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Originally posted by: shaleenrocks
This was so beautiful..absolute fantastic..you write awesome stories..thats why we cannot afford to lose you. I know we are selfish but friendship aur stories ke liye kuch bhi chale ga😆
Coming back to story..Loved how Sakshi knew where Arjun was and Arjun finally had to go to mandir because afterall humhe sab sawalo ke jawaab rab ke pass mil hi jaate hain aur Arjun ko toh wahan Sakshi finally mil hi gayi..I love how Sakshi and Arjun was talking so naturally with each other..this shows pure friendship and How Sakshi told him that she broke up with her boyfriend..that kind of boyfriends are jerk..acha hua break kar diya...I am glad Sakshi neh Arjun finally rok liya...Finally the end ...I can totally imagine Sakshi saying those things to Arjun..I am sure they are going to have really happy diwali...This was another awesome work from you..I was feeling I was watching a full 2-hour movie and it was total blockbuster because it finally brought a smile on my face by the time I finished reading it..Superb job and keep writing
Hhaahah achha, but if I do get attacked, I'll tell them to contact you 😆
Haan aur nahi to kya, bhagwan ke ghar mein der hai, andher nahi 😳
Yes, I always wish that they show something like this, not the love part per se, but the friendship and understanding part. But alas, abhi to apni imagination se hi chala na padh raha hai
I'm really glad you liked the ending, I was afraid ke woh kuchh zyada hi hogaya tha😆
And we'll keep writing, I'll try and pm you tonight😊
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