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Posted: 12 years ago
hey...
we had decided to quit it as we were disappointed...
disappointed was understatement...
well, since many want us to continue i ll post the rest parts...😃😃😃
starting from part 4 today.😃
hope we wont be disappointed again...

i was not well, and am still nt completely well...
you may find why i am telling you again and again...
its cos its the amount of pain i took to execute, amt of pain didu took to shape the plot...
we were upset and what not due to lack of response...
well, we r back here...
happy reading...

i l not pressurize you to like and comment.. its up to you...
a word from u will encourage us...😳😃
pms will be sent as usual...

oh!!! i heard link i sent din work??? is it true???
if u find any such kinda prob, lemme kno... i ll fix that...😊😊
happy reading again 😉😉

~pari and payal😳😳😳
PS: Res karoge, to unres karna naa bhulna!!!!!!😉😆



PS: we are not betraying our readers.😡 if you feel that we are NO BETTER than IGNORANT READERS, screw it.😡
if we were really, we would not be here.
and mind you, we r not continuing cos of your words.
so think before you say something to anyone, cos it can hurt someone very bad.
and we dont care what u consider us. so no bother...
you very well know who i am talking to...😡😡😡
Edited by princess_pari - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
part 4 here...
not proof read.
hope you like it...

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She was roughly pulled out from her place.

Her eyes flew open only to face a maddened Pranav. His brows, furrowed, eyes red and his form shaking due to uncontrolled rage.

Payal gasped in shock.

He knew... he knew about her. She saw his line of gaze and it settled on the mail she just sent. He pushed her roughly on floor and turned his attention on the email.

His hands shook as he took the contents in that.

He could not believe what he saw in it. It was detailed account of all his illegal activities.

He furiously turned towards her and grabbed her by her hair.

"aaahahhh!!!!!" she screamed in pain.

"how dare you little thing?!( he pulled her close, twisting her hair) tumhari himmat kaise hui mere saath ye sab karne ki..!!!!"

Payal was numb due to the excruciating pain in her scalp.

He continued his rant

"mere saath dhoka? Pranav Rai ke saath?! Aaj tak kisi ki itni himmat nahin hui ki mere saath dhoka kare aur tum?!!!!"

He left her hair and slapped her hard on her cheek.

His ring in the finger cut her cheek making blood ooze. But that brought payal out of her shock.

She spun around and faced him, her cheek red with marks

"haan mr. pranav rai.. I dare. Because you are not worth to be called as human being."

Another slap resonated the room. She landed near the laptop. She saw him in the corner of her eye and rested her hand on the keyboard, activating the cam and recording. She slowly rose on her feet and pranav jerked ahead to hold her.

Payal easily dodged from his move and shoved a hand at his solar plexus.

She would not give in to him so easily.

It took moments for pranav to recollect himself. Her saree was not letting payal to move freely and execute her plan to bring him down. She tried to run to kitchen but pranav pulled her back. he enclosed her neck in his vice grip and pushed her to the pillar. Payal gasped for breath and tried to escape from his grip. She trashed her hands and legs wildly to harm him. but all her efforts went in vain. He was much stronger than her in every way.

"kyun kar rahi thi tum ye sab ha?" he pressed her much more. He pressed himself against her, putting all weight on her, crushing her beneath him.

Tears of pain flew out of her eyes.

"you are not worth...living pranav... or should i...say sik...an...der"

"oh you know?!" he asked in a cold voice, dangerously below his usual tone, separating himself from her. he turned, turning his back to her.

Payal took the opportunity and lifted the vase next to her. She threw it on him, but due to her trembling frame it just hit his shoulder. Payal ran to the kitchen and stumbled on few things and searched for knife. She was about to leave when she spotted something that made her grin amidst her intense pain in her face.

She turned only to see pranav in front of her.

She pointed knife at him and said

"aage matt aana pranav... I wont hesitate..."

"why honey... maine kya bigaada hai tumhara...?"

"you killed my friend, my bhabhi right in front of me you cheap. You took my brother's love..." she screamed and threw a utensil at him.

"tum thi wahan?!" he asked impressed while dodging the utensil.

She threw belan at him and made it towards sink. She saw pipe attached to a tap and water purifier.

She pulled it and aimed it at pranav. Water spilled on his face making him blind for few moments. She toppled atta on him and made mad dash to the hall and tried to open door. But it was locked. She saw pranav wiping his face, trying to remove atta , coming towards her and she screamed seeing that they both were in the view of camera.

