Ariya FF: Pyar sirf dard deti hai....!!! updt on pg40 on 24/4/14 - Page 16

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Posted: 11 years ago
Iski update kab milenge Piu...??????
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Posted: 11 years ago
update nahi karna hai kya?😡😡😡
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Posted: 11 years ago
Ok i knw many of u really want to kill me n i wld hv done d same if wld had been in ur plc coz nt updted dis story for more den 4 mnths now so...no excuses...well i thght of discontinuing dis ff bt coz of sum frnds n readers m continuing it n dis updt is specially for my dear frnd n reader Aks13 luv u so much dear for ur constant support n luv for my ff thnkew thnkew so much dear luv u for dis n also thnkx to all does who is constantly asking for d updt thnkew so much guys really thnx a lot...n so for u all m continuing dis ff agn n yaa i hd written dis part bt if not live up to d expectatn den m really sry coz was not in link wid d story for more den 4 mnths so plz agr aap log bhi bhul gye ho den agn go thrgh d part ok so no more bakbak n here"s d updt specially for u Aks13 n my luvly readers




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Edited by piupan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Part 5(b)



Bth d couples entered d party n r keeping n eye on every to get their suspect all d crowd wid their patners where as raesha n ariyasaked standing at a corner n watching others all of a sudden d lights went off n a spotlight cums on a guy who is d host of d party...



host:- hello everyone...sorry 2 disturb u all i know aap sab soch rahen honge ki yeh bich mein q aa gaya v were enjoying?...bt sorry 2 say ki aapme se aise kai couples hai jo shayad njoy nhi kar rahen hai ( luking at raesha, ariya n d other couples who were standing at a corner ) so isliye i hav a plan or shld i say a game n iss game mein sabhi couples ko participate karna hoga no excuse...so game kuch iss tarah hai k aap sabhi couples pe spotlights padhengi n jis kissi pe bhi ye spotlight rukhi they hav 2 cum on d dance floor n dance on 1 of d romantic songs... bt gaan jo hum play karenge ussi pe aapko dance karna hoga so r u guys ready???



crowd:- yeah...!!!



host:- ok so 1 2 3 n gooo...



(n d spotlight started...aisehi kai couples pe spotlight rukhti hai n they dance on a romantic nob n tabhi d nxt time spotlight stop on raesha )



they were both shocked n luked at each other confirm whether its true? n yes they realise yes its true...



host 2 raesha:- common guys... aaplog khade q hai? dance floor pe aiye



n raesha both hesitantly started walking 2 d dance floor hand in hand wereas riya started giggling luking at them 2 whc arjun just raised his brow luking at riya n she stoped abruptly whc arjun just smirked whereas choree...



shree:- hailaa chotu...rathod sir aur ayesha dance??? i cant blv dis?



chotu:- hmm... mujhe bhi, aaj itne saare shocks lag rahen hai ki kahin me behosh na ho jaun?



shree (panic):- hey chotu dekh tu mujhpe behosh hokar gir mat jaana warna kahin me uth hi na jaun (acting as if he will die )



chotu (angrily):- shree...!!!



shree (scared ):- are baba mazak kar rahan tha, relax n wahan dekh etf chief n lady dabang ka romance



( n they both turn 2 d dance floor 2 hav a luk on raesha's dance )



music starts n rathod extends his hand 2wards ayesha n she holds it n rathod pulls her 2wards him n she lands on his chest he puts 1 of his hands on ayesha's waist n by d other holds her other hand while ayesha has her 1 hand on his shoulder n d other holding his hand firmly



( lyrisc boy's line in green n girl's in pink )



( Baahon ke darmiyaan do pyaar mil rahe hain
Jaane kya bole mann dole sunke badan
Dhadkan bani zubaan ) - 2

( moving slowly by d music luking into each other eyes )



( Baahon ke darmiyaan do pyaar mil rahe hain
Jaane kya bole mann dole sunke badan
Dhadkan bani zubaan
Baahon ke darmiyaan ) - 2

