FF:Meri Pehchaan(ch10-pg44)03.07.2014.

Anika_PreRish thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 12 years ago
#1
Charecter Sketch:

*ACP Arjun Suryakant Rawte- 2nd-in-command of ETF.Childhood best friend of Chief of ETF.A no-nonsense cop,who has his own way of investigating cases.Has no troublesome past.Hot,handsome,dashing and good-looking person.Hates Liars and Criminals to the core.Has his own unconventional ways of interrogating criminals.

*ACP Sameer Damsingh Rathod- Chief of ETF.A hard core Rajput.Does not mix his professional life with his personal life.Soft hearted person,as well.Childhood best friend of ACP Arjun Suryakant Rawte.He is a person who abides by the rules,regulations and the protocol.Loves Discipline.A Happily Married Man.

*ACP Ayesha Sameer Rathod- An undercover and ammunition expert.Known as the Lady Dabanng of ETF.Best friend of Shree,Chotu and Liza.And,the lovely and caring wife of ETF Chief,ACP Sameer Damsingh Rathod.Newly promoted ACP of ETF.

*Liza D'Cruz- Forensic Expert of ETF.Best friend of Riya,Chotu and Ayesha.Loves to experiment with Chemicals and Dead Bodies'.Engaged to Shree.Loves to irritate Shree,by calling him, ''Specky'',infront of her Seniors.

*ACP Riya Kapoor- Newly promoted ACP of ETF.Younger sister of Ayesha and the lovable sister-in-law of ACP Sameer Damsingh Rathod.Tall,slim and beautiful looking girl.Loves Arjun a lot.Both are engaged.Cant tolerate crimes against Women.Loves to rant about Statistics.A big hygiene and cleanliness freak.Black Belt in Taekwondo and Martial Arts.Gold Medalist in Rifle Shooting.Loves her elder sister,Ayesha,a lot.To Riya,Ayesha is her biggest support.Her one dimpled smile makes everybody forget their worries.

*Chandrakant Patil- Commando of ETF.Fondly,known as ''Chotu'' by everyone.Soft at heart,but,to the criminals,he is very harsh.Loves food a lot.

*Shreekant Sen- The TECHIE WHIZZ of ETF.his passion is to trace calls and to hack websites.He loves his gadgets a lot,especially,his lappy.Known,fondly,as ''Shree''.Best friend of Riya,Ayesha and Chotu.Engaged to Liza D'Cruz.Loves to invent new gadgets.


Other Additional Charecters:

*Sr.Officer Akriti Khanna-Mumbai Crime Branch

*Sr.Officer Adhvay Sharma-Mumbai Crime Branch

*DIG Dustin Coelho-National Director of ETF and DIG of Mumbai Police.

*Mother Rosemary-Mother of St.Ana's Orphanage.



Prologue:

A murder takes place in a posh locality of Mumbai.ETF is called to investigate the case.

Did ETF make a mistake by taking this case?
Edited by ...anika... - 11 years ago

Created

Last reply

Replies

241

Views

56.9k

Users

58

Likes

560

Frequent Posters

Anika_PreRish thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 12 years ago
#2
Index:

Charecter sketch: pg1
Ch1: pg1
Ch2: pg4 and 6
Edited by zebbie0504 - 11 years ago
Anika_PreRish thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 12 years ago
#3
ch1:

A girl in her mid-twenties,was sitting lonely in her room,filled with darkness.Only a small amount of moonlight peeped in,through the window.She curled herself up like a woolen ball.Eyes' tightly shut.The only companion of her was the darkness and loneliness.Soon,she fell asleep.


Flashback:-
3 years before:-

Location:- Mumbai High Court.
Case:- ACP Riya Kapoor,arrested on the charges of attempt to murder case of an eye-witness.

The court room was buzzing with so many voices.Questions were being raised on the reputation of ETF.Today is the final hearing of the case.Everybody's eyes' were stuck to the final decision.Testimonials' of the ETF team,including the DIG,was recorded and taken.A helpless,supportless Riya,stood in the witness box.The defence side failed to produce any witness or proof,which will help to get Riya bailed from the charges.

Riya,stood in the witness box with handcuffs in her hands.

As the Judge entered the Court,everybody stood up.The plocie officers,present there,gave him a Salute.Riya tried to,but,backed off.

For half an hour,the proceedings went on.After an hour,the time came when the Court's final decision will be announced.

