Ariya FF: Pyar sirf dard deti hai....!!! updt on pg40 on 24/4/14 - Page 8

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Posted: 11 years ago
#71
koi baat nahi dear.
take care and get well soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#72
no problem
jab tum puritaraha se thik ho jao tab update dedena
haaa dena zarur
love u
n get well soon dear
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Posted: 11 years ago
#73
Hey guys m bck well thnx 4 all ur wish dat i got well so soon thnk u n sry to dos on whose stories i din't cmmtd bt i'll surely do it 1nc i get time so plz gussa mat hona k

N yaa in dis prt der's no ariya or raesha so sry 4 dat coz dis entire chpt is based on riya n shree's bond n well sum little revealn on d cmng further parts so surely read dis part to get d base of d future story 😉 n sry 4 spelling mistakes


Chp 3
continue...


Riya still in her cabin n crying wen suddenly shree came muttering 2 himself n riya turant apne ansun poch leti h



shree: samajhti kya h apne aapko jab dekho mere piche padi rehti h huh...!!!


riya: (luks at him n gvs a fake smile) kya hua shree kispe itna gussa ho rha h?


shree: (sits bside riya) aur kispe uss liza ki bacchi pe sach kahun ek nob ki chudail h chudail


riya: (yells) shree...!!!


shree: kya...? sacchi...! tujhe pata h usne mujhe bandar kaha i mean imagine woh bhi uss idiot ajay k saamne (ajay assists liza)


riya: tujhe iss baat pe gussa aa rha h ki usne tujhe bandar kaha yaa iss baat pe ki ajay k saamne kaha?


shree: matlab?


riya: matlab tu acche se janta h shree (wid a raised brow)


shree: (trying 2 avoid her gaze) tu kya keh rhi h meri samajh nhi aa rha h ri...?


riya: accha...toh tujhe itna gussa kyun aa rha h i mean liza toh tujhe pehle bhi aise hi bulati thi toh aaj acchanak kya ho gya


shree: ri tu na plz apni baaton se mujhe confuse mat kar, aisa kuch nhi h jo tu soch rhi h


riya: yaa ri8 tabhi tujhe itna farak padh rha h? shree tu mera dost h isliye keh rhi hun agr tere dil mein uske liye koi feelings h toh use waqt rehte keh de kyunki pyaar bade kismat vaalon ko milta h sab k nasseb mein nhi hota


(wid tears in her eyes,den shree notices her pale face n her red eyes n understands she must b crying so he asks)


shree: ri kya hua tu thik toh h...tu roh rhi thi?


riya: nhi toh (luking other side) aisa kuch nhi h


shree: ri jhoot mat bol aur yaha dekh...! (bt she dsn't shift her gaze) ri...!
den she luks at him


shree: kya hua kisine kuch kaha tujhse? (den thinks sumthing) n arjun sir ne kuch kaha?


riya gets shocked n shree understands dat yes hez d reason bhind her tears n asks clamly


shree: kya kaha unhone...?



riya starts crying agn n hugs him tightly n wanted to say sumthng bt suddenly uski saans phulne lagti h n strts breathing heavily



shree:(gets scared n says) ri...ri kya hua riya...! (woh riya ka bag dhundta h n ask her in betwn) ri teri davaiyaan kaha h bag mein h naa...?


(riya jst nodded her head) n atlast shree finds her medicines n give it 2 her she tks d medicines n feels little better


shree: (wid concern) ur ok? ab kaisa feel kar rhi h...?


riya:(slowly) m ok


shree: par tujhe achanak yeh sab (riya cuts him in betwn)


riya: shree tujhe pata toh h bachpan se dekhta aa rha h phir bhi...?


shree: I knw bt abhi tak toh tujhe thik ho jana chahiye tha i mean tu ab bhi yeh davaiyaan...n meine kisi se kaha nhi bt mein kuch mahino se dekh rha hun teri tabiyat zyada bigadne lagi h tu doc k pass kyun nhi jaati...?


riya: shree relax n yaa mein thik hun n yaa ur ri8 pata nhi kyun bt kuch dino se meri tabiyat zyada bigadne lgi h woh actually meine kuch dino se yeh davaiyaan leni band kar di thi shayad isliye...par pata nhi yeh davaiyaan itni impt kyun h...? mumma papa ne bhi kabhi nhi bataya tha bas kehte the taakat ki davaiyaan h aur unke death k mbaad daijaan bhi yehi kehti h par taakat ki davaai naa lene se itna kuch...? meri kuch samajh nhi aa rha ?


shree: toh tu apne doc uncle se baat kyun nhi karti m sure woh toh jaante hi honge naa?


riya: haan ur ri8 shree...khair tu tension mat le mein doc uncle se baat kar lungi ok
shree: pakka promise...?


riya: haan baba pakka promise


shree: f9...vaise haan rathod sir ne call kiya tha unhe aur arjun sir ko commisioner sir ne bulvaaya h so vo aur arjun sir vahi gye h aur aaj koi aur kaam bhi nhi h so humein off de di toh chal mein tujhe ghar drop kar deta hun


riya: hmm thik h mein face wash kar k aati hun


shree: ok


n aftr sumtime dey left offc on shree's bike bt dey din't knw dat sum 1 was disturbd aftr listeng to der tlks...




(well who to kwn dat stay tune to d story)


{ piu }

Edited by piupan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#74
Yippiieee me first 🥳
Awww Riya cried a lot coz of Arjun's harsh words.
Loved Shree n Riya's convo.
Waaooo loved their frndshp. They both understands eachother so well.
OMG wht happened to Riya suddenly.
Is she suffering from any severe disease??????
I think the person who listened their convo was Arjun.
Continue soon.
Edited by Aks13 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#75
it was awesome update dear.
loved shree riya bonding.
omg shree is jealous.
is riya ill?
please dont make her ill.
i think arjun is listening all this.
continue soon.
and thanx for pm.
Edited by ll_megha_ll - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#76
is she ill???
oh no pls no
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Posted: 11 years ago
#77
nice update
omg what happened to riya?
is she sick???
cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#78
Awesome update...😊😊😊
Riya is sick??????who is that person who listened shree-riya convo???

Continue soon...😊😊😊
Edited by Snehajain - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#79
nice update..d bondng btw
shree an riya is rely nice
tak care😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#80
Superb update Is Riya has any health promblem? Thanks for the pm continue soon

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