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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey guys... am back with the 2nd and last part of this os..!!😳
Thanx for such a wonderful response... and yes this part is not good so please bear with it...plus since i could not write the fighting part...so i skipped it...Hope you will like it like the first part..!!!😳😃

Everyone is back in the office...

Sitting in conference room..

Arjun- so abhi tak hume bas ye Rathore ka id card mila hai uss ship pe... jiss se ye to saaf hai ki Rathore uss ship mai tha... but waha se kaha gya?

Riya Chottu ek kaam karo uss ship ke owner se jaake pucho.. wo ship kiten baje aati hai and kitne baje jaati hai kaha jaati hai.. everything...

Shree Liza se pucho waha koi finger prints ya kuch aisa mile.. jisse hume kuch pta chal sake...

Aisha- pta nai kaha honge sameer.. hope wo thik honge...

Arjun-Don't worry Aisha.. I am sure Sa..Rathore jaha kahin bhi hoga thik hoga.. and hum use jaldi hi dhundh lenge..!!!

Aisha- Ek baat kahu sir.. jab aap unki itni fikar karte hai to unko btate kyu nai? Kyu dono aise anjaan hoke rhte hai???

Arjun- Ye tum nai smjhogi Aisha... but haan ab aur aise anjaan rhna mere bas ka nai... uske milte hi. I'll say sorry to him.. i want my best buddy back in life... I just hope wo mujhe maaf kar de... i know i wasn't good with him

Aisha- I am sure sir.. wo apko maaf kar dnge.. infact he'll be very happy to get his best buddy back..

Aur phir jab riya ne apko maaf karke apna liya... to Sam to apke best buddy hai... and she winks at him

Arjun is shocked... and manages to utter what... ye.. ye tum kya kar rhi ho????

Aisha- kyu apko kya laga?aap aur riya ek sath hnge aur kisi ko pta nai chalega? Sab ko pta hai ye sir.. we are just waiting ki aap dono ye aake khud bole..!!! Sam ke milne ke baad... bhaut kaam karne hai apko?

Just then shree enters...

And Before Arjun could reply anything... Arjun's cell rings...

Arjun- Hello...

Other side... Arj... Arjun...

Arjun: Sam...

Shree jaldi se ye call trace karo fast...

And he puts the call on speaker..

Arjun- sam.. han bolo tum kaha ho?

Aisha= Sameer... kaise hain aap? Kaha ho? Aap to thik hai na??

Sameer- Arjun... ye sab aslam ka kaam hai.. wo tere se badla lene ke liye... he had planned all this... he has already got me.. wo tumhare har chahne wale ko.. hurt karan chhata hai...

Aisha- aap ho kaha Sameer??

Till then the all ends...and Chottu and Riya also enters...

Shree- sir, cell trace ho gya... location wai ship docks ke pass jo ware house hai .. waha ki hai...

Arjun-Lets go team...

Riya and Chottu are confusingly looking...

Arjun- Tum dono chalo..mai car mai btata hu...

15 minutes later...

Warehouse...

Guys... if we are lucky then Rathore abhi bhi yai hoga... we have to be careful...

Shree Chottu tum log back side cover karo... and tell Liza to inform back ups...

Mai Riya aur Aisha front se enter karnge...!!! Riya and Aisha your gonna cover me..!!

Everybody clear..

"YES SIR!!!!"

"Lets move"

Once inside... everybody quicky got in their positions...!!!

Riya Aisha.. go and search for Rathore.. jab tak mai yaha sambhalta hu said Arjun..!!!

They quickly nodded and get on their work..

While on the other side Chottu and Shree were busy tackling some goons... and almost defeated everyone...

Lets go Chottu we should help Riya and Aisha in searching Rathore Sir...

Finally they were able to find their Rathore sir... and everyone were angered seeing his condition.. he was nearly unconscious probably the effect of drugs,...and had a few cuts and bruises..!!!

Aisha- inki ye halat jisne bhi ki hai wo bachega nai aj..

Riya- relax Aisha... usko to hum zarur sabak sikhanynge.. but phle sir ko bahar leke chalte hai...!!!

On the other side...

Aslam- so finally tumne dhundh liya apne dost ko.. man na padega...kya dimag hai... mujeh laga nit ha tum itni jaldi yaha tak pahunch jaoge...!!1 impressive..!!!

Arjun- aana to yaha tha hi Aslam... mujrim jitna chalak kyu na ho.. koi na koi sabot zarur chodta hai.. aur phir tumne ye soach bhi kais eliya kit um rathore ko kidnap karoge aur hume pta nai lagega...

