ll Ariya OS :: Fading Darkness ll Thank you note - page 21 - Page 2

Yippiee our dhamki queen is back with yet another mind blowing Ariya work.

Hey I will never forget u dr as u r one of the finest writer I cme across in IF.

Btw the concept n the update is super duper fab.

OMG Riyas blind. Loved her convo with her di.

FB was so senti.

Awww Arjun unknwingly hurted her frm his harsh words.

I hope that the operation will be successful.

Yayyy Arjun loves Riya n Sam knw about that.

Loved it to the core.

Thanks for pm sweeti.

Continue soon.

Plzzz never stop writing on Ariya.

Originally posted by: sumbulqaiser

nice

thank you di 😳

Originally posted by: srividhya68

awesome os

thanks 😳

Originally posted by: ShanayaShaleen

Awsum Os Vampu...Realllyyy Realllyyy vry vry vry Heartouchingg n Beautifulll...!!!! Arjun is really helplessly in luv...!!! Lovd Riya n Arjun! Infact Luv Ariya...Thanxx fr d pm..Continuee Soon!!

thank you shanaya!
Yes it is very touching for me also 😳

vampu sorry for short comments
I have alot of Pm and less time

hey dear
thnx 4 the pm and such an awesome parts
fantastic update
the starting intro of acp arjun was great
loved the way u expressed arjun's state of mind
to gain peace he concentrated on case
arjun smiling ...really a rare view to see
riya intro is apt,emotional and heart touching
the way riya is truely a great job done by u
annya di is a great chracter in the story
they way she handel riya and her emotion is purely brilliant
so annaya di is serious now tym to talk
riya too smiling...mindblowing
in hospital is that riya??????????????
as alwayz full of mystry u r dear
flashback was fantastic dear
arjun outburst on riya without any of her reasons...my poor riya baby
riya is really blind
annaya di is very much supporting
arjun and sam both guilty
arjun got riya's purse
arjun recognised riya through her perfume...mindblowing
arjun in riya's house to say sorry...gud boy
riya recognised arjun even without listening his voice...riya is great
arjun changed after meeting riya...amazing
continue soon dear
thnx once again
will be waiting eagerly 4 next update

Originally posted by: Aks13

Yippiee our dhamki queen is back with yet another mind blowing Ariya work.

Hey I will never forget u dr as u r one of the finest writer
I cme across in IF.

Btw the concept n the update is
super duper fab.

OMG Riyas blind. Loved her convo
with her di.

FB was so senti.

Awww Arjun unknwingly hurted her
frm his harsh words.

I hope that the operation will be
successful.

Yayyy Arjun loves Riya n Sam knw
about that.

Loved it to the core.

Thanks for pm sweeti.

Continue soon.

Plzzz never stop writing on Ariya.

dhamkee queen anku 😉
aww dear i know u will never 🤗
thanks for the hearty comment dear 😳
wait for the next part!
Thanks again dear
readers like you are the strength of writers 😃

It was awesome mindblowing

loved it

riya is blind

arjun shouted on riya but when he came to know that she was blind
he feel guilty

arjun cannot get riya out of mind
he is madly in love with her

waiting for next part

update soon

thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: sumbulqaiser

vampu sorry for short comments
I have alot of Pm and less time

i knw di! U were offline for many days!
N my PM box is like yours 😆
no problem 😛

Originally posted by: sharmaayushi

hey dear
thnx 4 the pm and such an awesome parts
fantastic update
the starting intro of acp arjun was great
loved the way u expressed arjun's state of mind
to gain peace he concentrated on case
arjun smiling ...really a rare view to see
riya intro is apt,emotional and heart touching
the way riya is truely a great job done by u
annya di is a great chracter in the story
they way she handel riya and her emotion is purely brilliant
so annaya di is serious now tym to talk
riya too smiling...mindblowing
in hospital is that riya??????????????
as alwayz full of mystry u r dear
flashback was fantastic dear
arjun outburst on riya without any of her reasons...my poor riya baby
riya is really blind
annaya di is very much supporting
arjun and sam both guilty
arjun got riya's purse
arjun recognised riya through her perfume...mindblowing
arjun in riya's house to say sorry...gud boy
riya recognised arjun even without listening his voice...riya is great
arjun changed after meeting riya...amazing
continue soon dear
thnx once again
will be waiting eagerly 4 next update

aww thank you so so so much varsha for the very detailed analysis of the update 😃
i am overwhelmed by your comment and i also think i need improve more on portraying the emotions of each person!
😳
and thank you so much for accepting the story as it is!
🤗
yeah mystery queen is back😆

thanks again for the very detailed review 👏

wow