New Ariya Os : First Love. updte pg 57 NOV 17 PM LATE - Page 7

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Posted: 12 years ago
#61
awsm update

bt hey mannu...whn d u update yarr...kuch pata hi nahi chalta hai...

nw continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#62
Sweet update dr.

Loved Riya n Aisha's convo n beginning of their frndshp.

Cant wait to read more.

Continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#63
" Dekha , mai kitni smart hue..." Ayesha says enwinteing her fingers with Sameer while walking..
" Hmmm"
" Kya hmmm????? kuch to aur bola na..."
" Ayesha"
" Mujhe mera naam pata nhi..." she furisously inform him..
and turn onther side..
Sameer goes to her & pull her towards himself, she hit against him..
" Par kya tumhe pata hai , ki jab tum ghussa hoti na , to tum bahut achi dikhti ho , escpcially ur eyes... and ur nose... "
" Aur..." Ayesha ask him in low tone , she lost in his eyes...
" Par yaar tum baka bak bahut karti ho..." Sameer complaint her.. but Ayesha lost in him..
" Aur" she again ask...
He smile & lean to give a quick kiss on her cheecks.. Ayesha's trance brok & she immeadtly hide herself in his arms..
Ariya
Ariya walking keeping distance between them... Arjun lock his hands in his pant's pocket , while Riya wore jacket & lock her hands in jacket's pockets..
Arjun look at her , same time she also look at him , both smiles.. & again start to walk.. Riya is bit tensed , she never come alone , without her parents.. and with him , she is fear iof he ask something for which she can't ready???? she likes being with him , but she scares if someone see them????
" Haat pakdu??? nahi nahi baat hi karta hue ... kya pata use acha lage ya nahi???? Stupid he is ur GF... GF???????????? when ???? Propose bhi nhi kiya ise???? but she says ys ?????? Pagal to tera kiss kaise accept karti????? but i have to ask her... " Arjun thinks
Arjun stop & close his eyes & takes deep breath..
Riya does not notice that he is stop there , so she continue thr walk..
Arjun looking at her back..
Arjun ruungily goes to her & come in front of her..
" R...iiiyaaa stop... i luv uuu"
Riya just looking at him , " is he just sy that he loves me????" she thinks..
" Ufff Arjun... kya proposal tha? " he nervously thinks..
Arjun again look at her & try to smile... Riya understands his situation..
" Arjun, koi ladki kisi ka intzaar kyu karti hai , tab jab vo use jyada janti bhi nahi???? jab vo hasta hai , baat karta hai , kyu us ladki ki dhadkan tez hoti hai????? kyu use acha lagta hai , jab vo use kabhi bhi aur kahi bhi mil jaata hai?????? kyu use acha lagta hai jab vo hamesha use per apna adhikar jamata hai... kyu use acha lagta hai , tab vo use kiss karnev ke liye uski permission maagta hai... aur vo ladki uske liye kyu apno se zhoot bolti hai????? "
Arjun try to sense what she wants sy , but when she starts to talk abt these things " Are ye to hamare bare mai baat kar rahi hai... " and he calmly listens all.
" Thx Riya..." Arjun says & hug her tightly..
" Ummm , tumhare liye sirf Puppy" she says..
" Arjun thx for coming into my life... "
" Thx Ri... ooo sry Puppy... mai nhi jaanta ki ye sab aage kaha tak jaayega , par mai hamesha tumhare saath hue , mai har pal koshish karunga ki kuch galat na ho..."
" Hmmm ..."
" Aur Puppy dekh , ab hame Couple hai , so u have to know , abt me.. I am only child to my parents ... and i am more amibitious person , practical one , and ys i want to join Police Force.. I am mre Mature than my age , bcoz Im alone child.. U know mere ghar mai sirf teen log hai , only Dada , me & Aai... so somtimes i have to look after my home.. i have responsibitilites on my shoulders.. aur ha ek baat aur , jitna cool mai dikhta hue , utna mai nahi hue , bada ghusse wala hue mai.. "
Riya listens alll .. She look at his face , when he is talikng.. he is calm & cold face , no expressions... only his black orbs have power to make her dance on thr tune..
Arjun turn & start to walk , she also follows him,, sudenely he turn & look at her..
" Aur ha use Shekhar Roy se jayda baat nhi karna... aur use Sonia se bhi nhi..."
"Per kyu??" Shekhar Roy... Papa ke dost ka beta hai & hum same age group mai bhi hai... "
"But i dn't like him... If u want to be with him & then this is our last meeting ever.. " he says & start to walk fastly..
Riya just look at him , feels that he goes away from her , and she does not like this fact , so she run upto him & hold his arm..
" Pe...rrr" she says She seat on knees.. Arjun immeadtly seat near her & give her water..
" Are u ok?"
She just nodded her head..
Arjun look here & there & pick her.. he placed her on Rock & pathes her back..
Riya touch by his gesture.. " Mai nhi jaaungi use baat karne... i promise... but vo aay to???" she ask him
" kon??"
" Vahi ... Shekhar Roy..."
" To thod sa baat karo , per be in ur limits... "
she nodded & suddenely hug him tightly..
he baffled..
" promise me ... tum kabhi nhi jaaoge mujhe chod kar... aur ise kabhi mujhe chod ke aage nhi jana ,,, mujhe dar lagta hai..." she says in emotional voice...
" Aage se aisa kabhi nhi hoga... and ha im always with u .. till my last breath..." " Sry , Puppy"
" Thts better.."
Sneak Peak:
" Ae Gaon walo..." she says stading on Rock..
and he hold his head ... in irritation.
" Sam... sucideee" and he catch her , she smile & kiss his cheeck...
" Ab Gabbar ki... "
" No way.. its time to Romance.. " he says & catch her lips...
" Sammy " she says in serious tone..
" Ya?"
" Tumne Police Force join karli uske 2nd day hi hum shadi karnge"
" What??/"
" Ha,, maine Net pe search kiya hai... ki Badi Post milne mai saari umr nakial jaati hai , aur mujhe tumse buddhi hoke shadi nhi karni..."
he just look at her helplessly..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#64
Manu di,it was really superb and beautiful.
Loved it a lot,especially,Ariya moments.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#65
Awesom
Ariya segment emotional and hrt touchy
Arjun ki warning awww

Sasha segment also brilliant

Update soon

Thanx 4 updating
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Posted: 12 years ago
#66
superb awesome update..


ariya convo so sweet and mature.


arjun confessed and his way was just out of the way..


sneak peak so funny..


waiting for the update
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Posted: 12 years ago
#67
Awesome update di.
Love ariya segment.
Love the way arjun way propose riya.
Ariya talk was awesome.
Continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#68
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ohh so cute update manuuu
thank u for the update...lv u
he he he ..
lv sasha n ariya moments...
cant controled my blush..
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riya is so innocent ...
she realy lv arjun...
n arjun say her to stay away from her frs...
he he the way she answer lvd it...
To dono bade hoker police force joine kerna chahate hai..
.
ohh to mis aishs..budi hoker sam se shadi nahi kerna chahatiii he he..
update soon,cant wait to read more
Edited by ll_piya_ll - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#69
Fantastic update dr.

Ariya n Samsaha moments were sweet n cute.

Continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#70
Awwssmm part
Ariya moments was supperbb
plzzz cont sooon

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