Lagta hai tumhe bhi apne bhai ke pass jane ka bada shauk hai...!!!

Aslam- itna bhi overconfident mat ho Arjun... baaazi abhi bhi mere hath mai hai...

Wo to dikh hi rha hai Aslam...-let this dialouge be of,Sameer...all team members standing der,,,Aisha supporting Sameer...

He was shocked to see rathore free from the clutches

And with that fighting starts...!!!!

all hide behind barrels...arjun asks Aisha to take Sameer out..,Sameer and Arjun look at each get it nod their head...and Arjun smirks

Aisha and Chottu took Rathore outside.. While shree and Riya help Arjun in fight...

While fighting a goon.. Aslam tries to shoot Arjun

Riya sees this and shouts "Arjun".. ..

Arjun turns... and shoots Aslam... and the fight ends...

Riya runs to hug Arjun...Shree was shocked seeing Riya hugging Arjun

After the fight paramedics were attending Arjun because a bullet graze him..and Riya is standing there looking with tears in her eyes,,,Shree was confused and shocked by this behaviour,,,but he felt it was best to silent right now...
Hume chalna chaiye Aisha waha hospital mai hamara wait kar rhi hogi..
After 20 minutes they reach hospital... shree leaves to search for Aisha and Chottu.,.
Arjun makes,Riya stop... but she doesn't look at him.. he understands why is she doing that so he just hugs her tight...and let her cry. ...he ..assures her... and pecks her on lips
Arjun is a little hesitant in going inside ...but Riya gives him courage and now it was her turn to assure him..!!!

In the hospital...

Arjun-Everything okay? Aisha? Doc ne kya kaha?

Aisha- yes sir Sameer ab thik hai.. unko bas hosh aata hi hoga...

She was just saying this and that time a nurse enters and says patient ko hosh aagya hai

Everyone rushes to meet him

Aisha- thank god aap thik hai sam.. pta hai mai kitna darr gyi thi.. sameer just smiles on this..

He was happy to see everyone so concerned for him...!!!

Shree Chottu riya together- han sir thank god ab aap thik hain.. apke dammit ke bina office bhut suna lgta hai,...

And everyone laughs ...

both Arjun nd Sameer looks at each other and starts to speak at the same time...
Arjun and Sam- Sorry.. both just give each other a little smile...

Arjun- am sorry Sam... janta hu bahut der kardi hai... pta nai tum mujhe maaf karoge ke bhi ke nai.. but am really sorry.. uss waqt.. mere dimag pe revenge iss kadar sawar tha ki meko aur kuch ni dikha.. maine bht bura behave kiya na...

Sameer- nai Arjun.. galti meri bhi thi... mujhe tumhe yun blame nai karna chaiye tha... uss waqt meko bhi gussa aagya tha... am also sorry yar...!!!

The foursome just rolls their eyes.. on seeing their sir competing in who will say sorry more..!!!

Arjun and Sameer saw their reactions and suddenly burst out laughing...

Riya and Aisha were used to see Arjun and Sameer laughing..(ab ye to sab ko pta hai kyu 😉)

But Shree and Chottu were too shocked and were just staring at them with open mouth...

Sameer (angerly)- ye kya aise dekh rhe ho tum dono? Kya kabhi kisi ko haste hue nai dekha???

Chottu- wo.. wo.. kuch ni sir.. wo.. aise hi,..

And with that Riya Aisha Sameer and Arjun again starts laughing..

And Shree and Chottu are embarrassed

Sameer( with a smirk)- so.. Arjun... apne aur riya ke bare mai kab bta rhe ho?

And shree and Chottu were again shocked and looked at riya with accusing eyes

Arjun(naughtily)- tumhe kya btana .. tumhe aur Aisha ko to sab pta hai na phle se..

And now it was Sameer's turn to be shocked.. "ye sab tumhe?? Ohh..." he understood..!! Aisha just smiles at him and Arjun gives a smirk

Meanwhile Shree and Chottu were still looking at Riya with accusing eyes...

Arjun- ab bas bhi karo uss bechari ko tang karna...

Aur han.. two weeks baad hamari engagement hai so ready rhna... with that he takes Riya away...

Shree and Chottu.. were again shocked.. and their eyes were wide ready to pop out...

Arjun- ab tum dono ko kya special invitation dena padega??

