpaa mat pleaseee pleaseee 😃😃😃

Thank you ji for writing another story and making us khush 🤗

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fly.high

@fly.high

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

i think i hav read this story earlier too...
ok..lets start afresh...

beautifull start...

chudiyon ki dukaan..lolz...even i've turned into one...nd even my frnd always calls me th same...damn he seriously gets irritated vid this..

continue soon angel
love
Aisha

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yas23

@yas23

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#19

awesome start
cbanges are amazing
loved it
waiting for the next part
continue soon

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despicable_me

@despicable_me

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: Sakuu
Awesome start, hmm so they know each other, lekin kuchh to chhoot raha hai... Why they no longer ib touch?

Abhi jaldi continue karna!!! Please meri cruel maya!!

haan.. kuch toh choot raha hai.. but kuch khaas nehi! 😉

Huh..cruel mata bulate ho toh I should live upto the name na! 😛😆

Thanks!