Ariya FF:'Deception,Intrigue..'#3:New thread link:P 47 - Page 12

Originally posted by: 1993.ssg

Fantastic update
love it
love Riya's POV .
It is perfectly written.
she wes scare when she saw the smile in Arjun's face
riya remember her past time with Arjun
OMG Shree slaped Riya
love chotu pov
last they came to kmow that riya is NIB AGENT
THE choice of song is very appropite for riye's position
wonderfully written
WANT TO KNOW RIYA'S PAST.
thanks for the pm
pls continue soon

(my name is Suryatapa )

Originally posted by: Shivi1997

Thnq thnq thnq so much 4 such an emotional update
aww shree slapped her
tension,anger and fear
omg aj to etf office ka temp. high ho gaya hoga
eagerly waiting 4 nxt epi

Originally posted by: devildiva21

res😳

*edited*

firstly sorry for editing it so late...!!! It's okay, jii:)

superb updates yar...!!! i loved the surprise...1!!😉 Haha😃

mindblowing yar..!!!phir se dhamkedar updates..!!!👏⭐️am loving these dhamakas..!!!

finally the much anticipated updates are here...!!! thank god i read them together.. warna mera kya hota...!!!😲 already am in shock reading these..!!!😆 Aww, really? Thanks a lot!

arjun's feelings pov emotion so beautifully written and described,,...!!!👏⭐️

and that predator and prey wali line gosh... that was way too awesome...!!!!

so gone is the lover arjun.. who was happy seeing her alive..

now its the betrayed arjun.. who felt cheated and heartbroken...!!! ab kya haal karega wo riya ka..!!!😲 soach soach ke am having goosebumps...!!! You hit the nail on the head with that comment. Arjunwa is angry, and rightly so:) More on that in the next chapter.

shree ka reaction..!!!😲 😲 am too shocked.. he actually hit her😲 gosh he is way too angry...

and seeing the boys reactions i don't think... it will be easy for riya in anyway...!!!

glad sameer and chottu stopped shree from showing further anger...!!!

chottu.. i think he will be the first to forgive her...!!!ofcourse after venting out his anger first...!!!

the way he looked at riya after shree hit her.. am sure he has started to melt a bit...!! but is equally hurt...!!!

Comments on Choree were bang on. Yes, Shree slapped Ri. And what you said about Chottu gave me an idea. Thanks for that😊

sameer .. i have no words for him... poor guy can't even show his pain infront of everyone...1! he is the chief and the first and foremost duty of his is to console and support his team...!!!

he is being strong for his team from outside but from inside he is broken.. hope he is able to vent out his pain instead of burying it deep inside him somewhere...!!! The way you put it was awesome dear. No words😃

so now the real stories begin...!!!! will she be back in ETF????

moreover she has to manaofy her friends...!!!! which by the reactions of everyone will not be so easy...!!! she has got loads of work on her sleeves now...!!!! looks like they are gonna make her work way too difficult..!! An uphill task for Riya indeed!

feeling bad for everyone...!!!! everyone are in pain and are hurt...!!! Very true

P.S. eagerly waiting for the next part...!!!😳

P.P.S. continue real soon...!!😳 Next part coming up. Thanks for commenting!!!

For late comments dr...but wht to do...busy coz of exams...!!!

Wow... Wht a Mind Blasting update swthrt...!!!!

I think that's the most difficult situation for her as she had to see disgust n hatred for herself in their eyes whm she loved a lot...!!! OMG she has already been feeling so guilty n their cold behavior wasn't helping her much...!!!!!

You wrote Riya's POV remarkably well...!!!! It's outstanding dr...!!!!! Awww her feelings about Sam n Choree showed that how much she respected thm n lved thm...!!

Wht went wrong in her life????? It's the greatest mystery to solve for our Acp..!!!!!

OMG Arjun was constantly looking at her... !!!! Wow his soul piercing eyes send shivers down her spine...!!!! Poor gal... this is just the beginning for him...!!! I don't think that he will let her go that easily...!!!!

Phew..!!! Arjun's side of a story was a little scary... I m glad that he controlled himself n didn't chop her into pieces...!!

Hmm... so akdu rawte accepted his folly n realized that thy all were worried for him...!!! It's great that he finally realized the worth of team...!!!!

OMG it took him hell lot of efforts to subside his inner turmoil n listen to that lady who pretended as Riya's mother before but he did it perfectly well...which itself is a big shock...!!!!!

OMG Dustin Coelho was hell nervous...I can't believe this...!!!!

Hm...interesting...he felt a pang of jealousy whn he realised that Ankita Shulka was her mentor n not him n Rathod...!!!!

Poor guys continuously getting one shock after another...!!

Loved the mystery n suspense u created...!!!! The way u describe highly secretive firm NIB n their work process was super exciting...n I m too agreed with Shree just like james blondish...!!

Wow impatient rawte cut her short n cme straight to the point n in reply thy got the shock of their lives which had shaken thm to the core...!!!

OMG he was again thinking on the wrong line...!!! Wht the...!!! Thy all reacted the same way...!! For god sake thy all r officers themselves n thy hv to understand the nature of her job...!!!!

Phew...finally Riya took the charge n told thm the reason behind her joining ETF...n that is Sik...!!!

How will Arjun react on this...?????? It's getting way too much exciting...!!!!

Thanks for pm dr...

Continue soon...

Originally posted by: beenish248

what the you were looking forward for my comment 😲
aww so sweet of you 😃
i understand dear you want to portray emotions and i was glad that u actully did fabulous job hats off man 👏
waiting for update :))

Originally posted by: jia03

Now that was a superb dhamaka👏👏👏

awesome...⭐️

continue soon... dont make us wait for tooo long😊