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Jonashi

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Sorry for late comments dr.

Both the updates r super duper fantastic...!!!

Loved Nani n Aditi's segment. Its sweet n emotional.!!

Wow thy all share strained relations with their mom...!!!!

Akshay n Madhu's moments were lovely..!!!!

FB was beautiful...!!! Wow Arjun also loved her...!! He was concerned for her n that's why he came early..!!!

Loved bro-sis meet. That's really sweet..!!!!

Awww Dhruv n Aditi's part was beautifully written...!!!!! So, mr. Dhruv fell in love with her at first sight..!!!! Loved the way Ariya helped thm for their private meet...!!!

Waaooo Arjun had built a gazebo for Riya...!!! If he loved her so much thn why doesn't he understand her n trust her????? Why he doesn't get this simple point that she can't be the reason of his mesiries????

Wow Riya is Arjun's fiancee... OMG he bahaved rudely with her coz he thought that she's the reason behind his father's death...!!!! Is he insane????? How can he even thought like that????

Wht the!!!!! Arjun accused her for his father's death...!!! Feel bad for her.!!

I hope Arjun realised his mistake before it's too late.

Its going great..!!!! Hats off to u dr...!!!

Loved it to the bits...!!!!

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Posted: 12 years ago

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poor riya

why is arjun hurting he so much if he loves her

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Jonashi

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: Christeee
poor riya
why is arjun hurting he so much if he loves her

Because he thinks she is the reason behind his father's death.

Hardly he knows the truth.

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Jonashi

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: Leki
Nice part... So Raichand siblings have strained relation with their mom... Akshay Madhu scenes were sweet... Ariya FB was nice... does this mean Arjun also loved Riya???? Then what happened now...!!! So Arjun came back to make sure that Riya is fine... hmm
Update soon

Thanks I personally loved the fb... when i wrote it down.
Yes he does love her. One can't change that.

and yes so far as it seems the relations between Mommy Raichand and Raichand family is in strain.

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benaz

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Posted: 12 years ago

#56

Hey! Just read your updates. Please PM me when you update again :)

It is a nice story and I want to know more about Ajun-Riya' parents' death and why Arjun is behaving like this with Riya

Continue soon!

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nakshatra92

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Posted: 12 years ago

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nice update...

aditi and dhruv... made for each other... 😉

riya trying to talk to arjun... arjun avoiding riya...

arjun accusing riya of his father's death... and riya's father??

dreadfull night... what happend??

update soon

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Sakshi

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Hello...
hope you remember me ...????
Wow...you really write sooo well...!!!!
I read all the parts in a go ( as you know) and all were just amazing...!!!!
Firstly i really liked the whole family...
They all had their roles perfectly written...be it Madhu bhabhi, akahay, nanai, Arjun ,RIYA,aditi,arav also ramchand...all were perfect...
Nani : Well she is a really sweet lady...i liked the way she was concerned for riya...later also when she explained adidti...about her mother...i really liked her...
Madhu: Well i must say she is a mixture of mother , elder sister and a friend... and thats all about bhabhi no ?? so loved her as bhabhi
Akahay : Well he was also very good... i could actually imagine from his dialogues that he was the elder brother and was managing the whole company ...i mean your dialogues depicted that fatherly figure in him...that he was a responsible son , a loving and sweet husband and a protective brother ( when he says to arjun that when will he grow up and when he went to meet aditi...)
Arav : Well he is a sweet boy ...i really liked his bonding with Riya..and i especially wn he asked his to sleep with the girls and said he thought he will have fun n not to let him sleep n ol...he was really cute ...
Aditi : Well she was indeed a source of happiness...i liked her from the moment she made har entry...i really liked her bonding with Riya...
Riya : Well you potrayed her really well...i leked her very much in this story...i especially loved her bonding with aditi...liked all their conversations...esp liked wn aditi pleaded her on the dining table n then she asked arjun to help...at the same time i really felt bad for her...she is indeed in great pain...now the pic is getting cleared im my mind..slowly and steaily...
Arjun : Well inke bare mein jita kaha jae kam hai... I really liked him wn he was standing by the window n seeing his sis...it touched me the most...but later he behaved soo rudely with Riya...n i dint like him at that time..bt i knw u will clear all this very soon so...waiting for your next update...
Did i mention you write really well...well you surely do cx you knw hw difficult it wud hv been for me read this story...but i read it wid no difficulty...n enjoyed it to the core...so with MY condition ill be waiting for ur next update...
P.S : sorry for this long comment...but its for all those beautiful parts i missed !!! ( sorry for errors aswl ..)

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Anushass

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Posted: 12 years ago

#59

nice update dear... continue soon

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Jonashi

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Posted: 12 years ago

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[QUOTE=SAKSHI..]Hello... Whoopee, Sakshi what a long reply dear!
hope you remember me ...????

And seriously gal u don't have to mention this.

Wow...you really write sooo well...!!!!

Thank you yaar. There's always a nervousness though. We have so many pro in writing on this forum. One flaw, i'll be down with dirty tomatoes lol.
I read all the parts in a go ( as you know) and all were just amazing...!!!!

Thank you! And I'm waiting for your next update too.
Firstly i really liked the whole family...
They all had their roles perfectly written...be it Madhu bhabhi, akahay, nanai, Arjun ,RIYA,aditi,arav also ramchand...all were perfect...
Nani : Well she is a really sweet lady...i liked the way she was concerned for riya...later also when she explained adidti...about her mother...i really liked her...
Madhu: Well i must say she is a mixture of mother , elder sister and a friend... and thats all about bhabhi no ?? so loved her as bhabhi
Akahay : Well he was also very good... i could actually imagine from his dialogues that he was the elder brother and was managing the whole company ...i mean your dialogues depicted that fatherly figure in him...that he was a responsible son , a loving and sweet husband and a protective brother ( when he says to arjun that when will he grow up and when he went to meet aditi...)
Arav : Well he is a sweet boy ...i really liked his bonding with Riya..and i especially wn he asked his to sleep with the girls and said he thought he will have fun n not to let him sleep n ol...he was really cute ...
Aditi : Well she was indeed a source of happiness...i liked her from the moment she made har entry...i really liked her bonding with Riya...
Riya : Well you potrayed her really well...i leked her very much in this story...i especially loved her bonding with aditi...liked all their conversations...esp liked wn aditi pleaded her on the dining table n then she asked arjun to help...at the same time i really felt bad for her...she is indeed in great pain...now the pic is getting cleared im my mind..slowly and steaily...
Arjun : Well inke bare mein jita kaha jae kam hai... I really liked him wn he was standing by the window n seeing his sis...it touched me the most...but later he behaved soo rudely with Riya...n i dint like him at that time..bt i knw u will clear all this very soon so...waiting for your next update...

I am a little confident now, the way you have pen down the understanding about the characters; i feel my job is done. Yes when it comes to Arjun his behaviours are yet not justified. Well i will reveal this later on in the updates.
Did i mention you write really well...well you surely do cx you knw hw difficult it wud hv been for me read this story...but i read it wid no difficulty...n enjoyed it to the core...so with MY condition ill be waiting for ur next update...

Thank you once again dear.
P.S : sorry for this long comment...but its for all those beautiful parts i missed !!! ( sorry for errors aswl ..)

[/QUOTE]I'm waiting for your next update too. And i'll try my best to update soon. Yes your condition lol😆

I personally don't mind it. You carry on! But shush! its just between us.

p.s - did you catch up today's Arjun episode?

Edited by Jo_Pinchy - 12 years ago