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Posted: 12 years ago
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P a r t t w o



Yes the man is none other than Sameer or Sam , his best friend forever.

He have noticed the changed behaviour in him, he have noticed him lost sometimes..somewhere.. Silently curving his lips.. He have seen the slight smile plastered on his face and he have seen the sparkle in his eyes!

And when he saw his glowing face that day he get to know that arjun actually want riya in his life.

5 days ago

After meeting with the doctor he returned back to ETF office and as expected sameer was there!

Waiting for him , as a typical college going teen for listening the lovestory of his best friend!

Arjun entered inside his cabin and Sam put down the file , which he was reading! Arjun took the front seat of his desk and Sam looked at him!!

Sam- SO!! Now what???
He couldn't hold himself more as he too wanted to know, what is the thing that is making him flutter like a free butterly!!

Arjun- look at this!!
He said, as he passed the file of geeta Sharma case! Sameer went through the file and raised his brow. And arjun replied, " it is possible Sam, now she also could see"!!

Sam- par kaise?
Arjun- Jab main Geeta ki file study kar raha tha toh mujhe ye mila, he pointed out a particular paper and sam took out that from the file.

Then Arjun continued, - As you know Geeta ko aisa lagta tha ki koi uski jaan lena chahta hai..hume laga ki wo dari hui thi..aur jada ghabrayi hui thi par sayad aisa tha hi nahi kuch!

Geeta ko pura yakeen tha ki wo marne wali hai..aur kaise ye bhi!
Par uski social status kafi achhi hai, aur wo kuch NGOs bhi chalati.. Sayad issiliye usne Apollo Eye Care center se apni eye donation ki baat ki hogi..

Jab maine confirm kiya hospital se, unhone kaha ki geeta yahi chahati hai !

Phir uske baad maine appointment fix kiya and riya ke bare mai baat kiya!! And doctor ne kaha ki eye transplant ho sakta hai!! Par iske liye patient ka razi hona bhi zaroori hai! Par operation mai koi complication nahi hai!!

He uttered everything that sameer wanted to know ! He too is happy for him, and now there is really a hope that, she would enter in his life.

He asked him confusingly, " par kya wo mangei.."??

By hearing this, his face color changed and left with no expression! He just said, " Maine Ananyaa se baat ki hai ..lets see kya kehti hai wo"!!

Sameer- kamse kam iss baar toh baat kar leta usse! Aur kab tak sirf usse dekhete he apne dil ko tasalli dega!!

Arjun- sayad tab tak jab tak wo khud mujhse baat nahi kar leti!!

Sam- pagalon tarah baat mat karo!! Agar wo nahi karegi toh!! Usse pata bhi hai tumhare bare main! Tumare yun roz usse jaa kar chup kar dekhna.. Phone pe sirf uske saason ki aahat sun na!
Uske khayalon mai dube rahna!! Kab tak?? Agar iss baar bhi usne tumhe thukraya toh!!

Arjun- nahi , sam wo janti hai.. Wo mujhe mehsoos kar sakti hai.. Mere hone ka ehsaas hai usse! Maine dekha hai uske chehere pe wo becheni .. Wo har pal jab main uske kareeb tha!
Wo muskaan, jo kahi kho jati thi mere wapas jane se!!

Sam- toh phir usne tumhe uss din reject kyun kiya??

Arjun- uska jawab toh usse abhi dena baki hai!!

Sam- haan 4-5 saal ke baad toh de hi degi!!

Arjun -haan!! And then he realized what he replied, " What?? 4..5 saal baad"!!
He asked sam while glaring at him!

Sam replied, " haan 4 5 saal toh aise hi nikal jayenge usse ghurte ghurte roz shaam ko kyun?!" and picked up the file, for saving himself from the pen which Arjun threw on him irritatedly!

But then Arjun thought, yess.. He is right..he needs to talk to her . It took 4 months when he realized that he loves her and he proposed her.. But got the initial heart break by her harsh reply that she don't loves him. But his heart always screamed that she loves him and she have to accept him! And he too wanted to know the reason of her rejecting him!!

Arjun- yess sam, i need to talk to her!!!


N O W


Arjun again started his roaming session around the corridor , while Sameer and Ananyaa looked at each other in disbelief!!

Ananyaa looked at the guy infront of him, and his childish behaviour made her face light up!

He is the same man who comes to her everytime for the girl who is inside the operation room!

