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Posted: 12 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: ll_megha_ll

Wow ayushi
awesome cs.
Continue soon.
And thanx for pm.
Jaldi jaldi part 1 bas update kardo



thnx di
will update it soon
jo hukum aapko jaldi update mil jaega😊😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: aroojarain

wow..
CS was amazaing..
ab update bhi de do...
cont soon.. :)



glad u liked it
yep update jaldi hi mil jaegi
thnx dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
#73

thnx dear
glad that u liked😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#74
Waooo all r managent student...
very nice cs...Ayushi&Mish
but litle confused...
kunal lvs riya..right...
is kunal know arjun also like riya..??
lolll aisha lvs sam but didnt say n sam has crush on aisha...
interesting story update soon...
mish update ur other story to
Edited by ll_piya_ll - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: ll_piya_ll

Waooo all r managent student...
very nice cs...Ayushi&Mish
but litle confused...
kunal lvs riya..right...
is kunal know arjun also like riya..??
lolll aisha lvs sam but didnt say n sam has crush on aisha...
interesting story update soon...
mish update ur other story to


Glad u like it dedu

Me will officially come back in oct
U get my updates dedo
we will
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Posted: 12 years ago
#76
HEY FRIENDS THNX 4 LIKING THE CS.
PRESENTING U THE NEXT UPDATE.


PART-1


Sun rise who give us shining ,hopes and lot of happiness

Jo city shant hotte hai vo Uth ker shor sai bhar jatte hai

Shift scene in boy's room

A boy who smiling while sleeping.his mom to wake him but stooped herself whn she saw his smile and went out 4m his room

Suddenly ,boy wake up and see wht is date today ? And he is so xcited remember something

Flashback starts

A girl who is 4 yr enter in class with pink bag ,pink water bottle and cute dimple smile which is adorable .teacher introduced her as miss Riya mukherjee

Being a girl ,she was shy to look up she asked 4m mam where she sit?

Teacher said to her sit in 2nd bench with tht boy .a boy was happy to let this new girl sit with him and pass his smile

Boy: hey my name is Arjun wht is ur name ?

Girl: my name is Riya

Boy: can we become frnds and 4ward his hand to him

Riya handshake her hand with him and pass dimple smile

Arjun: you r beautiful pata hai mera papa bhi mom ko kehtay hai (suker papa nay arjun k samnay apni wife ko sexy nahi keh diya verna Aaj arjun bhi lollls)

Riya:Thanx Arjun with his dimple smile

Flashback ends

Boy (in mind)- aaj hameri friendship ko 15 years ho gaye riya.par hamari equations abhi bhi nai badali.

Sab kuch wo hi hai mera bunk karna, tumhara mere liye notes banana.mere roz crickefoaming sizer Lagana or tumara cheer up kerna .Exam ki tym pe mera jaldi sona and tumhara wo call karna taki main jaga rahun.meri fght karna and tuhara first aid box hath me leker mujhe dantna.kuch bhi nai badala

Arjun Riya k bina Kush nahi hai

On the other girls's room

Girl sleep peacefully alam stuck 7:30 She want stop that.But suddenly remember something and gets up.

Girl: aaj friendship day hai.Mujhe usay sabse pehle wish karna Hemesha ki Tara

Go to fresh up herself

Time 8'o clock

Girl eat her brk'fast very quickly and thinking pack some paratha 4 him and her mother saw her and hit her head with love

Girls's mom : Riya dhayan sai

Riya : mom vo Mai while eating allu paratha

Riya's mom: yeh lo tiffin

Riya enquiryly toward her mom

Riya's mom: allu I parathay I knw Arjun ko bhut pasand hai or yeh bhi pata hai mere beti usk lea leker janay ka Soch rhe the

Riya hug her mom and kiss her

Riya: u r best mom in the world

Riya's mom : I knw my bacha u r best daughter in the world .nw go and wish him

Riya took the car to arjun's house

ARJUN'S MOM OPEN THE DOOR

ARJUN'S MOM- Arre riya beita tu aa gayi.main yehi soch rahi thi jo iss din sabse pehle door knock karti hai wo aayi kyun nai.jao wo apne kamare me hai .aur tumare liye kya gift lae ye soch raha hoga

RIYA-jee aunty.

MEANWHILE IN ARJUN'S ROOM

ARJUN- beta arjun flashback me nai present mein aaja wo aati hi hogi tumhe wish karne aur to hai ki flashback mein jake present mein aapni watt lagwa raha hai.par main use dun bhi to kya???sabkuch to hai usske paas

Riya hears arjun's words

RIYA-mujhe kisi bhi cheez ki zarurat nai hai arjun.Bas tum hamesha mere sath rehna itna hi kafi hai.

ARJUN (hugging her)-HAPPY FRIENDSHIP DAY RIYA and thnx 4 coming in my life and teaching me how to live

RIYA-HAPPY FRIENDSHIP DAY TO U TOO ARJUN and man karti hun na apne chote se dimag pe zyada stress mat dalo warna tumhare computer ki tarah hang ho jaega.

Riya forwarding tiffin

RIYA-Lo tumhare fav allu ke parathe.Maa ke hath ke kha lo warna thande ho jaenge

Arjun forwarding his hands

ARJUN "WOW

RIYA- "pehle joa aur bath leke aao and (giving him a packet)ye pehenke aao

ARJUN-(taking the packet)Isme kya hai,mera gift


RIYA-Han.Mujhe bahut dondne ke bad pasand aaya.Hope tumhe bhi pasand aaye

ARJUN-Tum lao aur mujhe pasand na aae aisa ho sakta hai kya???lao abhi pehenke aata hun.thnx riya

RIYA-AB kya mujhe formal line bul waoge"friendship me no sorry no thank u".Jaldi jau phir ume bakiyo se bhi milne jana hai

ARJUN GOES RIYA SITS ON BED AND WATCHES THEIR CHILDHOON PICS KEPT ON THE BED SIDE STAND

ARJUN(in mind)-Nai riya aaj to main tumhare liye kuch special plan zarur karunga.Mian is bar tmhe gift zarur dunga.

Edited by sharmaayushi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#77
Super awesome amez fab update loveit cont soon
Hugs to api n baji
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Posted: 12 years ago
#78
Awesome update
fantastic loved flashbacke
update chota tha but fab tha api
Love u both and your story to
Hugs u both api n baji
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Posted: 12 years ago
#79

Awesome start dr.

Beautifully written.

Loved their bond of friendship.

FB was mind blowing.

Awww their first meet was so cute.

OMG he told her that she's beautiful. That's so adorable.

Awww so... so... Cute babies.

Waaaooo thy r frnds frm 15 yrs. Such a long time.

Loved Arjun's MV. Wow he thought that he is nothing without her. That's amazing.

Awww her mom knw her so well n understands her frndshp with Arjun.

Loved their convo n the way thy wished eachother.

Riya's gift to Arjun was really vry beautiful.

Awww Arjun wanted to do something special for her. That's great.

Lets see wht happened nxt.

🤗 for pm dr.

Lv u a lot!!!!!!

Continue soon.

Edited by Aks13 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#80
Superb awesome update
lovly flashback I love your story
Cont soon & thanks for pm

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