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BitterBerry

@BitterBerry

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: Amri174
Arrey, Vampy jii...delightful beginning. Aapka story baht hii interesting hai. Will come back for a detailed comment later😊

UNRES

Wow...kya concept hai! I AM LOVING IT!!!

So Riya is a blind girl and Arjun falls in love with her at first sight. Mast concept hai rey.

And I am so glad you covered the aspect of his guilt, and their first meeting was awesome!!!

Waiting for the next update...see you soon😉

thank u jii thank you!

I am glad that you liked the different aspect of the story 😃

yup love at first sight 😉

thanks for your review 😳

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BitterBerry

@BitterBerry

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: Leki
My Vampy wrote new story and im last one to know!!!
Superb start Vampy... As always different and true vampy style... i Loved it!!!!
So Riya is blind...Liked their 1st meeting... continue soon

aww leki 🤗
next time i will let u know first 😉
vampy and KBB style 😎yo
will continue defo! 😛

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BitterBerry

@BitterBerry

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#73

Originally posted by: ll_megha_ll
i want update vampu😡

haww daya karo di 😭

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Anu

@anu91

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#74

Awesome and different OS
Chooo sweet
Riya was blind...
After there first meeting Arjun changed tat was nice
Arjun asked sorry to her tat was cute
Arjun start to love Riya
Sam know about it
total update was excellent
Cont soon
thanks for PM dr
waiting for ur next cute update

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sharmaayushi

@sharmaayushi

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#75

hey vampu me also wanta a biggg update plzzz update plzzz with ariya parts plzzz

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Poonam..../Piya

@ll_piya_ll

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#76

Originally posted by: Vampire-queen

yup arjun ko pata nahi tha! And he said sorry too tht he genuinly felt 😳
thanks di 😃

Thank baad main...
first i m angery on u..
n second i wanna next part...
n ur other story...

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BitterBerry

@BitterBerry

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#77

Bhagoo!! Bachao ! Bachaoo!

Piya di i knw aap angry! Bt ma kya karu? Aapki story ki ek thread khatam hoke dushra suru ho gaya ! Phir bhi mai piche rah gayi!
N meri stories toh waise bhi cheenti jaise chalti hai!
Daya karo!

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ninii

@ninii

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#78

Wow fab concept
loved it
thnks for the pm continue soon

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DivineDarkness

@DivineDarkness

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#79

Originally posted by: Vampire-queen

galati se chut gaya!
Its his former frnd and chief sam/sameer!

There is no roshni here! And no past! So sam-jun are old frnds! 😳

See how observant ur readers are😉