Samjun FS: maa de laadle bigad gaye??!! Part-1;Pg 2. (12/01) - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
#11
Pariii
is story ka kya hua????
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Posted: 11 years ago
#12
wow awsome cs n prolouge..

Plz jaldi continue karo..

Cant wait...

N plz pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
#13
NOTE:
i am so sorry...
kaam ke beech i forgot about this completely... :P
dont worry, sunday tak main iska ek update de dungi...
and also rishtey season 2.
please mujhe maaf kardo...
but pakka promise i ll update this...
Edited by princess_pari - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#14
hey all... after long!!!😆😆
i am so sorry. i am living a hectic life.with unexpected twists and turns, ups and downs and what not.
kay. lemme not whine about my life to you.
grah!!! i dont know in what circumstances i started writing this.
i am sure not many liked it. but as i am continuing this, please give it a chance.
since it was started long ago, i dont remember the plot i had planned😕😆
so keeping the same prologue, i have designed new story line.:P
i guess i was in such bad mood today, i watched about 10 episodes of koffee with karan back to back (no offence to that show)
if it was not in queue, i would have posted it much earlier today...
sorry for delay.
ignore pms if you dont like, and like comment, scrap o pm if you like...
hope you like this update.
i am not in touch with writing now. i need to brush up my skills...

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Episode 1:

"hello team..." commissioner sir said as soon as he entered ETF.

"gud afternoon sir... aap yahan...iss waqt?" Aisha gathered her wits and spoke on behalf of the team. Well, after sameer and Arjun, she was senior most in post there.

"aah... good question inspector Aisha. Well, main ye batane aaya tha ki saare cases Crime branch mein transfer honge. Jo bhi incomplete case files hai unhe handover karo aur unhe unn cases ke baare mein brief karo. You have got a week to do this."

"par sir kyun? Hum yahan sambhal rahe hai naa..." riya said exasperated. Uff!!! Hum itne bhi nikamme nahin hai, she thought to herself.

"I know. Par agar baat sirf ek do hafton ka hota to I would have given you cases, par teen mahine... its too much" commissioner said and sighed.

"teen mahine ka kya matlab hai sir?" this time it was chotu, shocked.

"arre, maine bataya nahin kya ki tumhare dono seniors leave pe hai. Three months vacation. Bechare kaam kare bhi to kitna? Mujhe bhi saal bhar mein ek aadh mahine chutti mil hi jaati hai par ye dono... bechare. Pichle een saal se ek bhi din rest nahin kiya hai..."

"par sir. Unhone hame to kuch kaha hi nahin. Aise kaise!!!" Aisha stood wondering.

"arre? Tum sameer ki biwi ya Arjun ki behan ho jo wo har baat tumse kahenge?chalo. I have a meeting to attend. Aur ha. Tum log jab tak tumhare seniors nahin aate, ETF aane ki koi zaroorat nahin hai. Salary mil jaayegi. Saath mein kisi case mein tumhari expertise ki zaroorat pade to tumhe bula liya jaayega."

"ji sir." All said in unison.

********

There in GOA, Arjun and sameer were busy exploring... erm... guys... just house ok?! Uff!!! Main kya karun? Itni jaldi hi sab hojayega kya ;)

"help mee Arjun..." sameer said pushing the sofa and yelling at Arjun at the same time.

"dammit!!!! Kisne kaha tha ki itna heavy furniture rakhne ko ghar mein?!!! Uuggghhh!!!!!!!!" sameer really screamed aloud.

"someone told that these furniture are really rich and we need heavy', durable' ones..." Arjun mocked him from across the room, walking around with stuffs arranging them.

"shut the fcuk up Arjun"

"I am sam"

"why am I even talking to you?"

"may be because you have no one else" Arjun said tongue in cheek

"whats going on guys?" came in a sultry voice of man from the door.

Both sameer and Arjun turned towards the door and found the owner of the house they were renting, Mr. Peter with a goofy grin.

Sweaty, shirtless sameer and an equally sweaty Arjun with a large box in his hand were making all the hormones of Peter go raging.

He slowly made his way to sameer who was quiet nearer to door and kept a hand on his shoulder, poking his chest with his finger.

"you are much better shirtless than i thought you are sam" peter fluttered his lashes at sameer, beating them like wings of humming bird.

"yu-you thi-thi-think of ma-me?" sameer shuttered at his closeness.

"ofcourse I do sameer hotty... you two are the most handsome MEN I have seen here in this housing society" peter said gliding his palm over sameer's chest and his very well toned abdomen.

(PARI: O GOSH!!!!! Please... I beg every person reading not to faint!!!!!!!)

Sameer gulped hard, and closed his eyes. He felt tingling sensation when his hand moved from his abs to side of abdomen.

He started giggling. Peter and Arjun stood gaping at him.

"you-hehe-you are tickling me peter... hehehhehe"

he was laughing at the same time he was hell nervous. What will his condition be if he was left with peter alone? he shivered at the thought.

"get your hands of him peter" sameer heard Arjun say in a low, dangerous tone.

"come on Arjun. no need to be possessive. I like you too" peter drawled at Arjun.

