Ariya SS- Yeh Lamha Tera Mera pg 17....16 Dec **** ending**** - Page 4

Originally posted by: rocking_gal

well well wasn't it a shocking thing...

but but but...

u nailed it gal...!!!

had a idiotic smile on my face...through out the Stry...

firstly u wrote an romantic os nd wat a Stry it was...

light but still touched me..,

they way he was in kitchen,candle light dinner...

woah...a dream sort of sequence...

looks like both wont get enough of staring at each other...

then came their dance to a beautiful song...

hayeee dance...

well y does all mushy scenes get interrupted Haan...

y did she frown...???

maana padega Riya u did a very good job...

will be waiting for next update..

Originally posted by: rocking_gal

well well wasn't it a shocking thing...

yeah yeah all are shocked.../

but but but...

u nailed it gal...!!!

really?? thankuuu

had a idiotic smile on my face...through out the Stry...

firstly u wrote an romantic os nd wat a Stry it was...

light but still touched me..,

aww if u were smiling then i am please to post this os

they way he was in kitchen,candle light dinner...

woah...a dream sort of sequence...

looks like both wont get enough of staring at each other...

then came their dance to a beautiful song...

hayeee dance...

well i am more like silent staring wala love writer than...bed scenes.🤢 and i think of the scene just like that...good to write things exactly what i thought...

well y does all mushy scenes get interrupted Haan...

y did she frown...???

umm...if i update...IF...then u will know soon😉

maana padega Riya u did a very good job...

will be waiting for next update..

well one of my fav writer when saying this...that means i must have done sm good😳 hope i will update soon

Originally posted by: Live-life

seee even Rocking thinks you nailed it!!!!!!

😃

I told you it wasn't such a bad idea to come back!!

And don't be so overwhelmed!!!!

You are a great writer!!! never forget that!! 😳

Lo again shuru hogai with the deep stuff! Mera kuch nahi ho sakta!! 😆

Originally posted by: Live-life

Originally posted by: riyasarkar007

guys u are making me blush...well i cant deny that i am loving coming back to writing.

readers are our critique...and if they are saying then maybe i ma doing little good job...

i love ur deep stuff wale talks sweety...

Originally posted by: rocking_gal

well live-life is right...

its good to have u back...ur writing back..,

if u keep on writing stuff like this i will defo have smile on my face always...

will be waiting for it...

Originally posted by: riyasarkar007

i dont have much choice, so i? ok i will continue it...when, i dont know...so wait...