She remembered the same day when that incident happened. And he came to her home! At that one day he wanted to know each and every damn thing about riya! But Ananyaa never trusted him at first sight and she directly ordered him to stay away from riya!


Edited by Vampire-queen - 12 years ago
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She also thought about the night , he came for her ! Same five days ago..

Arjun parked his SUV infront of her house and looked through the window at the beach site! Riya was sitting there very calmly and he too noticied her change in behaviour by his sudden apperance ! And he felt happy , that she could still feel him!

But he never walked towards her, just got down to the SuV and pressed the door bell, and Ananyaa opened the door!!

She was not surprised to see him here, she too have noticed him here many times staring at her younger sister but she never protested, when she herself confirmed that he truely and madly loves her.

She let him in and Arjun told her everything about the operation!

Arjun- Ananyaa, tumne kaha tha na! Ki wo dekh sakti hai..
Toh kya tumhe isse koi problem hai??

Ananyaa- kaise baat kar rahe ho Arjun.. Mujhe problem kaise hogi.. Behen hai meri..
Uss accident mai maine mom ,dad ko kho diya.. Aur riya ne apni aankhe!!
Usse iss chiz ke liye roz tadapte dekh rahi hun!

Usse manane ki chinta tum mat karo!! Wo maan jayegi!!

Arjun- okay Ananyaa! Jo bhi ho mujhe bata dena plz!

After talking to her arjun left and ananyaa walked up to riya for talking with her!

Ananyaa always wanted someone who will love riya, who will take care of her, who will never leave her.. And she found the perfect man for her sister riya! Arjun..yess he is the man!

But still she couldn't do anything.. Riya would never confess that she too loves him and she would never accept him in her life!

She talked many times with riya that she should meet him and talk to him but riya was so stubborn!
Ananyaa thought someday she would realize that he is not doing it for any guilt or for any sympathy..


Present time-


The OT light got shut and the doctor comes out of the OT!
Arjun was the first one who rushed towards the doctor impacently and asked him about her! And he sighed in relief when the doctor announced that the operation is successful.
Arjun- kya hum usse mil sakte hain??
Doctor- jee haan, par unhe personal ward mai shift karne ke baad!

Arjun- okay doctor!!!

He looked throught small watching hole and she was inside lying on the bed and a white band on her eyes!


Later on she was shifted to the personal ward and now they can meet her!

Ananyaa entered in her room and she assured riya that she is here with her!! She sat there sometime and later on asked her to rest for sometime.

After that ananyaa asked Arjun to go inside and meet her! But he refused and only peeped inside to only capture a sweet view of her, and also got the satisfaction of her being well!
So without wasting anytime he rushed out to bought some medicine for her!


3 hours later-


Ananyaa comes outside her room while arjun was heading towards the room!

Arjun asked ananyaa to go back home and he will take care of her! As she was sleeping , she couldn't sense his presence she arjun sent ananyaa to home and he made himself comfortable there beside her !! Where she was peacefully sleeping! He could very easly spent the whole night only staring at her!

But some harsh memories too covered his brain and he remembered the day when she rejected him!

It took only two month for him to know her, entirely.. Every weekend evening with her presense...
Ananyaa told everything about her!

One day he tried to alk to her... And he too wanted to express his feelings to her! She had talked to him last time when arjun again came to her to say sorry and she aeccepted his apology!

And she also accepted him as her friend when he forced her for becoming his friend! At first sight she liked him..just liked him..it she have never the feeling of hate nor she have any feelings for falling for him!!

One day she was sitting at the beach side as usual, and she felt him coming towards her! The change in air sensation and the fragrance of his cologen is enough for her recognise him.

He silently sat there just beside her!
And she questioned, " kuch puchna hai kya arjun.. Aaj bade shant lag rahe ho!"

arjyn didn't answer and just took her hand in his.. And wrote something on the wet sand! And when she instantly threw away his hand when she got to know what he have written!

" what was that Arjun!!- she asked him with heavy breathe and he only answered, " Truth"!!

"No, just sympathy.. And guilt.." riya answered harshly!!

He was surprised at her treating back and she said.. "No arjun.. I have never loved you"!! She stood up and slowly traced the path to her home! And arjun helplessly looking at her back! He was broken..

He too stood up, and looked at the setting sun and also looked at the wet sand where it was written " I love you". And later on that wiped away by the heavy wave of the wild ocean!

