FF:Meri Pehchaan(ch10-pg44)03.07.2014. - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
#11
awesome story dear
thnx 4 the pm and so heartouching story
charactrsketch was awesome
poor riya suffered so muck with out mistake
plz continue soon
thnx once again
will be waiting 4 u to continue the story as soon as possible
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Posted: 12 years ago
#12
cant read it more.. riya ke liye itna dificult.. i cried a lot..

bt please arjun always support her..

please please..

concept is awesome..

continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#13

Waaooo What a mind blowing start.

Lady dabang n chirpy Riya r sisters.

Yayyy Ariya r engaged n Samsha r married.

Incredible update dr.

Riya had to suffered a lot. Feel bad for her.

Wow she sentenced 5 yrs jail on false charges.

OMG Arjun had given statement against Riya.

Hate him for that. He loved her so he must support her but he leaved her alone whn she needed him the most.

Wht the!!!!!! Even Rathod didn't trust her.

That was the heart wrenching scene in which she herself surrendered all her medals n badges.

Its horrible that no one supported her except Aisha n that's why she is so broken now.

Who proved her innocence?????? Is it Aisha??????

I hope she soon get back to her normal life.

Thanks for pm dr.

Continue soon.

Zeb it's a request dr. Plzzz can we have one more update today.

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Posted: 12 years ago
#14
awesome concept
loved the update
riya got arrested for the murder
arjun didnt support her
riya got bailed and now staying in orphanage
thank god atleast there is aisha and mother rosemary supporting riya
waiting for next part
update soon
thanks for the pm
Edited by Aabish_02 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: zebbie0504



she will.
aakhir kar Lady Dabaang ki behna hai...


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Posted: 12 years ago
#16
Nice updt
concept is a diffrent one.
Cont soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#17
Wow...
Thanls for such an overwhelming response.
I am truly touched.
Next chapter will be updated by tonight.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#18
ch2.

Next Morning.

To keep her mind away from drifting into the past,Riya was playing with the kids' of the same orphanage in the Garden.

They were the only people,other than,Mother Rosemary and her Ayesha Di,who will never dare to hurt her.

Mother Rosemary watched this sight from her Office Balcony and smiled at the effort of the children who never fail to bring a smile on her face.

Her back facing two young officers.

''Dekh rahe ho tum dono.Kaise,yeh bacche Riya ke chehre pe muskaan le aati hai.Riya ki yeh tooti hui halat mujhse kya,iss Orphanage ke kisi bhi insaan se dekha nahi jata.Aaj sab bohut khush honge,khaas kar,Mr.and Mrs.Kapoor,Riya aur Ayesha ke parents,who left them for another world,forever.Ayesha Riya ki mentor hai.ETF mein hai,as an ACP.Sirf,ek main aur Ayesha hai,jiski kahi hui baat maanti hai Riya.Baaki sabse nafraat karti hai,behat nafraat,'' Mother Rosemary said to Adhbhay and Akriti,Senior Officers' of Mumbai Crime Branch.

''Mother,aapko kya lagta hai,ki,Riya Ma'am manjayegi,agar hum dono unhe persuade kare to help us in this case?Ya,yu kahiye,ki,hum dono aur puri Mumbai Crime Branch Unit chahti hai,ki,Riya Ma'am jaisi acchi officer Mumbai Crime Branch join kare as Deputy Comissioner of Police,Mumbai Crime Branch?'', Akriti asked Mother Rosemary.

''I dont know,Beta.Yeh sab Riya pe depend karta hai.Jo bhi decision legi Riya,that would be final.Agar samjhlo ki woh join karbhi legi Mumbai Crime Branch,as the DCP,par,woh karvi yaadein bhula nahi payegi.Tum dono ko usse madad karni hogi,yeh yaadein bhulwane mein.Usse support karoge na tum dono?'',Mother Rosemary asked both of them.

''Mother,Riya Ma'am humari mentor hai.Unki jaisi higly trained encounter specialist iss puri Police Department mein nahi hai.We would be really very proud,if she leads Mumbai Crime Branch.And yes,Mother,hum Riya Ma'am ka saath zarur denge.'' Adhbhay said,reassuring Mother Rosemary.

After this convo,the trio looked at Riya,who was playing with the children with a smile on her face.

