ArIya funny OS: Ajab gazab ka proposal

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Posted: 11 years ago
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hie guyes i am back.
i know aapko mujhe jutte chapal maarne ka maan kar raha hain but main kya karoon concept dimaag main aa gaya to likh dala.

But ist funny os.

and its totally based on chidiya ghar serial but but hamare yaha iss ghar ka naam mental ghar hain.

here is the prologue and i mean intro.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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CHARACTER SKETCH
Arjun: babuji

riya: mayuri

Ayesha: koyel

Rathore: ghotak

Shree: gomukh

liza: naagin

chotu: gajh

saashi: gadha prasad

Sik; mendak prasad

PROLOGUE

Sam and ayesha are married. Sam is the elder brother of Arjun and his cousin brother sik. Sam is like horse because uska dimag or usse kaam karna ek dum horse ki speed se accha lagta hain where as arjun voh ek bum sher ki tarah ek dum brave or intelligent. On the other there cousin brother sik he is like mendak (frog jo har kisi ke kaam main taang adhata hain or kisi ko shanti se nahi rehne deta.

Here arjun loves a girl and her name is riya. She is like a peacock. A beautiful and innocent girlwho always love to dance and use apni tareef karvana vo bhi apne twin brother se accha lagta hain. Or riya ka twin brother hain shree. He is like cow ek dum seedha sa. And also he is a twin brother of riya and also like arjun. And shree wife is liza ek dum snake ki tarah jab dekho shree se ladhna or usne naag ki tarah dasna I mean maarna.

Now here comes to chotu. He is the servant of sik. Yes sik like chamcha. He always loved company of sik and inside he loves him. (guyes abh samajhlo chotu kis kisam ka hain). And also he loves to eat food. He is like elephant who always eat food. In one day chotu eat 30 plates food and 12kg banana and 5ltrs milk.

Now comes to the villan and a unique Jodi in mental house is Saakshi and sik. Yes they were husband wife. Saakshi is like donky who doesn't understand anything but one thing she could do was that ki vo kisi ko bhi apni kaam se problem main daal deti hain. She is useless. And always create problem.

Edited by ll_megha_ll - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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reswa reee

unres

😆

megh iss baar sach mein joote chappal khane ke liye ready ho ja...yaad hain na mera thread trash ho chuka hain, tera bhi na😆

btw kya idea hain👏 chotu is like...ehm ehm😳

update soon...
Edited by riyasarkar007 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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i vl fall down laughing..
please jaldi likha i want to laugh my heart out..


hatts off to ur idea🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
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Posted: 11 years ago
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🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
want updatva
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Posted: 11 years ago
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amazing concept
with interesting n funny cs
thanks for pm
cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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😆 Sakshi + Sik 😆 = 🤣🤣
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Posted: 11 years ago
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are wah... what a concept sir oops madam ji..!!!😉😆
awesome prologue
and super interesting cs...!!!😉
update soon...!!

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: devildiva21

are wah... what a concept sir oops madam ji..!!!😉😆

awesome prologue
and super interesting cs...!!!😉
update soon...!!


vaha re devil tu mera gender hi bhool gaye🤣
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ll_megha_ll


vaha re devil tu mera gender hi bhool gaye🤣


han ree😉 😆😆

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