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IlaTanwar

@IlaTanwar

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#71

Yaar tum update kab krti ho pta hi nhi chlta mr india se training li hai kya... Pm kar diya karo apne works...

Now about story...

Its a lovely story love it till now...

Awsome... Evry moment ... Terrace scene the proposal... Evrything was awsome

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rocking_gal

@rocking_gal

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#72

well this is becoming my fav one...

pata hai Maine bahut parts miss kiye but thanks to index at start read all of them and fell in more lve with it...

awesome one...

the innocence,light hearted comedy,frndship,romance...

hayeee aapke stry Mein rmance ka kya kehna lovely...

first start they way she gives him bio...he coming to see her in corridor,he calling her puppy,everything lovely...

last one Mein lastly they confess...

young but still mature one heheh...

loved the way riya asked Arjun to be with her always nt leave her go in front...nice one...

waiting for nxt one...:)

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Poonam..../Piya

@ll_piya_ll

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#73

Manuuu *puppy *ka update kab milega..

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shruti

@shrutisweety

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#74

wounderful update
finially arjun ne propose kar diya riya ko
and he says every thing to her ...
their conversation was cute 😳
and sam and aisha was also sweet
sneak peek was funny

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MANALI MANKEEKAR

@MRD1692020

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#75

"Sammy "

"Ha..."

"Mujhe hamare bacche bhi gore chahyie... ekdum tumhari tarah... "

" Aur " he calmly ask her,, now he used to these type of talkings..

"Ammm jane do baki ka bade hone ke baad soch lungi..." she says & runs towards one big rock...

"Ayu... sambhal ke... Auy... " he yells worridly when he sees she try climb on big rock bt she fails . but finally she climbe & start to give flying kisses towards trees & sky...

Sameer just rub her forehead...

Ayesha keep her hands on her hips & close her eyes & take a long breath...

And then ope her eyes...

"Hey... I Love U... i love u Mr Rathod... muhaaahaaa..." she yellls out of her lungs ..

And Sameer starts to look here & there...

Suddenely Ayesha rembers something & smile to herself...

"Ae Gaav vaaalo,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, gaaav vaalo... "

Sameer look at her & holds his head in irritation.

"Sam... Suciiideee" She yellls & throw herself from Rock... He iimeadtly hug catch her...

She smile at him...

Ayesha is landed in his hands & now she lock in his hands safely.

"Ab Gabbar ki..." she says happily... "

He seat on rock with her , she is on his lap now...

"No its time for Romance... " and pulls her for kiss.

She hold him tightly & lock his neck with her hands.. while he hold her so she can not fall.. after kissing she just rest her head on his chest & start to playing with his shirt...

He just caressing her hair...

"Chale vapis?? " he ask her

"Ammm na..."

"Sam .. i m scared..."

"Kya baat hai ,,, kisine kuch kaha? or anything wrong???"

"Sam hamari shadi to hogi na... i luv u so much... mai bina kuch soch samaz kuch bhi bolti hue ,,, apna sab kuch de chuki hue tumhe... tum chod to nhi doge na mujhe???? janti hue ki mai itni badi bhi nahi per mai sab samaz sakti hue... i love u beyond limits... tum ache ho na isiliye tumne kabhi mera faayda nhi uthya... ( dn't wry guys unke bich kuch galat nhi hua.. 😉 ) per tum mujhse hi shadi karna... agar tumhari Maa nhi mani na... to phir hum bhag jaayenge ya phir na hum aise kare ki hum shadi kar le... nhi per mai to choti hue na..." she says & lowers her gaze...

"Pehele ya bata do ki itne se brain ye saari soch aati kaha se hai... hmmm.. kyu dar rahi ho? mai tum se hi shadi karnga... aur ha is shadi ke liye hamare ghar walo ko raji bhi karunga.. aur ha bhag ne ki koi jarurat nhi... pata lunga hamare parents ko... nhi mane to utha ke le jaaunga tumhe... " he says while caressing her cheecks..

She again rest her head on his chest...

" Par ek shart hai meri... " he says..

" kya?"

" Tum weight gain nhi karogi " 😆

"Sam u ... i m nt fat... " she says & hit him...

" Aur ha Sam jab tum Police ki Naukri join karoge na tab dusre din hi hum shadi karnge..." she declares..

"Kyu?"

" Maine Net pe search kiya hai badi post milne mai bada time lagta hai , aur mai buddhi hokar tumhe shadi nhi karna chahti... "

He just look at her helplessly..

Precap :

Return time...

Arjun drive car.. Ayesha sleep on Sam's shoulder.. alll are in sleep.. only Riya there still awake for Arjun...

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Poonam..../Piya

@ll_piya_ll

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#76

Lvly update manu...
aisha n sam scence is realy nice...
uff how much insecurity in. her small heart..
poor girl..
lv the way sam try to understand her..
update soon