Judge: 'Yeh Adaalat ACP Riya ko Mehta murder case ki ek lauti jashmadeet gawah ko attempt to murder case mein 5 saal ki sazaah sunati hai.ACP Arjun Rawte ki bayaan mutabiq,yeh saaf zahir hota hai ki,ACP Riya ne hi yeh jurm karne ki koshish ki hai.
Yeh Adaalat ETF Chief,ACP Sameer Damsingh Rathod aur DIG Dustin Coelho ko yeh aadesh deti hai,ki,ACP Riya Kapoor ki saari rank medals aur badges nikal diya jaaye.The case is cl...''

Before,the Judge could say ''Closed'',Riya interfered.

Riya(in a broken voice):- Your Honour,ACP Sameer Rathod aur DIG sir ko itna kasht uthaane ki zarurat nahi hai.Main nahi chahti ki yeh dono ek criminal ko chuye.So,it is my request,ki,main khud apne saare rank medals aur badges nikal ke Court ke havaale kardu.Maine jo kia,woh maafi ke layak nahi hai.Agar aap ijaazat dein,toh.

Judge:- Ijaazat hai.

Riya(in a broken tone):- Thank you,Your Honour.


The Judge ordeed the police officer,who was in charge of this case,to open the handcuffs of Riya.Riya came in the centre and started to open the badges and her rank medals.It pained her a lot.It felt,as if,somebody took away her honour and prestige..She handed over the badges and rank medals to DIG Dustin Coelho,and her gun holster and ETF ID to ACP Sameer Damsingh Rathod.

From now,she was not an officer.She was now a criminal for everyone.The police officer tied her hands with the handcuffs and took her away.

As th police officers' took her away,she quickly glanced at her elder sister sister,Ayesha,who was completely broken.She waved a final goodbye to everyone.She knew,that,her sister,Ayesha,believed her Chutki and will do anything to prove her innocent.


Flashback Ends:-

Riya,suddenly,jerked out from her deep sleep.She was sweating profusely.Whenever she used to sleep,this incident followed her,even in her dreams.

Suddenly,she slumped down and started to cry loudly.She curled herself up and cried a lot.She is no longer the the ACP Riya Kapoor,jiske naam sunne se criminals' ki hawa tight ho jaati thhi.

Suddenly,she felt an arm on her shoulder.It was Mother Rosemary,her guardian angel.Ever since,Riya got bailed from the false charge of attempt to murder charge of the eye-witness of Mehta Murder Case,she stayed in St.Ana's Orphanage.Riya built a very strong shell around her,so that,no one could break it again.Her only support was Ayesha and Mother Rosemary.

She hugged Mother Rosemary tightly and cried her heart out.Tear drops also fell from Mother's eyes.She knew what Riya went through.Ayesha told her about the whole matter.She felt really bad for her.No words could console Riya.All she needed was immense love,care and undying support.
Edited by zebbie0504 - 12 years ago
piupan thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail Engager Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#4
yeahhh agn n ariya story luvly nice chrct skthc ariya engaged wow plz conti soon n do pm me plz
anu91 thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#5
Nice and superb start with interesting twist
it was different one
loved to read more
poor Riya
were is Arjun why he is not supporting in the court for Riya
waiting for ur update
do update soon
PM me while updating ur updates
Edited by anu91 - 12 years ago
unishaz thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 12 years ago
#6
nice cs n prologue.. Nice chapter.. Continue..
Mdmadona thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#7
awesome cs & prologue
omg 1st chapter it's really shocking
everybody is against riya & 5 years jail sentence
this is terrific
poor riya feel bad for her
cont soon!!!!!!!!!!!!
fly.high thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#8
wow...beautiful concept zebbie dear...nd an awsm start...

continue soon

nd plz pm me th nxt parts...

love
Aisha
alee001 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#9
aniii!!! superbbb!!!

poor riya feeling bad for her!!!!.. but happy that ayesha is der for her...!!!

arjun was the witness in riya's case?????!!!!

hope riya comes back with a bang!!!!
Anika_PreRish thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 12 years ago
#10

Originally posted by: alee001

aniii!!! superbbb!!!


poor riya feeling bad for her!!!!.. but happy that ayesha is der for her...!!!

arjun was the witness in riya's case?????!!!!

hope riya comes back with a bang!!!!



she will.
aakhir kar Lady Dabaang ki behna hai...

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".