"but I don't. and don't you dare touch him. HE.IS.NOT.YOURS.TO.TOUCH!!!" with each word he came near them, his eyes blazing fury.

He pushed peter's hand and pulled sameer next to him who visibly relaxed and let out a breath of relief.

"come on guys... its ok to..." peter started advancing towards them.

"it is not ok. You have no business to do here peter. You may go or else we go. What do you want?" asked Arjun. sameer was not yet out of the encounter he had with peter.

"fine. I ll go. Catch you later sam" he blew a kiss at his direction and sameer visibly flinched.

"don't you dare." Said Arjun and banged the door shut on peter's face.

"aur tum sameer. wo kya tha?"

"Arjun wo... main..."

"goddammit!! You are a freaking police officer and you could not save yourself from that man eater? Pata bhi hai wo tera kya haalat bana sakta tha?" he pushed him from his shoulder and sameer just bowed his head.

"I was shocked"

"how could you let anyone touch you...like...like as if he...he was about to...to...arg! take you as his meal?!"Arjun yelled at top of his voice.

This is what peter heard. Just this line. ;)

"I am sorry Arjun..."

"aa gale mil sam... don't let him near you. Rather, I would not let him near you. Now go and wash up. i will sort this"

"kay"

************

All were busy sorting the files in ETF and were ready to go jobless, not literally though, they were still ETF officers, but they were given a long vacation.

Aisha and riya were roaming around with files and stuffs like zombies.

"how could they?" riya whined as she banged all the files in her hand on table.

"exactly. How could they do that to us?" Aisha stomped her foot.

"they just did what they did Aisha and riya. And as sir said, either of you are committed to them let alone be married to them" said Shree, lifting his head from the laptop.

"tujhe kyka? Tujhe to pata bhi nahin hai ki pyaar kya hai. Or wait. He does know love.his laptop his love his wife everything right Shree?" riya went all mad at Shree.

Shree lifted his hand in defence

"mata kali ki jai ho. Mujhe baksh do. Main mere laptop ke saath hi theek hoon. I will not fall in love. I am not interested"

"seedhe seedhe bolo ki you are not interested in girls around Shree" Aisha said with a teasing glint in her eyes.

"jo samajh na hai samajh lo. Mujhe koi farak nahin padta. Main jaisa hun waisa hi theek hun. Aur tumhe kisi aur ke baare mein fikr karna chahiye, mere baare mein nahin" he said and buried his face back in laptop.

"wel, kisi aur pe dhyaan lagan eke baare mein to pata nahin, par khane ke baare mein zaroor sochna chahiye"

"CHOTU!!!" shouted Aisha, riya and Shree together.

**********

With the splendid view of beach, the hotel gave both privacy and serenity.

Arjun and sameer sat quietly and had their meal. They deserved that after hectic work of setting their NEW HOME' and the mission get the ass of peter out of their house'.

"sam, are you sure we did right?"

"you have second thoughts about this."

"not really par..."

"par...?"

"jab baakiyon ko iss bare mein pata chalega,... I mean hamare yahan hone ke baare mein to..."

"to kuch nahin Arjun. relax. Just enjoy and do what we are here for."

"par... riya, Aisha, chotu..."

"unka kuch nahin. They will live with this kay... and why fear Arjun? we are doing nothing wrong."

"hmm..."

They had a much silent meal after that.


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to be continued...

ignore typos please...


~pari😳

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Posted: 11 years ago
#15
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Awww... team got a 3 months holiday 😉😉😉😉
And another dostana in team... Shree-Chhotu 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
Sam ... attacked by "man-eater Peter" 🤣🤣🤣
Sweaty, shirtless Sameer
Peter said gliding his palm over sameer's chest and his very well toned abdomen.
He felt tingling sensation when his hand moved from his abs to side of abdomen.
Hayye maar dala... mai to wahi behosh ho gayi ☺️☺️☺️☺️
Thank god Arjun aa gaya bachane 🤣🤣🤣🤣
Poor Peter... Arjun ne uski band Baja di 😉😉😉
Peter taking Sam as his meal 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

"aa gale mil sam... don't let him near you. Rather, I would not let him near you. Now go and wash up. i will sort this"

🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
Waiting for next part 😉😉
Edited by bgargate - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#16
y are they doing this ...pooor ri and ayesh
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Posted: 11 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: AnjuRish

y are they doing this ...pooor ri and ayesh

thanks for commenting...
you ll know about them and the relation they share very soon...
hope you like it...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#18
dostana between arjun sam...😆😆😆😆😆

peter i loved his gestures..bichara sam...jealous arjun...i loved this story...read both prologue and Chapter together...both are awesome pari...

3 months vacation in goa kiya kiya rang layegi...continue soon pari...nd thanks for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#19
It was a supppa fab and hilarious update.
Loved it a lot.
Sorry for a short comment coz,i have exams tomorrow...
Continue sooonish... :)
thanks for the pm... :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#20
oh ..em..geee pari!!
u r..just..outstanding girl!!
ye kya.. bachchon ko fasa k boss log vacation mana rhe h??!!
so unfair..
peter ka bachcha.. hath mat lagaiyo mere sam ko!!
goli se uda dungi..wo mela h bash!!

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