Arakshi two-shot: Bombwala love (End- Pg 6,7) 7/10

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Payal Goel

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Posted: 11 years ago

#61

awesome di
lovely ending
feel like watching it
wow

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Santhosh Banda

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Posted: 11 years ago

#62

Superb TS.. Loved It... Beautifully Written... 👏

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kirthiii

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Posted: 11 years ago

#63

that was so beautiful... I wish this happened in the show..

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sashashyam

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Posted: 11 years ago

#64

Avantika, my dearest girl,

Thank you so very much for the sureness of touch, and the grasp of the plausible as opposed to the crowd-pleasing gimmick, that has made this an entirely satisfactory read.

I loved the totally credible ending, with Arjun being true to himself even as the light of possible release from the ghosts of his past glimmers at the end of his personal tunnel. This is what makes you a responsible writer, as opposed to one writes to pander to the multitude.

And the best part of it is that the multitude comes to you anyway!! My felicitations on a very compact and beautifully visualised piece of writing. As for the camouflaged part 3, kahani ko behatar banane ke liye, thodi bahut hera pheri nahin ki tho kya ki?

Shyamala Aunty

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Tabassum Nitol

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Posted: 11 years ago

#65

Awwsssmmm ending
loved it
thnks for PM

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GOLDIEE ABROL

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Posted: 11 years ago

#66

Dear beautiful n very well written 😊

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diw9

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Posted: 11 years ago

#67

res/unres.

sorry for unressing so late.had totaly forget about the res.

Beautiful written,emotional and sweet OS.

read it in one go.

Edited by diw9 - 11 years ago

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NeethuEli

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Posted: 11 years ago

#68

I felt like crying as well as smiling at the end.
The update was the perfect blend of emotions. So subtle yet so intense.
The show may not give a love story, but am happy to know that there can be a possible end like this too.
Too much uncertainty, yet so much belief.!
Loved it!😊