Arakshi two-shot: Bombwala love (End- Pg 6,7) 7/10

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redheart

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Posted: 11 years ago

#51

Perfect emotions
Loved it
Felt lke watching the climax scene of a story

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sneha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#52

thaat was awsme

really loved it

thnks for PM 👏

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..sweetchilly..

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Posted: 11 years ago

#53

Beautiful😊
It ended in a Beautiful note.
Shakshi is ready to wait for Arjun..she always did.Great that Arjun is gonna come back to her.He's gonna give himself a second chance.
Arjun-Shakshi convo was well written.
Loved the update..<3
Btw where did the Chai go??Did Aisha not send it?😉

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Amrita Malhotra

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Posted: 11 years ago

#54

No ending could have been better than this...
A perfect short story justifying its definition...
Khatam ho k bhi khatam na hona...

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nicky13

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Posted: 11 years ago

#55

Awesome story ...well written and a Perfect ending... Thanks Avni :)

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Jannat

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+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#56

Avantika it awesome dear...superb
waiting for next part
update soon

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NainaSM

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Posted: 11 years ago

#57

really good ..👏... Arjun understand her feelings ...😉... superbbb👍🏼

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Shreya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#58

superb

beautiful writing

loved the simple,honest & sincere confession

excellent 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

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vidya.anand

@vidya.anand

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+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#59

B2...romance likhne chali thi aur yeh likh diya

As I said yesterday, we have all changed now na??😉

the fun time and noodle time was funny

And ACP sir wants private time with her, huh? chup ke se cabin mein bulaa liya...

chupa rustam!🤣

Loved the silent dinner!

and then the small conversation...so an indirect confession...a promise from him that he would come back and a word from her that she would wait!

WOW...loved that!

ab yeh end kardiya...ab toh mudwaala lake waala likho meri maa...😉☺️🤣

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rizwanaa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#60

awesome update
arjun's honesty and decision
to move on giving himself n his life a second chance
while sakshi wish to bring his life back
and she would wait without any expectations
were beautifully written
lovely ending
thanks for pm

Edited by rizwanaa - 11 years ago