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location: ETF Office.

Rathod was in a very angry mood.He was angry at himself and at everyone else,except Ayesha,because he knew,Ayesha was right from the beginning.

Rathod ordered to bring the culprit in the investigation room.

After a lot of hard work by Rathod and Chotu,the truth was out that,how Mrs.Mehta framed Riya with false charges of attempt to murder case on the sole eye-witness,who was the culprit.Chargesheets were filed and the court sentenced Mrs.Mehta to Lifetime Imprisonment.

Rathod and the whole team were shocked after knowing the truth.They thought about how they treated Riya,as a criminal.They have really hurt Riya from the core.They have broken Riya's self-confidence.

''Ab pata chala sach.Sab log,even,aap Sameer,ki,meri Riyu galat hai,ek mujrim hai.Tumne bhi yahi kaha ha na,Arjun,ki,Riya ek gunehgaar hai.Riya ke khilaaf toh tumne court mein gawahi di thhi.Shree aur Chotu,tumne toh Riya ki dosti ka insult kiya.Chhii... Sharam aati hai... Mujhe aur mere honewale bacche ko bachane keliye Riya ne yeh inzaam apne sar le liya thha.Par,mujhe pata thha ki meri Riyu nirdosh hai.Isiliye,main teen mahine tak undercover mission pe gayi thhi,to find proofs which will prove that Riya is innocent,and,aaj wohi hua.Asli gunehgaar jail ki salakho ki peeche hai.Shayad,Riya Sameer ko maaf karbhi dein,ek saali hone ke naate,par,tum sabko woh jeete ji maaf nahi karegi...''

Saying this,Ayesha stormed out of the ETF conference room and went to the Orphanage to meet Riya.

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location: St.Ana's Orphanage.

Riya became tired after playing with the kids.

''Chalo baccho,main bohut thak gayi hu.Phir khelenge,'' a tired Riya said to the kids.

The kids' listened to their Didi's words and left her.Before the kids' left,they engulfed Riya in a big bear hug,which was equally responded by Riya.Riya ruffled their heads',gifted them chocolates and bid them Goodbye.

As Riya was going towards her room,a person told that Mother Rosemary was calling her to her office.Riya nodded and went to Mother Rosemary's office.

Riya knocked the office door and stepped inside.As she stepped inside,she saw a girl and a boy,having a file in their hands'.

Mother Rosemary: Riya,yeh hai Mumbai Crime Branch ki officers,Akriti aur Adhbhay.

Riya waved them a ''Hi'' and Akriti and Adhbhay saluted her.

Mother Rosemary: Riya,yeh dono tumse kuch baatein karna chahte hai.Tum baatein karo,main Church hoke aati hu.God Bless You,beta.Humesha khush rehna aur smile karti,jaise aaj ki tarah.

Riya(smiled): Sure,Mother.Anything for you,the kids' and for Ayeshu di.By the way,aaj Di nahi ayi?

''Riyu ne bulaya aur uski Di hazir hai,'' a smiling Ayesha said,while she entered the office of Mother Rosemary.

''Diii...'' Riya ran upto her and hugged her tight.

''Guys,this is ACP Ayesha Rathod from ETF... I hope you know her,'' Riya asked Adhbhay and Akriti.

''Yes,Ma'am.Hum Ayesha Ma'am ko jaante hai''.

Edited by zebbie0504 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#19

Mind blowing update dr...!!!

Convo btwn mother Rosemary n the other two officerswas beautifully written...!!!

Yayyy finally thy caught the culprit coz of Aisha... N made her confessed her crime...

Yipiieee Riya proved innocent...

OMG Riya took the blame on her so as to save his sis n her unborn baby... Feel bad for her...

Awww Riya smiled coz of those sweet kids...That's good...

Precap looks damn interesting...

Thanks for pmdr.

Continue soon.

Edited by Aks13 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#20
luvly character sketch,prolouge n chap 1 zebs!!!!! Lovd itz!! Meri Riya a criminal???? What???????? Nahin aisa ho hi nhi saktaa! What Arjun gve gavahi agnst her...!!!!!! Arjun!!!!! Grrr!!! 😡 why did u do that????????!!!!! Eagerly waiting! Plss zebs continuee soon n dun forget to pm me... Samjhey Ya Samjhaun???? :)

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