( ayesha puts bth her arms arnd his neck n rathod on her waist n swaying to d music )



( Khulte badn hote labhon ki ye ankahi
Khulte badn hote labhon ki ye ankahi ) - 2
( luking 2wrds her lips n eyes alternatively )
Mujhse keh rahi hai ki badhne de bekhudi
( pulling her more closer )
Mil yoon ki daud jaayein nas nas mein bijliyaan
( hugs her tightly as if letting ayesha knw abt his feelings )



Baahon ke darmiyaan do pyaar mil rahe hain

Jaane kya bole mann dole sunke badan
Dhadkan bani zubaan
Baahon ke darmiyaan




Aasmaan ko bhi ye haseen raaz hai pasand
Aasmaan ko bhi ye haseen raaz hai pasand

( breaking d hug luking at him n blushing )
Uljhi uljhi saanson ki aawaaz hai pasand
Moti luta rahi hai saawan ki badliyaan

( rathod jst smiles at ayesha n places a soft kiss on ayesha's forehead )



Baahon ke darmiyaan do pyaar mil rahe hain

Baahon ke darmiyaan do pyaar mil rahe hain
Jaane kya bole mann dole sunke badan
Dhadkan bani zubaan
Baahon ke darmiyaan

( sharing n eyelock n lost in each other )




D song cums to an end
n dey cums out of d eyelock
coz of d applause...rathod feels embarrased of d PDA of his luv whereas ayesha just blushes like a tomato n leaves d dance floor 2gether whereas riya is all d time smiling n happy 4 ayesha n arjun is staring riya n a smile is playing on his lips as well whereas our choree [ hahahaha...bechare behosh hone ki kagaar ( extent ) par hai ]



host:- wow dat was very romantic ...awsum thnku mr and mrs rathod ...ok so ab yeh final round hai dekhte hai who the lucky 1ns r? so lets start



(n again d spotlights get started n stops on a couple n well no prize 4 guessing who d couple is obviously our ariya )



Riya is just shcked n is nt able 2 move whereas arjun he is smirking n very happy...on d other hand rathod is smirking feeling happy 4 his frnd n ayesha well she is shcked as well coz she can never imagine arjun dance n choree...shree is standing with mouth wide open n well chotu he is near to faint



whereas arjun just pulls a shcked riya 2 d dance floor n holds her near to him by putting an arm on her waist n holding her other arm firmly wereas riya is only standing as a puppet to his hand



( d lights gets dim n music starts )



n dey start swaying 2 d music



hey la la la la la la...
la la la la la la...


(dekha jo tumko, yeh dil ko kya huwa hai
meree dhadkano pe yeh chhaya kya nasha hai ha)

(dekha jo tumko, yeh dil ko kya huwa hai
meree dhadkano pe yeh chhaya kya nasha hai ha)

( bth r luking at each other n sharing a cute eyelock )

(mohabbat ho naa jaye divana kho naa jaye
sambhalu kaise isako mujhe too bata ha

( twirls her arnd n pulls her agn near him nw her bck is touching his chest )

(mohabbat ho naa jaye divana kho naa jaye
sambhalu kaise isako mujhe too bata ha0

( she has closed her eyes n arjun breathing agnst her neck which is creating goosebumps on her whole body )

dekha jo tumko, yeh dil ko kya huwa hai

( turns her 2wrds him slowly n lockng his eyes wid her )

meree dhadkano pe yeh chhaya kya nasha hai ha

( riya is jst lock in his eyes )



bhigee bhigee alkon se, choree choree palko se
kyun meraa sapna churaye

( riya's eyes gets moist n she luks down )

jhukee jhukee ankhiyo se, dhire dhire batiyo se
kyun mujhe apna banaye

( puts a finger under her chin n make her luk at him n cares her cheeks lovingly )

meree najaro pe chhaye, khushbu ke jaise aaye
meraa tan mann mahekaye

( arjun pulls her more near 2 him )

saanso me yeh pal pal jane kaise halchal
kuchh bhee samajh me naa aaye

(der lips r jst millimeters awy frm each other breathing agnst each other )

