Arakshi two-shot: Bombwala love (End- Pg 6,7) 7/10

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littlebrat

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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Kya baat kya baat...well saturday epi was awesome... for more then one reasons...

okay first thing first when i read arjun cupped her cheek... you can't imagine i thought he is going to hug her or kiss her...😆 well thats what i expect alot to happen ...but long way to go for this thing...lekin i am sure you are going to make it big time possible...hehehe at least forum ki pyari bachiyon ka dil rakh lo...😃

meri taraf se to bomb, pataka, missile, reactor har tarha ka love karvalo bas is jodi to milado...

great one but update soon jaane jaana...😊

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Amrita Malhotra

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Posted: 11 years ago

#22

Wow...what a start...
Two ppl can fall in love and can say I love u to each other..and can live a beautiful life together...
But when the road is not so smooth, getting each other creates lovestory...
And when knowing each other also falls in the category of complicacy, simple lovestory turns into great lovestory. .
I am happy to know the processing of this great lovestory...no thanks is enough for u...
Waiting to take on the 2nd shot..

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vidya.anand

@vidya.anand

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+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Awesome B2...

beautifully written...loved it!

Arjun's agony, Sakshi's tears...awww i loved the combo...

His spoken and unspoken words to relax her took away my heart!

waise mudwaala, lake waala ka intezaar bhi hai...

sab ko continue karo...jaldi jaldi!

TT toh leave mein hai...so u better update soon...

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fly.high

@fly.high

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Posted: 11 years ago

#24

this time i m not in to kill u...cz now i like ur cliff hangers...they bring th double dozre of interest in the update...

beautiful start...

i hope we get a confession in the next update...

continue soon

love
Aisha

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Shanzy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#25

Beautifully written. Loved it. Continue soon :')

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Tabassum Nitol

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Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Awwsssmmly awwssmmm...
Mindblowing n amazing...
cont sooon
thnks for PM

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nicky13

@nicky13

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Posted: 11 years ago

#27

Mindblowing ... Waiting for the next part :) Plz update soon and Plz-2 pm me whenever u update it :)

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Shezi19

@Shezi19

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#28

Actually in this situation we so much of good arakshi scene
Shilpa you right and hats off you
This is the scene full of emotion sakshi eyes have hope
And arjun feeling exhausted he want to safe her at any cost
That eye contact fill energy in ACP
I need some more scene but CVs ignore again
But you make this for arakshi fans
Thanks

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sashashyam

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Posted: 11 years ago

#29

Avantika,

I do not know quite what to say, except that I would like to read Part 2. Given my aversion to the conventionally romantic, and my at times unreasonable and at times well founded dislike for your heroine, that I feel so is a great compliment to your writing skills, that can make even mush look palatable!

So go for it, and let me know when your Part 2 is up and running. I have a sneaking suspicion, though , that there will be at least a part 3!

Shyamala Aunty

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Esha Singh

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Posted: 11 years ago

#30

OMG...I am speechless...this is brilliant
You have described all the emotions of saturday's epi so nicely
It is as if the epi is playing right in front of my eyes again

Plsss continue...