PYAAR KA BANDHAN update pg-3 27/8 - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
#11
Sweetn adorable concept.

CS n Prologue r amazing.

Continue soon.

Thanks for pm dr.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#12
Nice concept. ..
Story on Rathod. .
Is it Rathod's goodbye story? ??
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Posted: 12 years ago
#13
Nice concept !!!!
plz update soon ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#14
thank you guyes for liking my concept.
i am very glad and specially zebbie thank younow thanx to all those who comment and hit like button

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i am very glad.
here is the os

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Edited by ll_megha_ll - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Rathore Zebbie OS: PYAAR KA BANDHAN

When zebbie knows about biggest truth of her life she is shattered. She dont know what to do. She feel bertrayed and leave that house and dont know where she is going. She is completely shattered and specially when she knows rathore is not real brother. She loves rathore beyond any limit and same as rathore. She sees the mandir and she sit on stairs and remembering abut her and rathore childhood days.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~FLASHBACK~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Sam(12): hey pari kya kar rahi hai?

Zebbie(7): kuch nahi bhaiya drawing bana rahi hoon but ban nahi raha.

Sam: la mai teri help karoon?

Zebbie: bhaiya aap sacchi mai meri help karo ge?

Sam: haan kyun tujhe apne bhai pe shaq hai?

Zebbie: nahi bhaiya

Sam: to fir laa.

Zebbie: yeh lo.

Sam making drawing while zebbie sits with him and seeing him.

Zebbie: wow bhaiya aapne to bahut acchi drawing banaye hai.

Sam: thax pari.

Zebbie: i love you bhaiya.

Sam: i love you too.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~FLASHBACK ENDS~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Zebbie: bhaiya uss waqt aapne meri help ki thi par shayad aaj aap meri help nahi kar payenge. She remembers another flashback when she was hurt and what rathore did

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~FLASHBACK~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Zebbie(9yrs) is come home after scool but she was crying her mom

Mrs rathore: kya hua zebbie tum ro kyun rahi ho?

Zebbie: she didnt talked to her but she sees her hand where she get scratch and blood is coming.

Mrs Rathore: omg zebbie yeh kya hua or kaise lagi tumhe yeh chot lao dikhao mujhe mai abhi davai(medicine) laga deti hoon but she nodded in negatine and started crying.

Mr. Rathore: kya hua meri zebbie ko?

Mrs. Rathore: dekhiye na isse chot lagi hai or yeh apna haat nahi dikha rahi hai or davai bhi nahi lagva rahi hain.

Mr Rathore: par kyun??

Suddenly sam(14yrs) comes and zebbie sees this she running goes towards rathore and hug him and also started crying.

Zebbie: bhaiyaa...

Sam: kya hua meri pari ko?

Zebbie: bhaiya dekhiye scool main mujhe uss rocky ne dhakka diya or mai gir gaye.

Sam: what par tune mujhe scool mai kyun nahi bataya or usne tujhe dhakka kyun diya?

Zebbie: vo aapke bare main ulta seedha bol raha tha to mujhe gussa aa gay or maine usse kaha ki agar tu meri bhai ke bare main bola to main teri mummy se shikayat keh dungi to ussne mujhe dhakka de diya or main agar aapko batati to aap gussa hote or usse marte isliye nahi bataya.

Sam: damit! zebbie tujhe mujhe pehle hi batana chahiye tha kam se kam mai uski mam se to shikayat ya fir usse do char thapadd marta tune davai li.

Zebbie: nahi

Sam: chal mai lagata hoon or vo uske wond pe medicene laga ta hai.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~FLASHBACK ENDS~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Zebbie bhaiya aaj mere chot dil pe lagi hai or aap upe davai nahi laga sakte.

On the other hand rathore is madly searching for zebbie and finally he caught her sitting on the stairs.

Sam: zebbie tu yaha kya kar rahi hai?

Zebbie: bhaiya aap yaha kyun aaye hai??

Sam: mai yaha kyun aaya hoon matlab kya hai tera?

Zebbie: bhaiya aapko shayad pata nahi par mai aapki real sister nahi

Sam: khabardar tune doobara aisa kaha to. Manta hoon tujhe sacchai suke dukh hua hai par iska matlab yeh to nahi na tu ghar chodke chali jaye. Tuje kya lagta hai agar tu ghar chodke chali jaye ghi to maa or babasa khush honge? yaa fir yeh tera bhai? Mujhe to aisa lagta hai tune humse kabhi pyaar hi nahi kiya

Zebbie: nahi bhaiya aisa nahi hai

Sam: to kaisa hai tune ek baar bhi nahi socha agar tu aisa kare ghi to maa papa pe kya bite ghi tere iss bhai ka kya hoga? Agar tu mujhse dur chali jaye ghi na to mai mar jayunga.

Zebbie: nahi bhaiya aisa nahi hai i am sorry and hugs him.

Sam: i love you dear tera bhai tere bagair nahi reh sakta.

Zebbie: I love you too bhai and mai bhi aapke bagair nahi reh sakti.


kisi ne sach hi kaha hai khoon se bada dil ka rishta hota hai. Jaise bhavan shree krishan ka hi example le lo unki maa devki hai but yashoda maa ne unhe pala hai so khoon se zayada bad dil ka rishta hai vaise hi zebbie or rathore ka bhi unke pyaar ke bandhan ki dor bahut majboot hai jise koi alag or tod nahi sakta


THE END

Edited by ll_megha_ll - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#16
beautiful part...
loved the bro-sis bond!!
fb was awsum...!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#17
nice part dear.. Thanks for pms..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#18
So sweet. .
Zebbie and Rathore sir...Muah..

Thanks Megha..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#19
U brought tears in my eyes...
I am so happy.
I truly loved it.
I m seriously missing BK bhai so much.
Just loved it a lot.
Fb was really awesome.
*hugggies*
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Posted: 12 years ago
#20
Awesome,amazing,wonderful and emotional update

Claps4 u meghu

Thanx 4 pm me

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