"kyon maara tumne Roshni ko? I loved you pranav but you betrayed me... kyon???"

"she stumbled on the fact that I am sikander honey... so she had to go. Haan agar wo meri baat maan leti to... par nahin... honest officer ki biwi thi naa wo... to mujhe maarna pada usse..." still clearing his face.

"didn't your conscience chide you?"

"naa... but you are going to regret trying to double cross me payal... you will really do..."

He took menacing steps towards her and payal took steps back. she turned around when she felt wall behind her. she desperately tried to search for something with which she could make him go numb. But she found nothing of that sort. Sweat broke from side of her temple. Her eyes went tizzy due to the pain in her face. She knew it would not be long before she would go all blank. But she was determined to get him confessed.

She spoke in trembling voice.

"kyon pranav, kyun tumne mujhe dhoka diya? Paagalon ki tarah pyaar karti thi. Maine apna job chod diya tha, just because I wanted to be with you. "

"kaun sa job??!??!! o yeah!!! i remember now!!!! well, maan na padega tumhe payal. Mere naak ke neeche tumne mere khilaaf kitne saare saboot ikhatta kiya hai.. I am really impressed. Infact tumhe mere saath hona chahiye tha.. sorry to say you chose wrong side..." he make clicking sound with his tongue and gazed her.

"me and with you?" payal let out a humorless laugh.

"I would rather choose die than siding a scum like you" she earned a slap at this retort.

"women... women like you don't know the value of life payal... you are beautiful, smart, witty and let me add, cunning... I ll spare you.. be by me..."

"never in my life sikander. Never. I ll embrace death but not you..."

"oh is that why you married me? You spent those moments of privacy with me?!" he asked in a mocking voice.

Bile rose to her throat.

"those were the worst days of my life, believe me. I would never forgive myself for being in relation with you."


~~~~ hope you like it😊

Edited by princess_pari - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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yiepee yiepee! Me first! My above post still unedited! So technically me first🤣

@pink-
thank u soo much for continuing this brillant piece 🤗

@ brown-
it isn't a tht big problem at all!

@red-

no comments! U seems loving this red colour more! 👍🏼

now comment 😆

it was more thrilling as comparing to the last part! And painful as well
well i would like to appriciate for choosing KVB for the cast of pranav!
He is the perfect one for this!
😉

apart from this, i loved the concept, that there is no sikander in the real and pranav is the one who faked!
It did have a little similarity wit the show as sameer said, sikander is just is fake person! And ireally liked the way this part used here!

And for payal, bravo
😊 !
Very brave! Her act completey surprised me! And the way she used her sense of mind as she started the webcam and then the spirit in her to fight back ! Not to protect herself but , to gather the whole thing , and made pranav confess his crime!

She was awesome !
Loved this completey!

Would love to read further and also would love to see wht arjun will do and how will he react!

Once again thank you for continuing!

Love you angel ❤️
Edited by Vampire-queen - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
omg now what next?? M numb.. Thanks for pms..
Edited by unishaz - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
😭😭ok this comment is to apologize to both the writers. em really really sorry for hurting your feeling😲... I am not a writer so I don't know how it feels to discontinue ur own work but em a reader n i read "dua" in one go n i was so mesmerized with ur work that I set the high expectation for this FF. n when u said that u won't continue because u didn't get much like it was heart breaking for me...so I know I crossed my limits in rage but I swear i didn't intend to hurt you both. SORRY SORRY SORRY for hurting your feelings😭😭
I AM TRULY SORRY
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Posted: 12 years ago
WOW!!
Updated..
Just saw it..
Didu..thankyou so much for continuing it..
I'm really happy.. Coming to the update..
Poor Payal.
Pranav saw the mail and now torturing her.
Cam is on..and seems like Arjun is on the way too..
Hope he comes there in time and saves her from that devil.
It was another brilliant update..
Loved it:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
thanks dear for continuing this
awesome update
cont soon
thanks for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow 👏
loved all the 4 parts 👍🏼
please continue 😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG! This Pranav is sch a dog!!! God pls Pls Arjun aa jaye bfore he cud do more!! Bt Payal's way to make him confess is Superrbb! Awesomee Work Payaliyu n Pari...Thank God u decided to continuee...Thanxx fr d pm!! Continuee Soon! :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice story ...👏... didnt PM me 😕... plzz PM me next time 👍🏼

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