Edited by Vampire-queen - 12 years ago
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He kept aside those feelings and the hurt he felt!

But he have a hope now.. Everything will be fine..
But only if she wants..

Again a he have a feeling, what if she will reject him again! No can't afford this rejection this time!

But his face lightened up when he exactly remembered the day he proposed her!! Yess he only have expressed his own feelings.. He have never asked about her feelings.. But she replied when that reply was not needed..

That was as she herself don't want to accept that she too loves him.. And before her heart could reply she shut every way by her own self..

Arjun smiled and said, next time your heart will speak.. Not you miss riya mukharjee!!!

And he dozed off.


But the other person woke up! It was the same time when he used to call her and never spoke any word!!

She then realized she is not in her home and she is in hospital..

And suddenly the same intoxicating sensation she felt in the some corner of that room.. She is at peace... Atleast there is something that could made her feel like normal...

The same soothing, refreshing feeling...

The known feeling..

The heart rate increasing feeling..

It was his feeling..
Yeah could she even forgot him..
How could she even forgot those days when she tried desperiately to search the wiped sand marks..
And later on writting herself on the wet sand again and again when wiped away by the waves..
That was also hurting her..
She never wanted this. . .


TBC. . .

Edited by Vampire-queen - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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** N o t e **


Uh note again 😛

Not the dhamkee wala note 😉😆

but yess Dhamki for someone special 😈

* If u are reading this
obviously you are..
Try some nuts..
And throw those horrible thoughts out😳
you never know what unpredictable i will do my bichadi behna 😡 *

oops sorry!! 😳


thank you very very very very much for the huge response to this concept
🤗 🤗🤗

i am very very happy..
As if some one gave me the authority of a whole blood bank..i am that much happy😃


And a special thanks to my KBB
leki🤗 for pointing out my mistake! And that truely proving that how perfectly you observed the chapter..
Thank you 😊

Readers please if you found anything wrong or weird plz pin-point that too..😃
so that i will improve myself! And will present something much much better 😳

thank you again for the likes and comments!!

❤️
Unpredictable vampy😉

Edited by Vampire-queen - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#85
hey vampu dear
thnx 4 such a fantastic update and pm
so sam noticied his friends feelings towards riya
sam is all eager to know everything...defination of a friend to akhir haq bata hai
sam' way of questiong arjun was awesome
so sam said arjun to talk to riya
loved arjun's dialouge"
nahi , sam wo janti hai.. Wo mujhe mehsoos kar sakti hai.. Mere hone ka ehsaas hai usse! Maine dekha hai uske chehere pe wo becheni .. Wo har pal jab main uske kareeb tha!
Wo muskaan, jo kahi kho jati thi mere wapas jane se!! "
that 4-5 saal dialouge was mindblowing dear
finally arjun also thought to saying his feelings to riya
the present part was amazing
arjun roaming in the corridor
finally annaya knows arjun loves riya deeply and truely
riya is safe and fine...loved to se that
finally arjun came inside the room when riya was sleeping
arjun expression his feeling by writing...wow awesome way to express
aww riya rejected arjun's proposal
felt bad 4 arjun
he is broken but knows that riya loves him
loved arjun' dialouge"
next time your heart will speak.. Not you miss riya mukharjee!!!"
finally riya wake up
riya sense arjun.great
continue soon dear
thnx once again
will be waiting eagerly 4 next update my mystry queen

Edited by sharmaayushi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#86
wow nice vampu
Arjun is very nice person
love it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Vampy my KBB🤗
Awesome update... Arjun Sam talk was nice... Loved the way Ananyaa felt abt Arjun and Sam's view abt this relation of Ariya...
Ariya have a diff bond altogether... So Riya rejected Arjun's proposal... it was defo coz of her insecurities... Lve the way how she identifies his presence even without a word spoken or him not approaching her... and Arjun too noticed it... well im waiting to sew what happens nxt update soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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It was awesome update
riya can sense arjun presence she loves him
arjun proposed her but she rejected
ariya relation is so special
loved it
waiting for next part
update soon

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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow.. again an amazing update..
lovd it...
it was great..
lovd it how riya could sense arjun presence near her..
cont soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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It was nyc
arjun was so desperate😉
while reading,i was jst imaging arjun being despo doing parade march infront of the OT 🤣
i loved it
it was awsm
update soon dear
Edited by Shivi1997 - 12 years ago

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