Dekh ni rhe dono love birds kaise akele rhne ko tadap rahe hai..!!! chalo niklo yaha se... he added with a smirk

Hearing that Shree and Chottu literally runs for their lives...

Ariya leaves laughing at duo's antics...

Raesha alone...

Sameer is sitting and Aisha is on sameer lap's hugging him..!!! he understands that she was scared,.. so he just consoles her and makes her believe that he is here fit and fine..!!!!

Aisha looks into his eyes... and says.. I swear sameer agar apne dobara aisa koi stunt kiya na to dekhna...

Sameer- are baap re meri jungle billi... itna gussa..acha baba nai karunga... i promise...

And with that he pulls her upto his face level and kisses her...!!! both lost in each other..!!!

The End...😳


Likes and comment time...!!!😳

Edited by devildiva21 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
reswa

unres


buhahhaha me first😃😉

loved aisha arjun convo...poor arjun was so shocked to know all know abt him riya...ye ishq nahi chupta hain arjun babu, sys?😆

oh damn...aslam!!!!!!!!😡😡 he wants revenge thats why doing this??? grrr...i want to kill him..but hotwa is there na to do the honour😳

the ware house, and aisha riya finally got rathore...yayy meri lady dabbang dont spare anyone😡

then arjun got shot😲 aww poor riya crying...shree shocked😆 this is juts the start specky😆 and ariya kiss😳 cute



haha who will say sorry first competition...but at least all is well. and again choree got shock of life by ariya jodi and engagement news...and ahaan arjun also know abt sasha? doston se kuch nahi chupta😉


and in the end...that jungi billi...awww😳😳


loved the 2nd part divi. awesome cutie ending.

and haan, do write more like this, SYS?
Ri ⭐️
Edited by riyasarkar007 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Kya yaar...meine ni iss post ko edit karke yahaan cmnt karna...baad mein karungi!😭
2-4 page baad hopefully mera cmntwa mil jayega!
Edited by MriduB - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: MriduB

Kya yaar...meine ni iss post ko edit karke yahaan cmnt karna...baad mein karungi!😭

2-4 page baad hopefully mera cmntwa mil jayega!


😡 😡 😡 tu pitegi
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Posted: 12 years ago
So finally divi you write one😳

really happy😃
amazing start darling🤗

Sam kidnapped ...😲
SaSha is married...
Loved both Arjun n Aisha's POV.😳
Small ArIya part was awesome too the way she comforted her i really liked it
ohh so they are already in relationship.amazing lovey
At last they got one clue excited for next part😊
Continue soon...waiting for it😳

PS: sorry for late comment and you know why i am late
and really this is amazing darling..keep it up...waiting for more😳

__moumi__



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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Moumimon

So finally divi you write one😳

really happy😃
amazing start darling🤗

Sam kidnapped ...😲
SaSha is married...
Loved both Arjun n Aisha's POV.😳
Small ArIya part was awesome too the way she comforted her i really liked it
ohh so they are already in relationship.amazing lovey
At last they got one clue excited for next part😊
Continue soon...waiting for it😳

PS: sorry for late comment and you know why i am late
and really this is amazing darling..keep it up...waiting for more😳

__moumi__




Momo🤗 girl so happy to see u on here...!!!
yup finally i started one😆
thanku so much sweety...!!!😳
gonna update today only...😉😆
kamini sorry bolti hai pitna hai tune... i know n i understand baby
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: devildiva21


Momo🤗 girl so happy to see u on here...!!!
yup finally i started one😆
thanku so much sweety...!!!😳
gonna update today only...😉😆
kamini sorry bolti hai pitna hai tune... i know n i understand baby

me also happy after coming back😳
and you are welcome😃
paar pitna maat mujhey..pirse hospi nehi jana meko😆😆
i know you understand darling...😳

PS: congo dear🤗
for becoming Sizzler😊😊
for becoming pink... 😉waise i hate pink


__moumi__
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Moumimon

me also happy after coming back😳
and you are welcome😃
paar pitna maat mujhey..pirse hospi nehi jana meko😆😆
i know you understand darling...😳

PS: congo dear🤗
for becoming Sizzler😊😊
for becoming pink... 😉waise i hate pink


__moumi__


na na ab tu dobara hospital jaake dikha..!!!😡
thanku girl..!!🤗
even i hate pink😭😭

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Leki

Me again silent lobber

maine kya kiya??? 😭 😭 😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
Divi why r u creating tsunami in my inbox yar???? After everyone res u telling me kamini im silent lobber no change in that

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