Short OS: Walk alone

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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey all...
i know i am posting stories everyday...
cant help it though!!!
i was in college and bored of listening to boring lecture.(nothing new!!😆😉) being last bencher i am😛, i opened a page and took pen and randomly started writing, half paying attention to it...(cant leave lecture also...!!! mam pops q's in air at anyone!!!😉)
i took pen off the paper, saw it was just 10 min i started writing😕. i read it once and saw it had many similarities with Arjun, his pain. so i am now home and typed it, just making a minor changes.
hope you like it!!!!
i ll send pm later... working on another story also😛

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The thick darkness weaved through the trees is making it difficult to even imagine what lay beyond next few steps. I walk through this darkness, no where to go, hoping to find a savior, who could pull me towards light. I can hear the agonized screams of my beloved, I'm helpless. I need to walk ahead, to seek solace. My heart aches, my soul burns when her pretty face, twisted in pain staring at me comes to my mind. Terror filled in those doe eyes rip my soul apart. My heart cries, but I can do nothing, nothing at all other than walking through abyss of loneliness, self loath and pain. I have no companion, for I have been away from this world all this time. I pushed all of them aside in my despair. I'm now all alone in this world. I am on a hunt, hunt of an invisible shadow, hunting which, may stop bleeding of my heart.

There must be someone who can show me how to live, how to smile for I have no remembrance of those. There must be someone who can guide me out, help me towards life. But I still wait... still wait for that person to come.

Till then, I walk in darkness... Alone!!!!


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too short ehh!!! cant name it a drabble also as it exceeds 100 words limit!!!

kaisa laga? hit like and do comment!!!


regards

pari😳

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princess_pari thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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thank you😳😳
princess_pari thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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thank you!!😃😳😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#4
Awesome os dear.
Just love it
sharmaayushi thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#5
Great work dear
Thnx for pm and update
nice thought
continue os like this
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Posted: 12 years ago
#6
Short and sweet..
Its Adorable..
College Lecture...
yeaaa boring:)
mam ka lecture v sunkar yeh story likha..
aap sach mai brilliant ho:d
Brilliant update..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awsum Os! Lovd it Pari...Luv d way u potrayed Arjun's Pain..!!! Hatss Off! Thanxx 4 d pm..!!! 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thanks for the PM
Amazing OS dear 😊
Loved it and the way you described the pain
Keep writing like this 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#9
Short yes but incredible one!!!
It was treat to read seriously!!!

Yar tu last bench mein bait ke maaze karti hai aur hume bhi aache aach stries deti hai pane ke liye...!!!

Tere lecs ko thank u bolna toh bantha hai!

for u simply great loved it!👏👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
#10
Clg ka side effect 🤣
Awesumwa pari
lov it
beautifuly writen
heart touching
apt title..

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