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nakshatra92

@nakshatra92

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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

different concept... loved it...

arjun feeling guilty ...

riya identifying him even without his voice...

update soon

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Khushboo

@kaybee23

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

Wonderful story

Loved the intro of ACP Arjun

Arjun feeling soo guilty for shouting at Riya

Awww Arjun is in love with Riya

I'm guessing Riya is in the hospital getting surgery on her eyes?

Really hope that's the case and she gets her eye sight back! :)

Can't wait to read the next part

Continue soon! :)

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pinky gupta

@pinkerbell

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Posted: 12 years ago

#33

u have written a wonderful story.,

and yet very emotional..

i have read alot of your stories so bhulne ka toh sawal hi nahi uthta

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Poonam..../Piya

@ll_piya_ll

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Posted: 12 years ago

#34

Lvly os vampu...
ohh so riya is blind..n arjun didnt know anythink...
he felt guily when he know about her...
he goes to her house for saying sorry...
thats so sweet..
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Ohh he fell in lv with her...
operation is going on...
update soon cant wait to read more

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Payal Goel

@Payal_156

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Posted: 12 years ago

#35

vampu hugs
awesome wrk
really heart touching
beautifully written
grtly potray of emotions
ariya lovable
in btw i guess d thread is for index

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ishita

@IshitaRocks015

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Posted: 12 years ago

#36

ok...

i m cuming 2 d point...

i loved the concept...

bechari riya...!!

arjun yelled on her 4 no reason!!😭😭

it was beautifully written!!!

i mean..really nice,,,,!!

some1 in love..hopelessly...

beaaauuuttiiffuulll!!

update soon!!

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unisha

@unishaz

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Posted: 12 years ago

#37

wow nice os.. Thanks for pms vampu..

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Shweta Gupta

@ll_megha_ll

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Posted: 12 years ago

#38

finally vampu you update this.

it was awesome, blossom and amazing update dear.

such a lovely os.

riya andhi hai and arjun doesnt know.

when he knows he feels guity.

he goes to riya house and apologised.

arjun was madly in love with riya.

riya ka operation.

continue son.

and thanx for pm.

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IntrovertedDame

@IntrovertedDame

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Posted: 12 years ago

#39

Arrey, Vampy jii...delightful beginning. Aapka story baht hii interesting hai. Will come back for a detailed comment later😊

UNRES

Wow...kya concept hai! I AM LOVING IT!!!

So Riya is a blind girl and Arjun falls in love with her at first sight. Mast concept hai rey.

And I am so glad you covered the aspect of his guilt, and their first meeting was awesome!!!

Waiting for the next update...see you soon😉

Edited by Amri174 - 12 years ago

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abhya/akanksha

@Aks13

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Posted: 12 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: Vampire-queen

dhamkee queen anku 😉
aww dear i know u will never 🤗
thanks for the hearty comment dear 😳
wait for the next part!
Thanks again dear
readers like you are the strength of writers 😃

Yep that u r 😉 😆.

Lv u for that ❤️

U r most welcome.

Eagerly waiting as always!!!!!!!

Awww u r such a swthrt. Me blushing!!!!!