Arjun OS: Changes ALTERNATIVE PG3

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Sakshi

@Sakuu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: nicky13
One more thing forgot to mention ... The banner is just awesome Saku :)

thanks Nickychicky! I didn't make it though, Sakshi#2 did😊

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Anjali.Mital

@Anjali.Mital

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

Wow...a second version of same incident...
Amazing attempt...
Really you are brilliant writter dear...

And it was lovely...
Really a very cute one...
And a beautiful happy ending too...

Thank you dear...

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Sakshi

@SAKSHI..

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: Sakuu
Bannercredut: The awesome, sweet Sakshi#2

that includes...POOH..!!!!
thanks to you too..!!!
😊

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Sakshi

@SAKSHI..

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#34

Well i knw i still have to unres...ill do dat asap...act talking to my friend...so ill read n unres at night...okk..

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Sakshi

@Sakuu

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: SAKSHI..

that includes...POOH..!!!!
thanks to you too..!!!
😊

whoopsie! Edited it on both pg 1 and 3😳

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Sakshi

@SAKSHI..

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: Sakuu
whoopsie! Edited it on both pg 1 and 3😳

Haww..!! u did dat ?? well i also ask a lot frm u nah ...wait n watch for d next time your credits will be in bold...!!! hahhaa

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Sakshi

@Sakuu

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: SAKSHI..

Haww..!! u did dat ?? well i also ask a lot frm u nah ...wait n watch for d next time your credits will be in bold...!!! hahhaa

nono, next time I'll say Maine banaya hai, achha hai na!😛😆

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laila

@laila1994

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#38

superb update.😊

cont soon

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her_story

@her_story

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#39

Sorry for being late!

Thank you for this alternative ending! I loved this. The way Arjun kept talking to her to keep her awake, how she fought death for him! That was a beautiful scene there.

Good work!👍🏼

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bollywoodfan16

@bollywoodfan16

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#40

hey sorry for replying so late..

First for part 1

As said in pm too..it was beautifully written that it moved me tears which trust me is pretty big thing..😆..

jokes apart..it was really beautifull..simply loss of words..

Part 2

U wrote part 2 for people who were sad from ending of part 1..u r so cute and such a sweetheart.

I loved this one..simply loved it..

I loved how Sakshi wanted to close her eyes for forever but hold on to it only becoz of Arjun..the very essence of Arjun being there could not let her go..i loved it..finally she opened the eyes when she heard Arjun..this is amazing..this was genius piece of work from u..

i toh always love ur OS..but saying that again...amazing work and keep on writing more.