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Pinky pan

@piupan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

hey welcum bck dear kisine aapko miss kiya yaa nhi i dn't knw bt meine toh bahut bahut bahut miss kiya bt m angry on u yeh kya baat hui mere msg ka ek bhi rly nhi i knw aap less cmmts se pareshan ho bt dat dsn't mean nah dear ki aap apne regular readers k saath aisa karoge not fair n i guess my 1st ever ariya ff bhi nhi padha ri8 very bad

bt yaa ur dis updt was awsum superb haww arjun n riya wer in relationship n broke up arjun left her bt m sure ki iske piche bhi zarur koi reason hoga n he lied 2 riya dat hez a maths teacher hahahah itna hot maths teacher hayeee n aww he was so concernd 4 riya bt riya poor shez feeling cheated m sure koi bhi feel karta n haww poore offc k staff ka muh khulha hahaha bt obvious arjun ko thappad dat to 4rm riya woh toh hona hi tha n yaa ab iska nxt prt jaldi updt karna samje yaa samjhaun varna mein bhi dhamki dungi 😉

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abhya/akanksha

@Aks13

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Posted: 11 years ago

#22

Dhamki queen. Missed u so much!!!!!!!!

For another mind blowing Ariya story.

OMG Riya's life was in danger.

Riya's POV was rocking!!!!!!!

Love story of a school going gal n a cop. Sounds exciting!!!!!!

Oppss Arjun lied to her n hide his true identity from her.

Wow Ariya was in a relationship but they broke up.

FB was fantastic!!!!!!

Loved the way she tricked those goons n ran away from there.

Wht the!!!!!! ETF guards also knw that She was Arjun's GF.

OMG she slapped Arjun n that too in front of the whole office. Hmmm... Daring act...!!!!!

Ariya moments in Arjun's cabin was way too thrilling!!!!!!

Awww that nick name Rawker is so cute.

What!!!!!!!!!!! Arjun is spying on her even after heir break up but why??????

If he still love her thn why he leave her in the first place??????

Awww he kissed her in his true Rawker style!!!!!!

He portrayed himself as maths teacher in front on her. Was he on some kind of mission?????

OMG he beat up a guy coz he was holding Riya's hands. Awww he was burning with jealousy at that time n vented out all that on a poor guy.

Who was that girl with Arjun???????

Wow Arjun got another slap.

Precap seems super exciting.

Continue soon.

Plzzz dr reload all the updates of Ariya Never Say Never n also updates all ur other works.

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rashikhandelwal

@rashikhandelwal

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Posted: 11 years ago

#23

hey! Hw cud u thk we forget u...vry bd...lft tha wow nw ss luved the 1st part its suprb eagerly watng to knw mr cnt soon ad haaa i also missed ur other ff especially faddig butterfly...so plz cnt al ur ff watng watng ad watnh

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Anu

@anu91

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Posted: 11 years ago

#24

Hey muskaan another SS from u that's nice
no words dear
asusual awesome awesome awesome and different one also
Arjun maths teacher come spy and Riya student so nice
Arjun name was raweker new name and nice name
Raweker kiss was excellent
who is tat girl????????
Why Arjun left Riya???????
But Arjun is keep following Riya always
Cool update dr
Cont soon
i am angry on u muskaan am waiting for ur other two updates plz consider ur regular readers and update it yaar Waiting to read dr

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devildiva21

@devildiva21

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#25

yes.. another story from dhamkee queen cool..!!

super duper hit and quite a hatke one..!!!😉

love the way you describe everything...!!

riya's pov and her mindtalks were awesome...!!!

hmm so riya a school going girl and arjun etf spy posing as a math teacher..!!

woah and they were in a relationship 1 year back cool..!!!

and even after breaking up his spy for her is chalu..!!😉😆 possessive much haan..!!!

wow and he even beat up a guy with whom riya was holding hands... jealous also..!!!😉

now thats a cool combo.. jealous plus possessiveness..!!!

and the name given to him rawker😉 loved it...!!!!

lol can imagine everyone's shocked reaction😆 arjun raute ko slap😆

their kiss was hot😉 hmm and he teasing her for the kiss when she wasn't listening to him.. cool😉 i love ariya's kiss😉

but who was that girl with arjun?😲

haila kitne slap khayga bechara arjun😆 ek aur lol

precap is interesting..!!

continue soon...!!!

Plz update your other stories as well yr...!!

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SplashRain

@SplashRain

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Posted: 11 years ago

#26

wow a lovely ariya story..
really nice concept
riya school girl and Arjun spy
loved it
i loved that kiss
another girl with Arjun ahh
update soon please