(shararat ho naa jaye, mohabbat ho naa jaye
sambhalu kaise isako mujhe too bata)

( riya is going to leave as if sacred dat she'll do sum mistake coz of his intensity )

(shararat ho naa jaye, mohabbat ho naa jaye
sambhalu kaise isako mujhe too bata )

( bt arjun agn pulls her near him n traces her lips by his thumb which sends a chill shiver on bth der bodies )



meree hai yeh mushkil, abb toh yeh meraa dil
bas me hujur nahee hai
itna bata de mujhe kaise samjhau tujhe
meraa yeh kasur nahee hai

( luking at arjun lovingly as if saying i can't stop luvng u )

chahe ham chahe bhee toh pehre lagaye bhee toh
kaise din rat ko roke
aag bina yeh jale, jor naa koyee chale
kaise jajbat ko roke

( hez luking at riya as if saying i can't control my emotions wenever ur near me i can't deny dat i luv u )

(yu chahat ho naa jaye mohabbat ho naa jaye
sambhalu kaise isako mujhe too bata ha
)

(yu chahat ho naa jaye mohabbat ho naa jaye
sambhalu kaise isako mujhe too bata ha)

( sharing each others emotions n feelings wid each other swaying to d music agnst each other )

dekha jo tumko, yeh dil ko kya huwa hai
meree dhadkano pe yeh chhaya kya nasha hai ha
(mohabbat ho naa jaye, divana kho naa jaye
sambhalu kaise isako, mujhe too bata)

(mohabbat ho naa jaye, divana kho naa jaye
sambhalu kaise isako, mujhe too bata)

( twirling her agn n pulling her 2wrds him holding her tightly, her bck touching his chest n he kisses her neck riya jst close her eyes to feel his luv whereas arjun closes his eyes to live dis moment as if forever )




Dey bth r in d same position wen d song cums to n end n dey came out of d trance coz of d applause riya is shcked as if she had done sumthing wrong n arjun is embarresed n shcked as well dat hw can he loose his control bth r unable to luk at each other n leaves d dance floor...



[ aft d dance dey gets der suspect n d case gets solve ( sry won't mention abt d case as m nt gud wid it ) n dey leave 4 der home ]



rathod:- ok guys case toh solve ho gya h aur bahut raat bhi ho chuki h so paper wrk kal dekh lenge so abhi ghar jaakar rest karte h shree-chotu tum log kaise jaa rhe ho...?



shree:- sir meri bike h mein chotu ko drop kar dunga



rathod:- ok so ayesha mein tumhe drop kar deta hun n rawte tum riya ko drop kar do



riya wanted to protest bt raesha n choree already left n arjun jst 1nc luks at riya n widout sayng nething leaves for d parking lot riya is left wid no other option so she leaves bhind arjun



precap:- rathod proposes ayesha n arjun hurts riya agn



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Edited by piupan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update...
Both couple's lost in eachother...
Precap Huh Arjun na..grr
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Posted: 11 years ago
OMG both songs are my fav. and the way u describe ariya and sasha in these song is awesome yaar

i m just imaging them to dance...hayeee...so cute
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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing update !!!!
specially the dancing seq
Luv it
But the preccap really sad
plz nxt time continue soon
& Thx 4 pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
finlly u remember this story😲
it was awesome
ariya & sasha dance was superb👏
in precape again arjun hurt riya😡
plz make sure this time riya wont cry but fightback for herself
hope we dnt have to wait long for next chapter
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome fantastic fab update
Loveit
Cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing update,Piu dearie.
Loved it a lot.
Omg...
Raesha and Ariya dancing on romantic songs.
Loved Shree and Chotu's expression.
Both the songs' are my favorite.
Thanks for selecting these songs.
Raesha and Ariya are lost in their love land...
Precap is interesting...
Sameer bhai going to propose Ayesha whereas Arjun is gonna hurt Riya again...
Arrrggghhh...
Why r u hurting Riya,Arjun?
Continue sooonish... :)
thanks for the pm... :)

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