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AnjuRish thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#31
cute girl ...whos she break the suspense na
Annarichard thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32
mishtiii <3 aaj maine mobile chori se le hi liye :D nd guess wat tmne ye story update ki vi thi :D so finally i read it :D
amzaing tha ye waala part tau bus!
haha 40 rs ka karza.?!! tht was the hilarious part :D
enjoyed it thoroughly :D
keep up the good work!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
hehe nice... sweet girl...
hope it's riya
cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34
hey pari.
Awesume update.
Cute nd innocent girl.
As u r ariya fan. I guss its riya right.
Waiting 4 nex t part. Update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35
I am sorry 4 late update tht os Thanx all comment and liking




Part 2b

Arjun gave her address

Girl : ok Mai 6 vajay aa jaogi

Arjun:ok

She cut tha call

Arjun in MV : kya pagal ladki hai 40 rs k lea yaha ayegi kya zamana hai
See the room condition

Arjun: kam per lagja kya sochege tumaray baray Mai ki jangle Mai rehta ho

Arjun clean his bedroom as well as hall

Arjun: kya yr Aaj cleaning krni padh rhe hai usk lea jisko Mai janta bhi nahi yaha tak uska nam tak malum nahi per phir bhi pata nahi q uski tarf Khicha chala jata ho

Arjun' thought ki train break lagta jab doorbell Bajti hai

Arjun : I think vo aa gae

Arjun door ki taraf janay lagta hai tabhi ruk kr mirror dekhta hai

Arjun: ha... Mai thik lag rha ho

Arjun open the door and saw tht girl wear track suit tht color is pink she look like angel who come 4m heaven 4 him

Arjun in MV : yr yeh ladki nahi angel hai Jo meray lea aye hai

Girl: hello mr.arjun rawte

Arjun : hello miss

Girl : kaisai ho ( tumko dekh. Ker vo thik kaisai ho sakta hai)

Arjun lost in her beauty and her voice

Girl: aap thik ho na

Arjun came back 4m his thought : hmmm.thik ho aap Itni jaldi jaldi yaha...

Girl: ha mainai socha karza jaldi uter jay to asha hai

Girl gave the money to him

Girl : Thanx 4 help

Arjun: most welcome miss

Girl: kya miss lagaya hai aap mera name le saktay ho Mai aapsai bhadi nahi ho choti ho

Arjun : sorry vo mujhay aapka nam nahi pata tha to

She cut his sentence

She offer her hand 4 shake

Girl: ok my name Riya. Riya mukherjee all frnds call me ri

Arjun shake his hand with her

Arjun: nice name

Riya: thank u,Mai chalti ho

Arjun: Aisa kaisai

Riya : matlab??

Arjun I mean Kush to leajea chai coffe( Arjun 4get usk pass milk hai nahi)

Riya: Mai jogging k lea jaa rhe ho aap bhi. Chalea na

(it is not request it is order type but Aisa order jis Mai apnaypan ka ehsas ho Arjun na nahi ker pata )

Riya and Arjun both went 4 jogging

Riya waha ik tea stall k pass rukti hai

Riya : Arjun, rukea

Arjun: kya hua aab

Riya : Mai yaha morning mai chai Yahe sai letti ho aap bhi join ker saktay hai

Arjun agree ( her bar agree krta hai so swttt my Shona )

B/w taking tea they talk

Arjun: Tum yaha kaha rhti ho

Riya : vo Mai pg Mai rhti ho

Arjun : parents kaha hai?

Parents ki baat sun ker Riya thodi c gloomy ho jaati hai

Arjun sence something Arjun change the topic

After thy went to their respective place

Arjun Riya milatay rhay pata nahi kab usko ik dusray sai pyar ho Gaya dono bina baat kea reh nahi saktay thay Kabhi Riya Arjun k gher chali jaati Kabhi Arjun usk

One day Riya dont pick the phone Arjun very worried 4 her
Kafi try kiya bt Riya dont pick Arjun k brain kae Kyal anay lagay he imdately call some 1

Arjun: hello shree

Shree : yes sir

Arjun : ik no send ker rha ho usko trace karo or location Batao abhi is Wakt

Arjun gave the no to shree and shree tell the location tht is near lake

Arjun fastly go there

He saw Riya sat there and Arjun go near her

Arjun: Riya

Riya hug him and start crying

Arjun : wht happend Riya

Riya in sobbing tone : vo Arjun Mai chahti ho ik Sach Batao ki Mai anurag mukherjee ki beti ho

Arjun : ok then why u crying

Riya : he is grt businessman bt he did not gud father he has no time 4 me he don't ask me tht hw I am? My mom went to god when i was 10yr nobody is there who love me Arjun kya Itni buri ho ki mujhay koe pyar nahi krta

Arjun : no Riya u r swt and gud person in the whole world then rhe baat pyar ki to Mai tumay Kush kehna chahta ho ki ... I love u so much can u marry with me

Riya see his eyes and see the concern and love 4 herself Jo vo Apnay dad ki eyes Mai dhunti THI

Riya hug him tightly and said : i love u 23456789 Arjun

Arjun kiss her cheeks tht sure he love her by bottom ,upper and right and left 4m his hrt

Arjun: vaisai mujhay Tum Aamlate bna ker khalvaogi naa?

Riya : haa Jarur bus ik shart per paisai bhi denay padhegay

They remember their 1st meeting


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Thanx guys 4 cmmnt and likes and love u all

Sorry 4 any mistakes and errors

Thanx 4 bearing me and reading tht os I want tell u

1 thing yeh update mainai dil sai nahi likha sorry dr frnds I hope u excuse me choti c mish ho na














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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
awww such an awsum nd an emotional ending :D
senti hogae main tau :p
anyways loved loved nd absolutely loved the whole story!
i thoroughly enjoyed while reading it!
a job well done mishti 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37

Awesome Mishti

Now why wouldn't I read u r work.
It's awesome
U should write more
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
wow...
Acha nahi bht acha update tha
it was awesome, fab, amzing..
Lovd it..
Smaal nd cute love story of ariya..
Nd aww.. Omelete brings dem tgthr :p
nd da last line bye arjun nd riya was so sweet...
Great job :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
wah mishti wahh dil khush diya...


ek toh itna sweet update dekar and dusra ariya ka update diya...



love u mishti.23456789...


for u👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
#40
kash i could like more than once...


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